All Comments on 'The Consequences for Amy'
by griver1
- 6 Comments
The phrase 'baby batter' should be an automatic -10,000 stars deduction. Like bad 70's porn dialogue.
The phrase ‘baby batter’ should be an automatic 10,000 stars. Like good 70s porn dialogue. 😂😂
In what world is 70s porn, shot on FILM and sometimes looking more beautiful than modern oscar fare, a bad thing lol
I actually came to the comments to say, “nice descriptions of their orgasms”
I think this story is well written. At least to an erotic sense. It kept me aroused from the gloves and boots to orgasm and ejaculation. Love to read a sequel or two. It's been a while since I read a story that went right to the meat on the story without a bunch of fodder to fill a page. Give me short titillating stories that exercise my senses everytime!!