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Click here"No. Didn't touch them. They screwed up. And call me Rick."
The guy smiled. "Alright Rick. Why don't you grab your wallet and we can get this sorted out."
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It didn't take long at all. Tom made the call to D&G. He had the video with him when he showed up a half-hour later. I'd spent the time in the interrogation room, chatting with Officer Shea, and enjoying a surprisingly good cup of coffee.
While we'd been at dinner, I'd had the P.I.s reinstall the video cameras at home. It was all there in full HD color. Their discussion, where once again I'll have to admit, Shelly did try to talk some sense into my wife. She wasn't listening. Shelly was reluctant, but she took the sock with a bunch of coins in the end, and gave me wife a good solid beating. By the end of it Danielle was crying, writhing on the floor, and Shelly gave her a couple of more good ones. "It's gotta look good, Dani."
Danielle wasn't gentle when she gave Shelly a couple of shots. Those supposedly came when Shelly tried to intervene, to stop me from killing my wife.
The assistant D.A. was called in for what would normally be a very high profile case. We had a discussion, and he was willing to go along with what I wanted. I was released, of course, and my wife and Shelly were picked up.
I wasn't surprised when I got the phone call.
"Honey?" Danielle said softly. "I was stupid again. You've gotta help me."
I worked out the details, and at 9:12 am the following morning, I had two beautiful, haggard, lingerie clad, repentant women in my car, and I was $10,000 poorer, after paying their bond.
~ * ~ * ~
"No chance at all for us? I know I screwed up, but you have to know I love you," Danielle whined.
"No baby. It's over. Go along, sign the papers, don't make a fuss, and the charges will be dropped. That was really stupid, you know."
She nodded, took the pen and signed. "I wish it didn't have to be like this."
"Me too. You went too far, too many times."
"You're not going to get Shelly in trouble are you? She didn't want to go along."
I laughed. "Actually, I think I'm going to thank her. There's been a few times in the last few months, when I wish I could have given you the beating she gave you. It looks like it really hurts."
She pouted. "No shit. She beat the hell out of me. I think she cracked one of my teeth."
"She's gonna be sporting that black eye you gave her for a while."
"She deserved it. She didn't have to be so rough." She looked up at me, neatening the papers. "You're not going to leave me high and dry, are you?"
"You're the mother of my children. We'll get you setup somewhere nice. You might think about moving in with Shelly. It'll give the two of you a lot more disposable income, and the kids like her."
"How much am I gonna get to start with?"
"Your car of course, I'll buy you out of the house, half of our savings and investments. None of the 401K. I put $200K in educational trusts for each of the kids, so that will put a dent in things, but at least you won't have to worry about contributing to their college education, it's taken care of."
"So how much, do you think?"
"Probably a little more than $300K," I told her.
She pouted. "Is that all we have? I know the last few months were expensive, when you weren't working, but I thought for sure we had more than that."
"We'll see what the house comes in at. I probably should pay you for half of the furnishings. You'll get to keep your jewelry and clothing. I don't think there's any way it's going to amount to more than $400K. We'll work out the details on splitting up things from the house when you're settled in. Let's try to keep things as friendly as possible, for the kids sake."
"Don't you still love me, even a little? I love you."
"I'll always love you, Danielle. You were my first true love, and gave me a dozen good years. You blessed me with two wonderful children. Right now, the hate and disgust seriously outweigh the love, but I imagine in time, those will fade."
"I am sorry. I never meant for it to get carried away like that. God, I could kill Shelly for getting me hooked on those big dicks. She fucked up everything!"
I chuckled. She still wouldn't take responsibility for anything. "She screwed up. She knows it. She's paid a pretty steep price."
She reached out and grabbed my hand. It made my skin crawl. "You want to go back in the bedroom? One last hurrah for old time's sake?"
"That wouldn't be a good idea. I don't want you to get the wrong idea. We won't be having sex again. We may be able to be friends again, in time, but that part of our relationship ended as soon as you turned to Meat for your needs."
"And now the bastard up and disappeared again. Well fuck him. I can do better."
I pulled my hand away from hers. "I know you can. You were a beautiful woman. You let yourself go, but you could be gorgeous again. Drop 30 or 40 pounds, and you'll clean up nice."
She glared at me. "I don't need to lose 40 pounds!"
I looked her up and down, without replying. Between losing the club membership, eating Francine's full-octane cooking, and business meals, she needed to go shopping again. The last week hadn't helped. She'd sought solace in food, before finally submitting to the inevitable.
