All Comments on 'The Beginning Pt. 01'

After 22 years of marriage she just has to fuck a black guy. How stupid. It's difficult to find a first-time story that isn't cuck with a racial overtones. This one hit all the cliche and tropes. Garbage.

First step to ending a marriage, assuming the husband is alert enough to realize his wife is a cheating slut, and has the balls to dump her. Andre needs to meet Kevin's baseball bat and sweet little whore wife must be kicked to the curb. "I love my husband" while sucking another guy's cock. Obviously the next story will be about them fucking. What utter bullshit!

Terribly erotic. You better not keep us waiting long for Part 2!

You have to ignore the God fearing anonymous incel trolls who hate any thought of extramarital sex, but gladly beat their meat at Daddy fucking his daughter. They are a bunch of sick fucks

It started out promising it wasn't the usual story of this type. Then, it promptly slid right into that formulaic groove. Again, the same story, part 9,865,251. I won't even rate it.

Poorly written and heavily cliched *

Loved it, can't wait for part 2!

Terribly off-putting. White apologists wives who lie about their level of love they have for their poor pathetic insufficiently endowed and effeminate white husbands. Why do these women marry these losers to begin with? All they really want to do is control a white man. They are virtue signaling their dedication to the fantasy of social reconstruction. Interracial storyline, on the way to fetishism. Pap for the new world order of "someone else screwed up and now generations later the woke white wives must fix it!" 1☆

Very hot. Just do me one little favour. Give Kevin a backbone.

Oh wow. What a surprise! Another cheating, 'loving wife' story and a bbc.

Super HOT 🔥🔥 story!!!

Please, go on soon 😉👍

I didn’t understand Mary’s logic or explanation of how she loved Kevin her husband but they were “bored” “in a routine” “we had sex and enjoyed it”.

I predict Kevin will be encouraging Mary to enjoy the neighbor’s cock and give him sloppy seconds and cream pies.

Hopefully Kevin has been banging a few young women while away at work and that explains his “boredom and distraction” when having sex with Mary.

Another pathetic white cuck and whore go apeshit for the mystical lowlife Jamal. Ic69, a genuine sick fuck, continues to whine about nonexistent incels. Everyone knows all LW BTB fans are bitter old men.

Wow, loved evry sentence can't wait until you publish part 2

Twins for Mary, I predict.

Sigh....same shit,

There is an interracial category for a reason...

If you're going to write a three-part story, you might want to give them all the same title.

All these people complaining. Just go read something else! Some of us like having sex with different people while married. It's pretty hot. You should try it. ;)

Damn, this story is so good. The way you write the descriptions and dialogues makes it sexier and hotter. Very good writer. Can't wait to read next chapter