All Comments on 'The Collaring of Chloe Ch. 27'

Mistress is starting to scare me.

Exceptionally well written but that’s hardly a surprise. Literotica appears to have dropped into the new version and I’m unable to give the story a rating?

4 stars. Must say this chapter made me incredibly uncomfortable, it looks like Chloe is getting what she asked for. Fingers crossed that it’s not more than I can handle.

Thanks for sharing.

Tess (uk)

They do still have the rating system. It may not have been implemented when you were in.

In regards to : Oh nos -

Mistress is meant to be very intimidating and imposing, intentionally meant to be very different from Master. I do think it's safe to say that Chloe is enjoying it though. :)

In regards to 'Exceptionally well written' -

Thank you Tess, I am very glad you enjoyed it. I'm hoping that the uncomfortable feeling is a good one and not something bad. While conflicts and drama is part of what keeps a story moving, I try not to make any of it too jarring or 'trigger-y'. I am trying to carefully dance the line with Victoria, making her definitely a much harsher and more intense Dominant than Master. While she is meant to make the reader a little uncomfortable, her intensity a vastly different one from Master's, I'm wanting it to be a 'good' kind of discomfort.

If it helps, I think people are assuming where this is going to go, but I think they may be a little wrong. Victoria is going to be a dramatic note, but possibly not in the typically expected way. :)

Thanks!!

You are very welcome. :)

Fuuuuuck! I finally caught up 😭

I take it you were hoping that I would put out chapters faster than you could consume them? Well, hopefully I'll be getting back into the groove with updating more often soon. There have been a lot of things slowing up my momentum the last year or so, but a lot of them have finally been clearing up lately. So, hopefully you won't have to wait too long.

Thank you for you comments. Glad you are enjoying the story.

Chloe is definitely going to be eating her words (maybe off the floor xD), lovely as always <3

Oh, I like to think that Chloe is a particular bit of heaven right now. This is the kind of intensity that she's been craving. Master is someone is very careful and caring, but Chloe has always wanted someone who makes her feel a little bit in danger. Thus: Mistress