"How much longer can I stay in the guestroom?"
"Until the end of the month. That'll give you three more weeks."
"Can't you wait until I leave, before moving that hussy in my place?"
That 'hussy' was glaring at her from the couch. "Don't push it, Grandma."
Danielle turned red, and I knew she was about to blow up. I put my hand on hers. "Tell you what. If you can find a place to move to within a week, I'll talk to Jenny and see what we can do."
"Damn it, Ricky!" Jenny snapped. "You promised! If you don't straighten up, I'm going to make sure you regret it!"
Danielle was consoled, and Jenny gave me a wink. She wasn't moving in until her lease was up at the end of the month anyway. Let Danielle think she'd won one.
"We had a good run, didn't we?" Danielle said, looking at me wistfully.
"We did. I'm sorry I picked up that escort."
"I guess we're both sorry about a lot of things. I never meant for it to happen. I hope everything works out for you."
I heard the door open, and the kids came rushing in. Teri waved from the door.
"I owe you one, Teri," I called out.
"You owe me more than that, trouble maker." She closed the door behind her as she left.
The kids got their hugs from everyone, then disappeared into the kitchen. Francine had promised she'd teach them how to make homemade pizza.
Jenny stood, stretching, her amazing body on display. "Let's go, stud. Time for me to work you out." She gave me a wink, and Danielle sighed.
"Fuck. All that effort to get you buff, and none of it for me," she whined.
I laughed and followed my soon-to-be live-in trainer down to the dungeon. I knew what kind of workout she had in mind, and I was eager to get it started.
~ * ~ * ~
Tom sat across from me, in my office. "You're the luckiest bastard I know. Seriously. You install cameras to find out their plans, and they get caught in a felony on video."
I laughed. "I'm not going to argue. What's the word on Meat?"
"Two weeks of surveillance, with the evidence delivered to the appropriate people, did the job. When he got out of the hospital, he disappeared. Rumor has it one of his testicles is missing, and the other isn't working all that well."
"Do we know who did it? Should I be sending someone a thank you note?"
"No need. It's a small world, you know. He was very happy to get the evidence he needed. An old client, he's back in the fold. Apparently he had allowed his slut-wife's brother to handle his legal work. Now that she's out of the picture, he claims he needs a real law firm. He says you know him."
"That wouldn't be Danvers, would it?"
"Right the first time. His hands are clean, but apparently a few of the guys that work for him took matters into their own hands, when they found Meat raping the bosses wife. He was happy to pay us to represent the guys in court. Once Meat disappeared, there wasn't enough evidence to convict any of them. Too bad, huh?"
"Yeah. My heart bleeds for the bastard."
"You gonna keep your nose clean for a while? The D&G guys are getting rich off of us."
"I hope to God, I never have to use their services again. At least not personally."
"Good. Are you really going to run the Boston Marathon?"
"Jenny insists. I don't know why. It's not like I'm ever going to be competitive. She says I'm her ultimate testimonial. Turning a fat old man into a marathon runner."
"Nobody's gonna deny she did a hell of a job on you. I may have to hire me my own Jennifer."
I laughed. "Angela would string you up by the balls."
He grinned. "Yeah, there is that. A guy can dream, can't he?"
"As long as it's only a dream."
~ * ~ * ~
Epilogue:
I stood clapping as Eric accepted his diploma, Erin stepping onto the stage behind him. I heard a less than ladylike whistle from beside me, and Jenny sounded her approval. Little Ricky was standing on his seat beside her, waving his arms in the air. "Go Eric!" he screamed. I grinned as he turned to the people seated beside us. "That's my brother!" As Erin walked forward, his tune changed. "Way to go, Erin!"
Not to be left out, I waved my arm in the air, whooping it up. I'm sure I was embarrassing them to death. Hey, that's all part of being a Dad, right?
I looked to my left, and saw the tears running down her face.
I put my arm around her and gave her a hug. "We did good, beautiful."
The smile she gave me ended at her lips. Her eyes betrayed her sadness. "What do I do now?" she said softly. "My babies are all grown up."
"You move on, and if you don't mind my saying so, it's about time. You're only 45, Danielle. Take Jenny up on her offer, she'll whip you into shape. And don't tell me you can't afford it, she'll do it free of charge. If you were to lose 60 pounds, you'd have the men lining up to chase you again."
She snorted. "That's easy for you to say, Mr. Lean Mean Running Machine. You have no idea how hard it is to lose weight."
