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Click here"No. Didn't touch them. They screwed up. And call me Rick."
The guy smiled. "Alright Rick. Why don't you grab your wallet and we can get this sorted out."
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It didn't take long at all. Tom made the call to D&G. He had the video with him when he showed up a half-hour later. I'd spent the time in the interrogation room, chatting with Officer Shea, and enjoying a surprisingly good cup of coffee.
While we'd been at dinner, I'd had the P.I.s reinstall the video cameras at home. It was all there in full HD color. Their discussion, where once again I'll have to admit, Shelly did try to talk some sense into my wife. She wasn't listening. Shelly was reluctant, but she took the sock with a bunch of coins in the end, and gave me wife a good solid beating. By the end of it Danielle was crying, writhing on the floor, and Shelly gave her a couple of more good ones. "It's gotta look good, Dani."
Danielle wasn't gentle when she gave Shelly a couple of shots. Those supposedly came when Shelly tried to intervene, to stop me from killing my wife.
The assistant D.A. was called in for what would normally be a very high profile case. We had a discussion, and he was willing to go along with what I wanted. I was released, of course, and my wife and Shelly were picked up.
I wasn't surprised when I got the phone call.
"Honey?" Danielle said softly. "I was stupid again. You've gotta help me."
I worked out the details, and at 9:12 am the following morning, I had two beautiful, haggard, lingerie clad, repentant women in my car, and I was $10,000 poorer, after paying their bond.
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"No chance at all for us? I know I screwed up, but you have to know I love you," Danielle whined.
"No baby. It's over. Go along, sign the papers, don't make a fuss, and the charges will be dropped. That was really stupid, you know."
She nodded, took the pen and signed. "I wish it didn't have to be like this."
"Me too. You went too far, too many times."
"You're not going to get Shelly in trouble are you? She didn't want to go along."
I laughed. "Actually, I think I'm going to thank her. There's been a few times in the last few months, when I wish I could have given you the beating she gave you. It looks like it really hurts."
She pouted. "No shit. She beat the hell out of me. I think she cracked one of my teeth."
"She's gonna be sporting that black eye you gave her for a while."
"She deserved it. She didn't have to be so rough." She looked up at me, neatening the papers. "You're not going to leave me high and dry, are you?"
"You're the mother of my children. We'll get you setup somewhere nice. You might think about moving in with Shelly. It'll give the two of you a lot more disposable income, and the kids like her."
"How much am I gonna get to start with?"
"Your car of course, I'll buy you out of the house, half of our savings and investments. None of the 401K. I put $200K in educational trusts for each of the kids, so that will put a dent in things, but at least you won't have to worry about contributing to their college education, it's taken care of."
"So how much, do you think?"
"Probably a little more than $300K," I told her.
She pouted. "Is that all we have? I know the last few months were expensive, when you weren't working, but I thought for sure we had more than that."
"We'll see what the house comes in at. I probably should pay you for half of the furnishings. You'll get to keep your jewelry and clothing. I don't think there's any way it's going to amount to more than $400K. We'll work out the details on splitting up things from the house when you're settled in. Let's try to keep things as friendly as possible, for the kids sake."
"Don't you still love me, even a little? I love you."
"I'll always love you, Danielle. You were my first true love, and gave me a dozen good years. You blessed me with two wonderful children. Right now, the hate and disgust seriously outweigh the love, but I imagine in time, those will fade."
"I am sorry. I never meant for it to get carried away like that. God, I could kill Shelly for getting me hooked on those big dicks. She fucked up everything!"
I chuckled. She still wouldn't take responsibility for anything. "She screwed up. She knows it. She's paid a pretty steep price."
She reached out and grabbed my hand. It made my skin crawl. "You want to go back in the bedroom? One last hurrah for old time's sake?"
"That wouldn't be a good idea. I don't want you to get the wrong idea. We won't be having sex again. We may be able to be friends again, in time, but that part of our relationship ended as soon as you turned to Meat for your needs."
"And now the bastard up and disappeared again. Well fuck him. I can do better."
I pulled my hand away from hers. "I know you can. You were a beautiful woman. You let yourself go, but you could be gorgeous again. Drop 30 or 40 pounds, and you'll clean up nice."
She glared at me. "I don't need to lose 40 pounds!"
I looked her up and down, without replying. Between losing the club membership, eating Francine's full-octane cooking, and business meals, she needed to go shopping again. The last week hadn't helped. She'd sought solace in food, before finally submitting to the inevitable.
"How much longer can I stay in the guestroom?"
"Until the end of the month. That'll give you three more weeks."
