by BrightShinyGirl
My goodness have you been on a publishing roll lately. I liked the turnabout is fair play conclusion of this story. A brief bit of entertainment for us and I/we appreciate it.
Smart and sexy, as always. I have trouble believing the girls will be able to wait a month to get it on again. But Sarah will figure something out.
I liked it, cuckquean/cuckold startup to a story makes a good chapter 1 like to see where things lead.
LUV pic you pant of Sarah-petite tits & nips, natural pits, big hairpie...
and she goes both ways..
thought this was hot...
The part where he acts like a creep and both of them pass it off as 'men being horny' are both forced af. He never did show such tendencies before and Sarah being calm in that situation was weird too. It's just inserted to forcefully make them lesbians and justify throwing him out of the relationship
Great story! I hope the two women dump Ravi and go on to live a happy life together. Or maybe the MC finds a new guy who won’t be a rapist creep. Either way, MC can never trust Ravi again.
Maybe Sarah is a mind controller, or Ravi. It's clear that the main character is not.
Just a little over reaction here. I would have spent a
little more ink on the musty aftermath from fucking the night befor.
I thought the first sex scene was described too briefly. I like how skin color was introduced much later.
I doubt I would have uncovered her for a last look, almost certain that I wouldn't have jerked off onto her pussy and completely certain I wouldn't have kissed her, but there's Ravi in all of us boys--we would want to.
And the way Sarah let it go doesn't actually seem improbable: The reflex "not to make a scene" is very powerful, well-practiced and particularly for girls who to one degree or another are conditioned to be quiet, "ladylike" and not a little submissive to boys' sexual desires. It can be read as a mere tool to allow the girls to bond over boys' otherness and to go on to (at least for her) experiment sexually, but that is an uncharitable reading I think.
Nice work,
Awesome story and so well done. Just added you to my list of authors to follow. Such great storytelling with real characters that were enjoyable. Love it now need to read more of your stories. Cheers
Everyone's motivations were entirely believable. Narrator earns our trust quickly. Fun story, including nonchalant acceptance of female hairiness. Will check out your other stories!