by YDB95
Fun story. Loved the last line. 4 little gold pointy things awarded.
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OG46
The goal here is to encourage authors. It was an ice plot, good clear and consistent characters and smooth reading. As much as I like giving 5's I can only give a 4. The story just seems to lack somethng, zest mabe. On the other hand this is a story hihgly recommended to other eaders who enjo well done romace stories.
- Too many characters? At least in the opening, I had to pay too much attention to who was who
- Agree with comment below that there's a lack of zest or zip
- The two main characters' relationship was charming.
Nice even keeled romanc. There were several false starts and love tag played along the way, but I’m glad that all’s well that ends well.