I stared at her, and watched her blush. "Alright, maybe you do."
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- COMMENTS
mainly I liked it. If you take requests for finishing stories then pls finish neighbor chronicles chapter 11 is in need of a chapter 12 lol
What dumbass his wife cheater always cheater you reap what you sow, rick is cruel n asshole but him have common sense, this really hurt fact his wife always denied. Great work... Damn ass big dick ruins everythig hahhahh
I disagree with TrainerOfBimbos; the author spent the previous chapters planting the seeds that showed that the anger was always there, and that any slippage in the wrong direction was going to end the marriage. Putting the cameras back in was a smart move by a guy who had showed himself to be well-prepared. The rest was just straight-forward reaction to what the wife did. I could see the situation with Shelly going either way; he showed restraint with her. 5**
I loved this part, and was surprised that Shelly didn't use a cast iron frying pan on Dani when they were beating each other up to make it look like Rick did it to them. I thought it was funny as hell, and all of it caught on camera. Of course she got hooked on big cocks, and being treated like a complete slut. She was tired of being a good upstanding wife who really didn't have to work for a living being a volunteer. She quickly learned the difference from working part time to working 12 hour days. I thought the end was a little rushed, but for the most part everything that needed to be said was already said. Plus it was more of a quick wrap up of the story after the divorce happened. Thanks for fixing a really lame story with a much better version of it, even if it took you quite a few chapters to do it. I personally liked the wife getting the "high octane" food while him and the twins got the low cal stuff. Add in all of the "chips" that he earned being used on other women really had to get the wife's goat. Thanks for sharing it with us, I really enjoyed your part of the story, and give it a 10 for both the writing and the imagination to make it all work out like it did. Great work.
That ending... wow. Honestly, it reads like satire. I mean, I don't mind it going in the BTB direction at all, but it was so abrupt considering the 2-3 chapters that preceded it and unlike the previous chapters, it was just chocked wall to wall with LW tropes and cliches. Honestly, I'm just going to try and forget about the ending because it was so unsatisfactory.
Hahaha god damnit I knew how this was going to end but I convinced myself I would be in for a surprise
I liked this story until the "she is mistreated used as a piece of meat and loves it, is instantly changed and can't get enough of being treated that way" As soon as I see this I know it's just some dudes kink wish.
This story took 7 chapters to put this silly sinario out! As soon as they never went to counseling I should have known it was the simple "kink" story.
For those who do not know, the author "FinisTheDamStory" has been past away for some time now. I l9ve reading his stories. You may not like the characters and their actions, but the story flow and character insight are bar none. Their are a lot of good writers on this sight, but very few deliver such fascinating stories that other writers fail to realize from their own works. I encourage you the review his works, and then go back to the original stories and enjoy the magic that this wonderful soul brought to this platform.
Lame. Although you've got talent, your MCs typically are passive-aggressive hypocrites. It's a shame most of your hijacked stories follow the same path.
It is clear that you can write. What is baffling is why do you choose to write such garbage and why must you make all your characters deplorable with no redeeming qualities what so ever.
"Why did you have to ruin me? I did not deserve it" said the whore that humiliated, belittled and sexually abused him, not to mention cheated on her husband. If a man were to squeeze some precum and wipe it on the upper lip of a woman or a man that would be sexual harassment, but when she does it and sufferes the consequences "she didn't do anything to deserve being ruined".
This all points to one simple conclusion, the author has subscribbed to the philosophy of the famous cum sucker Wimpy Cuckistan, the original cuck, and is doing his very best to proove that he is the biggest cuck in history. That or the biggest feminazi in history.
Either way, it is clear the author is devoid of common sense and even the faintest notions of morality, equality and justice.
All of this is reflected in almost every aspect of the story. Even the parts where the mc seemingly grows a backbone read more like "ha, i'll prove her i'm strong! I know the perfect revenge on both of them! I'll get on my knees, unbuckle his pants, suck the bulls cock and after he cums in my mouth i'll look them straight in the eye and spit the cum in a napkin! I won't swallow! That will absolutelly ruin them! I am the wisest strongest man imaginable!".
This is my second read through. Still a 1 star for me, especially this last chapter. Yes the wife did something despicable and yes the husband deserved some bit of revenge yada yada. I just never enjoy a story where the MC ends up being just as big a piece of shit, or in this case a way bigger piece of shit than anyone else. Also this last chapter I feel like the writer just ran out of ideas or was bored with this story. Such a shit ending for what was presented in previous chapters. The ending made absolutely no sense for what everyone went through, to just toss it all away on some way out there turn of events. After reading this a second time I went back to all the previous chapters I had given better marks to and changed them to 1 star.
