All Comments on 'The CEO Ch. 02'

Make it more interesting.......

Fantastic story, hopefully literotica doesn't take 2 moths again to post the next chapter!

Very erotic story and beautiful illustrations.

agreed really like this story line and hope it continues and please a little more frequently

Great story and great artwork. Hope to see many more chapters.

I don't like the part about sticking Betty in the trunk. It seems dangerous. Otherwise story is hot as hell.

For a start off handcuffs = bad, locking her in the boot of the car = stupid and dangerous.

As for what’s being done to Betty WTAF? Who the hell does he think he is? That’s just taking fucking humongous liberties!

The writing comes across as a bit dry and halting. Then again you seem to be writing about Stepford Bondage Wives. I don’t think this one is for me, I much prefer consensual sex or at worst reluctant.

Good luck with your writing, hope you’re having fun.

Tess (UK)

Well, that story certainly turned dark very quickly. What started out as a story about two women finding each other and taking turns with each other in playful ways, now has turned into something sinister. I have a couple of questions about Warren and how he is now dealing with Rene and Betty. Did he always have this dark side of his and what why has in not dominated his wife before now? Did he and Roger cook up this scheme before? Seems like a lot of bondage items came up suddenly. Betty is in for one hell of a ride if she is to be trained as a submissive slave. What will Jamie think of all this when he comes home, or is he involved somehow as well? Again love the illustrations that add so much to the story. I kind of think that we are going to go down a long dark set of activities for Betty. Not sure what will happen to Rene. They will both probably come together at some point in less than desirable situations.

hope to see it more often.

I love where this is going....

The tables turn.

Play into their fetishes....

So damn arousing!

Liked story just fine, but thought the cartoonish illustrations didn't add anything. Maybe real people would have been hot?