All Comments on 'The Christmas Present Cruise'
by sr71plt
- 6 Comments
Your stories often take an unexpected turn, and this one is no exception. I liked the outcome (no details to avoid spoiling the story for others), but I didn't care much for the drunken orgy. Not so much for the STD risk involved (after all this is a fantasy), but for the possible damage to his self esteem. Hopefully his mature lover will cherish him and make him happy.
Hmmm. Not sure how I feel about this story. I was uncomfortable with the orgy scene, as to me it seemed to be rape, even though the boy ended up liking it. I'm glad that manipulative SOB Wade didn't get what he wanted and I think Magnus will be a good, and non-manipulative, partner.
I really liked the main character-an inexperienced man trying to know his own mind and upon finding it staying true to it. Many a person has found his or herself in a place where they didn't expect to be and while finding themselves changed by it, {not necessarily for the worse} they grow. Love can be discovered in the most unusual circumstances with people yet unaware of its potential or its possibilities. This story illustrates something I've always held to be true-that being interesting starts with being interested.
As they say, "the road to happiness is strewn with difficulties and dangers."
a great story ,well written and a nice twist at the end and i share the main chatacters love of older men,well done.