by StoryTeller07
great story like how it is shapeing up the name change could do with sorting though
Love the total humiliation but would love to have more on Brian and teacher. Does he get her to submit to inspection before class...
A slow start while the characters and plot are defined but it does promise to be an excellent perhaps even a classic transformation story. I'm looking forward to reading future chapters.
ending it with a tear jerker,does not make it any less of a jerk's work through all the previous chapters!! ;))over the top vilest imagination of one helluva jerk writer!! ;))
But hero Brian cute and adorable..must admit!! muuaaahh!! :))
... attractive subs are in strong demand ... indeed plausible competition ... how does the plot continue?
RUBBISH. To much Brian , this was looking good untill the end . She needed to be used so you should of let her. Disappointed.