All Comments on 'The Adventures of Futa-Girl 01'
by sajukno
- 7 Comments
Awesome!!! Keep going! Can't wait to hear more!
hahahaha, but friend, archaeologists study the material history of humans, not dinosaurs :D. It's a common mistake, but what you're thinking about is a paleontologist. I had to laugh, because I'm an anthropologist, and we joke about how everyone thinks that archaeologists study dinosaurs. It's not a hang up though, and doesn't get in the way, just a detail. either call her a paleontologist or better yet, say she found some old Homo or Australopithecus remains :). Makes me happy to see archaeologists alive and well in the world of erotic fantasy.
great story though. love the idea. and wicked hot. love a good futa! please publish moar soon!!! :D
I was going to make the same archaeologist/palaeontologist remark as the previous guy, but instead I'll just say that irradiating with gamma rays will never make an object "hot". They behave just like X-rays. Anyway, as you aren't exactly trying for believability I won't let it affect my vote score! More please!
You really set up some great characters. I'm looking forward to reading more.
Archaeologists don't study dinosaurs. Paleontologists study dinosaurs.
I liked the story. Full of action
Also gotta second the comment on how archaeology doesn't involve dinosaurs. It's only humans. Nice work everywhere else, though.