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Click hereHe pumped himself into her fast and hard with her head thrown back and eyes closed moaning her pleasure. Her nails dug into his forearms as his thrust turned powerful and erratic. Heavy groaning pants poured out of his mouth. He found he couldn't stop.
He looked down at her closed eyes, "Open your eyes." he grunted, "I want to watch you come apart."
Alexis opened her eyes, face flushed. His words more than his thrusts made the Earth stutter on its axis. Shockwaves splintered through her, ripping a heart shuttering orgasm from her.
Feeling her pulse around him, Richard advanced forward reveling in the ecstasy her body was pulling from him. Fire pooled low in his abdomen as he felt himself fall into the midnight of her eyes. His ears had a dull white noise filled with static roaring in his head. The way she came apart beneath him was his undoing. A shattering orgasm exploded out of him with his vein popping out of his neck and a rough growl propelled from his mouth.
Falling to the side, Richard was breathing heavily into the sheets. Alexis blinked at him then everything went black.
Waking up from their peaceful sleep, Richard pulled her closer to his body loving the feel of her bottom pressed against his cock. A satisfied moan greeted his ears as she snuggled into him.
"So what does this mean?" she asked as he placed a kiss to the back of her neck.
"I guess it means that I'll still be kicking your ass on Tuesday." turning towards him she shivered pressing those delectable breasts against him and throwing that leg over him.
"No, I mean between us." she laughed grinding her hot little pussy on his thigh.
"I guess we're just gonna have to wait and find out." he grabbed a handful, playfully jiggling her ass.
She was already wet for him. Richard guessed it was time to start round fifty seven as he maneuvered her atop him with a sinister smile.
- COMMENTS
Oh shit! One more great story droping two stars. Why start publishing a story if you can't finish it????
What you do is to leave every reader feel cheated for stated to read it only to be left in limbo. Shame!
I know people are getting on you for “copying” this story, and I know exactly which story, but I am here to say, “Thank You”! That other author started a good thing and left us hanging. I love where you are taking this and I can’t wait for you to finish. The sex scenes are hot and their chemistry is explosive. Again, thank you!
You have a real talent and skill for writing insanely hot sex scenes. The touches of BDSM made it even better. This story was a lot of fun and while there were some cliched elements overall I really enjoyed it. I like the characters too. There’s more to them under the surface and if you continue this story, I’d like to see more exploration of Richard and Alexis as characters.
I’d like to see smoother transitions between scenes and a little more description for scene establishment because sometimes it was confusing figuring out where characters were placed in relation to others, how much time passed between scenes, etc. So just a couple sentences or words that provide those establishing details would help a lot. I hope you continue with this story and I hope you keep writing. I’d love to see what you do next.
Where's the rest of the story? OMG. I'm hooked.
Yeah, that quota comment was a huge turn off for me. Can't turn my mind off enough to enjoy them as a couple anymore. Oh well
I think you did a great job; this is way better than the original. Thank you for picking up the torch
I was hoping he would propose. I was a little disappointed when the date was shortened with the use of a hidden vibrator. The sex scenes are super hot between them, but I just wanted a little more between them than that. I guess that's just me.