Scorched earth is not my typical response, but the cheating slut didn't get her due
Well done.
I love that Dani's heel turn was foreshadowed in the early chapters. Dani could be over-the-top, unreasonable and demanding, she shows us this in the infamous contract. What a crazy response to a husband cheating once with a hooker. Then, Dani was on tape wanting and seriously enjoying what Meat had to offer, and she and Shelly lied, so that she could get some strange (some big) again. This was while Rick was helping Shelly and trying to get along with Dani. She got mad that the boy-toys were run out of town, instead of being humble and contrite and realizing that that was probably for the best. Then she lied over and over, saying she never wanted to hurt him, she did not want big meat, etc., when she absolutely wanted both. She lied to herself and to Rick, or, only to Rick, but she lied, and then pursued what she wanted eventually. She "only" had Meat three more times after the reconciliation was well under way. What a turn. The fake assault was almost over-the-top, but so was the first contract. Dani had promised to ruin him at that point. Making the battery charge work might ruin Rick without necessarily revealing Dani's sluttery, if she could shame him about it.
It seems a shame that her heel turn came so late in the game, but I think that reveals that she was lying to herself AND to Rick about her sexual desires. The content of the DVDs were not burned into her brain in the same way that they were burned into Rick's. She lived the pleasure, but that memory faded as the cost became apparent. Rick's nightmare was harder to forget, it WAS the cost, it was the burn he felt.
Rick was no angel either. His sins are apparent, and his revenge was also tough on the intended target. It is important that he held onto his sense of self enough that he was calm when it came time to end things. He stood and made things go the way he needed them to go.
I enjoyed reading this long attempt at a resolution that became a dissolution. Five for you.
Oof. This story started out strong then got worse and worse. Angela was right, Rick was a total fucking asshole too and no one called him on it. And Dani's heel turn at the end is ridiculous. It's like you were building towards reconciliation and suddenly decided you had to have a reason to burn her. Just disappointing.
yikes!!!!!!!! wayy too much of the same old crap telling a very common story.
Please Lit writers who read this - longer is definately not necessarily better!
Who cares about Dani?……Shelly was the top fuck and got along with all size dicks! Women orgasm solely from clitoral stimulation working with mental arousal. Most accomplished ‘stick men’ wield Normal …around 6 inch tools that are usually around 2 inches in diameter…..and just under 6 inches in circumference. That size tool can be put wherever the owner wants it. Did you ever hear of a woman giving birth having an orgasm. The lesson?……learn how to use the paint brush to paint a masterpiece. Brooms won’t work very well. Size queens mostly populate sites like LITEROTICA. R. H.
The husband had an irrational amount of tolerance for his wife's abhorrent behavior. Her third time with "Meat" should have killed things. Completely. What did her gain by delaying things? Would have been similar outcomes regarding custody and assets. She woukd try to scorch earth him. He had the videos. He might have lost his senior partnership. But there was no way to know that if he wanted that there would be the attempted abuse claim. He already had time to shift his assets around including the educational trust. What Dani did was so repulsive. And so far over the top. Delaying things didn't help anything. And probably made things more acrimonious. On a separate note, the "cosmic" sex with the 12 inch endowed Meat is a stupid trope. Large scale studies of sexually active women show that while size does matter, too much is also not a good thing. 45% of women in the study (subjectivel) assert they have had at least one well endowed experience with a 10 inch or large penis and of those more than 40% were not satisfied or did not enjoy it with pain being the leading reason why. Note most of those 45% of women in the study size of 1400 women, almost certainly did not have sex with such larger endowed partners. Why? Statistics. The odds of a man having a 10 inch penis are like 1 in 100,000 to 1 in a million. Forget the 12 inch LW trope. So there is a clear bias that the larger a penis, the even larger yet again that the women inflate the penis size. So a 10 inch monster becomes a 12 inch freak of nature. A 9 inch penis becomes 10.5 inches. And so forth. Therr are.not enough men alive and sexually active with 10 inch or longer cocks to service 40+% of women even once. Hence the strong subjective bias. Other findings from the same study show the Goldilocks region for maximal satisfaction is 6 to 8 inches which is certainly higher than the 5 1-5.5 inches of an average penis. Furthermore, over 50% of women claim that they wil nit be maximally satisfied with a 9 inch cock, rapidly increasing to 90% at 12 inches (which again besides a dildo, how would they know for sure?). Finally less than 3% been a 11 inch or 12 inch cock to be fully satisfied. So apparently slut Dani fell into that 3% category. Bit surprising given that so MANY LW stories on this site feature mega cocks and the cheating wives who once they get a taste, become addicted. Heck it sounds like once Meat came back, Dani was banging him regularly (how did she defeat the GPS tracking?) like several times a week for the last 4-5 weeks. She was the LW prototypical big cock junkie who destroyed her marriage and her family life. Ironically those cocks don't exist with enough frequency to support these common occurrences in these stories. And even if they do only a tiny fraction of women want sex with such well endowed men to be fully satisfied, and the vast majority fear it and of those who claim to have experienced it, almost 50% did not enjoy it. So yeah the LW trope about big cock addiction is alive and well...but utterly ludicrous. At least he ends up with Jenny. Crazy story of patience and forbearance that ended in shit. Dani is a delusional btich with big cock syndrome. Somehow one time.ruins her forever snd she can't help herself. Whatever.
