All Comments on 'The Beach House'

Amanda has an idiot for a lawyer. If the sperm donor was making $8000/more, it is reasonable to ask to $1500-2000/more in child support. That amounts to about $425K to $570K assuming interest is charged at 5%/or compounded. At a more reasonable 9%, the numbers are 600K to 800K. Settling for just 133K is ridiculous.

Was OK, very cut and paste. Hardly any romance, they met, dated and married. No dialogue.

teslaowner I spent time with a spreadsheet trying to get it believable I guess i didn't LOL again late night writing will do it every time. Thanks for the Math lesson (I used to teach math).

Happiest damned bitter/sweet porno I've ever read! thanks

Well written, but it is too straight to the happy ending.

Sometimes you just want a story that makes you feel good!

Another fantastic story, Dave!

good syuff

Not profound, but very sweet. So sweet, I will share it with my sweetheart. Thank you for this sweet story. And yes, she needs a better lawyer.

Five stars.

Nice heartwarming story.

While not technically incorrect, the inclusion of the "twins" tag was misleading.

I doubt that many people who seek out twin stories are looking for stories like this. I know I wasn't.

Sweet story. Liked that he knew the lyrics to their songs!

Amusing name for amelia's sperm donor, 'Dick' Wenig. The word 'wenig' is German for few, or a little bit.

Excellent story but a little too fast getting to the end, it seems a little too clinical. Still better than a 4 so it gets 5.

I _wanted_ to like this, but everything was just too easy.

You know, nothing really happened in the story. Some conflict would be nice. I kept waiting for some obstacle, something, but it never came.

I’ll try one more from you, I hope something happens.

Thanks for sharing your work.

There is a great idea here but it needs some more work. Some conflict, a lot of conversation, a lot less narration. 3⭐️

If you've read multiple romance stories you've read this one, it goes exactly the way you think it would. Very very predictable

I really like this one a lot. Keep up the good work.

MP

He didn't track down the sperm donor for the hell of it. He tracked him down so he could adopt Amelia.

What a wonderful story; keep up the good work!

Big_Tim99 well, yes,

but

Amanda had given up on finding him.

Thanks for the comment