I have to say... you could've posted this as chapter two or three, and NOTHING of the story would've been lost. I'm serious.
I read this long repetitive story because I like the way you usually portray the wronged men as men rather than indecisive wimps. I was greatly disappointed in this man's whishy washy mindset. His wife threw him away and he kept giving her chance after chance when he knew in his heart she was lost to him.
i want to make clear that my 1 star is because the author turned from backbone to the classic "cuckfagshit". The rest of the story is about a guy that thinks he has a backbone but has none, he's a wimpy cuck and deserved every painful and hurtful think that was thrust upon him. He was yellow through and through, piss drinking yellow that is. And you, well, your comment says alot about you.
I want to be clear that my 1 star is only for this chapter. The rest of the story is fantastic! I just don't understand why the author had to tack on this chapter which does not really work with the rest of the story and is just kind of a BTB ending.
To be fair, the author has been telegraphing for the last couple chapters that something does not jibe. The explanations given by Danielle and Shelly as to the third time Danielle cuckolded Rick make little sense (We already had the appointment and just went ahead with it, but did not humiliate you or make you watch once we figured out we were wrong about you wanting to be a willing cuckold-- so no biggie---WTF!!!). The fact that Rick eventually gave up asking about the real reasons for the third encounter could be seen as a sign of his healthy recovery from his trauma (and perhaps PTSD) - he no longer needs all the answers and is willing to reconcile without them. His recovery is far from complete--he still tracks Danielle obsessively--but progressing.
i can see one other purpose to the ending. At the end, Rick has no choice but to face up to his own SPH and feelings of inadequacy. At least in Daniella's case, the comfort offered to Rick that size does not matter is once again ripped away. That he is able to accept himself and move on is perhaps the greatest evidence that he has finally healed and come to terms with what was done to him. Danielle talks like she has a mental breakdown at the end, and we recognize with Rick that her size obsession is her problem, not Rick's. Comfort to all of us (the vast majority) without 12 inch cocks.
Yet it is almost like someone convinced the author that he had not made Danielle and Meat suffer enough for their sins, so he came up with this. The brutal attack on Meat is beyond even Rick in the rest of the story and the device the author uses to let Rick remain "innocent" of it is not very convincing.
Up to now, the third encounter is the only hint we have that Danielle is a size queen. It undermines the story's conceit that all this pain is the result of s tragic mistake that must be forgiven, if it can never fully be forgotten.
Some of the commentators have complained about the length and repetitiveness of the story as a whole. I think this misses an important point about this genre. This is, until the last chapter, a well told and carefully planned story that has a lot of psychological insight, despite some somewhat contrived sex scenes used to deliver major revelations. It is after all also fetish erotica. One aspect of the unwilling cuckold/cheating wife genre is the readers desire to experience Rick's trauma/humiliation/anger again and again. That can make the story repetitive and at times make it seem like the the same points are revisited over and over, and that the main character is trapped and unable to move forward. At times, if the reader is actually looking for an eventual reconciliation ( after the cheaters have done their penance), the cuckold's anger may even make one cringe. I could do without all the "slut" and "whore" language; it is not necessary in order to feel Rick's pain and humiliation and makes me cringe a bit. Yet, I suspect that the constant revisiting of trauma anger and and the same issues over and over again is probably something who have had a spouse cheat on then actually experience. Rick is beyond humiliated and angry; I think he is probably suffering from PTSD. But I think that the critics who have focused on the repetitiveness are missing the fact this is not the author's failure, but a fairly standard feature of this type of genre fiction.
Personally, I do not read these stories primarily for the BTB element. The pain and trauma and penance is a fetish element, but I like best those where the characters try to find a way back to each other and overcome the betrayal. That is ultimately why I loved this story, but was disappointed by the last chapter.
Nevertheless, let me empadize once more--Great story, just one bad chapter.
Wonderful story until the last chapter, when it just goes off the rails completely. It could be shorter, but was good u til yjis point
I gotta tell ya...I was grooving on this story, but found myself getting bored a few chapters in. So much so, that I just read the chapter summaries, then came here to read the comments in order to figure out what happened.
There just seemed to be a whole whole lot of spinning wheels here, without getting any where.
Fred Brown that was hilarious! It was a little long for what we got from the story. But I like the highlights.
Stupid me, I had the impression that "legal eagle" types had something on the ball but In this case, we have two that shouldn't be let out at night without adult supervision.
Try as I might I can't give this sad tale more than three stars ........
So much for second chances. Second chances just gives a person that treated you horrible another shot at doing it all over it again. Trust is relying on the integrity or ability of another person. Your ability to truly trust someone is based on their character, not yours. Trust is earned, not freely given. If you blindly give your trust without first having confirmation on a persons character or integrity you're just setting yourself up. As Dr House use to say, "everyone lies".
Figured Danielle would never be able to give up her desire for "big" cocks. Letting Shelly back into her life was a big mistake if she was serious about saving her marriage. Guess now we know she wasn't serious about staying faithful. It was about her getting her big piece of "cake" and having it too. Offering up Shelly wasn't much of a consolation prize to her husband. Why stay with one cheating slut just because she offers you another slut. Not when there's hot, young and very fit Jenny who wants him. If you have to get rid of a cheating older wife so much better when the replacement is younger, fitter, prettier and faithful. Nice twist having Danielle be the fat one now over weight by 60 plus pounds at the end. If she wants to continue to pursue "big" cocks she'll have to find a big cock guy that's into plus size women.
He's still a cuckold. How can you still love someone who is willing to do such horrid things to you? Plus he only turned her down AFTER she cheated again. A wimp, a loser, a waste of time.
Ugh. Just simply ugh. Bloated, vapid, repetitive, back and forth. Dumb decisions all around. The night mythical 12 inch penis trope (that would be less than 1 in million odds without some surgery). The wife who experienced it once cannot stop lying and is addicted. All the cuckold crap. Revenge nonsense. Just uggh. 1/5.
This may be the ultimate "make a silk purse out of a sow's ear" story. The original was a bit stomach churning and FTDS took on a huge challenge to finish/change it to make it pretty satisfying. I think other commenters are right: it could have been shorter, BUT FTDS is such a good writer that I enjoy his long meanderings.
We all know FTDS is no longer with us and everyone surely misses his great efforts. Thanks, FTDS. Tanglosax
Good god! FinishTheDamnStory should have taken the advice of his nomdeplume and done some serious editing of this bloated epic. His writing is generally good but this was just set-indulgently long! And shame on him breaking it up into a series rather than just chapters leading the reader into part after part. Call the damn thing a novel and be honest with the potential reader.
Well written, it too long. Last 2 chapters could have been edited more carefully (Tina became Teri, etc). Think counseling should have been added into the attempted reconciliation mix. However, the videos of Danielle were really too graphic, and emotionally hurtful to overcome. There needed to be some better "time events" to indicate the passage of time. Was Rick out of his job for 3 months?
Jenny's moving in and subsequent marriage and child could have been expanded.
All-in-all, a satisfying ending to the original story.
mfj
This should have ended 3-4 chapters ago.
If I nursed my drinks like this I could make my first shot last an entire night.
I have been reading a lot of Lit stories since Covid gave me time to do it.
In the hundreds of stories I've read, I cannot think of a character I hate more than the self-centered asshole Rick. I felt bad for him in the first few chapters, let him have his time to figure out what he felt and what he was going to do. Even though he hired a whore instead of talking with his wife. His hands weren't clean, either. But after the effort he made to make everyone's life miserable who was in his universe, I was rooting at the end for him to get hit by a truck in a crosswalk and be a quadriplegic. He just wanted to drag down everyone around him instead of what he did.
Fuck Rick in the ass.
Oh, and 5 stars to the author that made me get so pissed off at an imaginary character.
That's good writing.
Daniella really went off the deep end which was surprising. Excellent story, I couldn't see him staying with either.
ok story,but way to drawn out,so much so lost lost track of it, you made it clear he warned both of them if they screwed him over again he would destroy them,you also made sure we knew that he had set things up that she would get little or nothing from the marriage and what was with 'John'. Funny way to destroy her/them by paying bail to get them out and handing over$400,000 plus bonuses for doing exactly what he said he would destroy them for. Hell i'd cheat for that kind of punishment. Suggestion, keep the story short so you do not lose track of what you where setting up earlier for in the story..
Other than being way too long,the characters were memorable in this sometimes sleazy story. Rick was a dick! High-powered lawyer? Your sister’s ass! As soon as the cunt wife threatened him with her bullshit ultimatum,he should have shut her down and drop-kicked her to the curb.
I worked out the details, and at 9:12 am the following morning, I had two beautiful, haggard, lingerie clad, repentant women in my car, and I was $10,000 poorer, after paying their bond
…that …there is what an honest cuckold wimp looks and behaves like!!
This was a great ending to a decent story, but he gave her more chances than I could have.
Went too soft on her (no pun intended) at the end. His wife deserved the nuclear package. Yes he cheated first, and she had the right to retaliation. But he was discreet, she wasn't. But then I'd never agree to that contract to begin with...
Way to long! If you were to consolidate all of the whining about “she lied to me” and “she humiliated me” and “she made me clean her up afterwards “ and “what about the third time” down, this sequel could have been 2 chapters shorter. Started off really strong, ended with a whimper. A man that was that angry and pissed off would have never let her off that easy. Or her shitty friends.
PS - who the fuck is John?!?
I believe that for Daniele to fal again she must have a chemical imbalance like manic depression. It could be viewed that what my wife did was quite similar, and I am pretty sure she was manic. This was over at least a 3year period and I was quite unaware.
Brilliant! Possibly your best effort. The longest, for sure. Five stars seems so inadequate.
I wasn't into the first couple of chapters, don't like cuckolding. I decided to stay with it and kept reading. Story got interesting and I had to keep reading. Danielle was a piece of work. Kind of hard to feel sorry for her. I believe in second chances but she had so many more. Good last chapter. gave it a 5*
DG Hear
Danielle was one dumb bitch, her mate Shelly not much better.
They deserved what they got in the end.
Just too damned stupid frothier own good.
The big dick trope is just so well used these days.
Why would anyone fuck over their entire LIFE for a fuck with a big dick.
Only happens in Lit. That’s for sure.
Great story, the first on Literotica to make me take stock of my life and want to be healthier. So, thank you for finishing the damn story, though I am still feeling queezy about the whole thing.
Also, skruff101 - you are absolutely right about false statements, however, in most states it is not a crime at the investigatory level and the primary prosecution would be regarding the false accusations (which need a complaining/damaged party). Given the state of the court and penal system, a plea deal would almost certainly be reached. In the case that you are dealing with lawyers at two prominent law firms (at least one of which does criminal defense), it would be in the interest of the prosecutor's office and the specific prosecutor to allow a settlement on the issue as it would be a waste of public resources since the injured party seemingly would line up in support of the defense.
liked it, but I would not have done that ending. I would have had Rick & Tom have Meat killed, and then Rick and Dani stay together, but Rick saying whenever Dani needed to get stretched, Rick should be there, and gets to watch. No humilation or put down downs though. Some of us little dick guys really DO like to watch, and don't mind sharing, but we don't want to be disrespected or made fun of. Cuckolding can work with the disrespecting
Danielle proved, once again, she's a lawyer, but really nothing but a whore. Hope she finds something big enough to literally tear her apart, and maybe make her push up daisies... Rick could have hired her out and made a fortune. It would be good to see her seriously torn up, with the impossibility of getting better. Suffer bitch, you can't suffer enough.
Well I'm only 8 years late, but yeah, I liked this. Thanks for finishing out a story that kept on the ridiculous but at least emotionally consistent side of things.
Worth the read, I didn't hate everyone, and I felt like justice was served. Thanks for the good read.
Not being from the US I’m unsure how the law works there, but she made false statements to the authorities, once that happened it should have been out of his control.
Conspiracy to pervert the course of justice I would imagine be dealt with quite severely, he could have no influence on the consequences of that.
Finally
She couldn't do it. Afterall her promises of reconcilliation, all that she was going to do to get back tp normal, she spread her legs again for the big dick. She was just a lying, cheating, hypocritical piece of cheating cunt shit. Great ending.
I enjoyed/loved every damn word! I wasn't able to finish the entire writing last evening & had a bear cat of a time remembering where your writings were located!! Ha! Good ending, I enjoyed the fact that a man came out on top. I'm on my 2nd marriage, unfortunately I was not in a position to hire P.I. S' to track my 1st wife nor the funds. I read about your author & that you are/were the ghost writer, sometimes. Hopefully, you'll strike out on your own to more excellent writings! I do agree with other comments that "Rick" after the wife's 1st sex session he should have kicked her to the curb. Thank again, Karl
The problem is, she really got by with her slutting around and really didnt pay for it other then a divorce. And frankly that should have been expected.
The husband was written as far to wimpy.
No real life man would have even lasted after the first time.
This is one of my favorite stories. It has some holes but in the main, holds together very well. Read it numerous times, which is a sign to me of a very good and satisfying story. Wish FTDS had not retired. 5 stars.
Wimpy.....
No revenge for multiple and repeated betrayal, humiliation, blackmailing and criminal conspiracy
Still drown in whore's fake love
Fairly content w/ the story as put forth by FTDS, generally like and approve of his work. That said, I would really like to be able to talk to women who had experienced a multitude of dicks especially several w/ some big dicks, whatever size that might be. I expect a big dick will feel different than anything average but is it/ are they as wonderful and addictive as all these LW stories make them out to be. Women losing their rationality and intelligence(limited as that is) at the sight or especially after experiencing a big dick seems very far fetched. I do personally know of one marriage that broke up cuz the husband spent the minimum amount of time foreplaying(eating out)the wife before inserting his so called big dick into his wife and raming(my word)her until he came, then rolling off satisfied he'd done her good and pleasurably. He'd frequently bragged about his dick size(i was roommate) but i'd never seen him erect, BUT his wife complained about painful sex, unsatisfying sex(no orgasms of any sort), awfully fast sex, nothing good about any of the sex, and finally, she had a one night stand rubbed in her husbands face to force a divorce just to get free from either his self-centered sex or his big dick. She claimed that his attitude seemed to be that his dicksize would provide all the pleasure she needed. So I'd like another female opinion.
You guys love writing tales about size queens.
All a fallacy.
I enjoyed the story, it had a bit of everything, just how I like them.
Scores 5/5, well done.
I can buy the Dani from the original story doing this, but the one from the last 7 parts who'd been desperately trying to atone and fix her marriage falling off the wagon at the drop of a hat feels pretty weak. Probably a better ending than reconciliation for the angsty Rick, but it felt railroaded by egregious stupidity. Especially the attempts at framing him for battery, those came across as the actions of replacement characters. Bit of a blasé end for something that was stretched out so long. Good in the middle, though.
I’m sorry loved the story but she need to burn just a bit more in the end. She was truly not a very good person at all. Shelley she needed some fear too.
Yes I like others are wondering who John was, but I have a theory. It was that guy she ended up working for. The way she got that nice job, and the long hours she was doing to start with...working on the weekends? Yeah that's when I knew where this was going.
But yeah, he was harping about it a loooong time before he finally ended things, but he was right that what she did the second and third time proved their marriage was over. He was being waaaay more generous than I think most of us would have been given the situation.
I do get that being a senior partner and all, he had to keep things on the dl, so that explains some of his reluctance, considering the fortune he'd be making. I honestly think he should have gone nuclear when she finally came back round to what the cheating whores always say: "don't or you'll lose everything". Yeah it always comes to that. She never really blamed herself for what happened, despite what she claimed, and she would not have hesitated to f*ck him in the ass hard in the divorce if she could have despite her supposed "guilt" and supposedly still "loving" him.
I realize this is just a story, but we all know Women tend to be that way, especially where divorce is concerned. That's why I know I'm slightly sexist in my thinking at times. I'm a lot better than many guys, especially users on this site, but knowing how divorces are, having experienced a broken home myself, It's hard to be charitable toward Women when they think they still have a right to screw the Husband either when he didn't cheat or when she cheats. That's what I would call a double standard.
But yeah, I like the general direction you took this story, better than the original which I couldn't even read through all the way, so thanks for saving this story it was a rollercoaster from start to finish; And thanks for not letting us down in the end.