"Can't you wait until I leave, before moving that hussy in my place?"
That 'hussy' was glaring at her from the couch. "Don't push it, Grandma."
Danielle turned red, and I knew she was about to blow up. I put my hand on hers. "Tell you what. If you can find a place to move to within a week, I'll talk to Jenny and see what we can do."
"Damn it, Ricky!" Jenny snapped. "You promised! If you don't straighten up, I'm going to make sure you regret it!"
Danielle was consoled, and Jenny gave me a wink. She wasn't moving in until her lease was up at the end of the month anyway. Let Danielle think she'd won one.
"We had a good run, didn't we?" Danielle said, looking at me wistfully.
"We did. I'm sorry I picked up that escort."
"I guess we're both sorry about a lot of things. I never meant for it to happen. I hope everything works out for you."
I heard the door open, and the kids came rushing in. Teri waved from the door.
"I owe you one, Teri," I called out.
"You owe me more than that, trouble maker." She closed the door behind her as she left.
The kids got their hugs from everyone, then disappeared into the kitchen. Francine had promised she'd teach them how to make homemade pizza.
Jenny stood, stretching, her amazing body on display. "Let's go, stud. Time for me to work you out." She gave me a wink, and Danielle sighed.
"Fuck. All that effort to get you buff, and none of it for me," she whined.
I laughed and followed my soon-to-be live-in trainer down to the dungeon. I knew what kind of workout she had in mind, and I was eager to get it started.
~ * ~ * ~
Tom sat across from me, in my office. "You're the luckiest bastard I know. Seriously. You install cameras to find out their plans, and they get caught in a felony on video."
I laughed. "I'm not going to argue. What's the word on Meat?"
"Two weeks of surveillance, with the evidence delivered to the appropriate people, did the job. When he got out of the hospital, he disappeared. Rumor has it one of his testicles is missing, and the other isn't working all that well."
"Do we know who did it? Should I be sending someone a thank you note?"
"No need. It's a small world, you know. He was very happy to get the evidence he needed. An old client, he's back in the fold. Apparently he had allowed his slut-wife's brother to handle his legal work. Now that she's out of the picture, he claims he needs a real law firm. He says you know him."
"That wouldn't be Danvers, would it?"
"Right the first time. His hands are clean, but apparently a few of the guys that work for him took matters into their own hands, when they found Meat raping the bosses wife. He was happy to pay us to represent the guys in court. Once Meat disappeared, there wasn't enough evidence to convict any of them. Too bad, huh?"
"Yeah. My heart bleeds for the bastard."
"You gonna keep your nose clean for a while? The D&G guys are getting rich off of us."
"I hope to God, I never have to use their services again. At least not personally."
"Good. Are you really going to run the Boston Marathon?"
"Jenny insists. I don't know why. It's not like I'm ever going to be competitive. She says I'm her ultimate testimonial. Turning a fat old man into a marathon runner."
"Nobody's gonna deny she did a hell of a job on you. I may have to hire me my own Jennifer."
I laughed. "Angela would string you up by the balls."
He grinned. "Yeah, there is that. A guy can dream, can't he?"
"As long as it's only a dream."
~ * ~ * ~
Epilogue:
I stood clapping as Eric accepted his diploma, Erin stepping onto the stage behind him. I heard a less than ladylike whistle from beside me, and Jenny sounded her approval. Little Ricky was standing on his seat beside her, waving his arms in the air. "Go Eric!" he screamed. I grinned as he turned to the people seated beside us. "That's my brother!" As Erin walked forward, his tune changed. "Way to go, Erin!"
Not to be left out, I waved my arm in the air, whooping it up. I'm sure I was embarrassing them to death. Hey, that's all part of being a Dad, right?
I looked to my left, and saw the tears running down her face.
I put my arm around her and gave her a hug. "We did good, beautiful."
The smile she gave me ended at her lips. Her eyes betrayed her sadness. "What do I do now?" she said softly. "My babies are all grown up."
"You move on, and if you don't mind my saying so, it's about time. You're only 45, Danielle. Take Jenny up on her offer, she'll whip you into shape. And don't tell me you can't afford it, she'll do it free of charge. If you were to lose 60 pounds, you'd have the men lining up to chase you again."
She snorted. "That's easy for you to say, Mr. Lean Mean Running Machine. You have no idea how hard it is to lose weight."
I stared at her, and watched her blush. "Alright, maybe you do."
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- COMMENTS
mainly I liked it. If you take requests for finishing stories then pls finish neighbor chronicles chapter 11 is in need of a chapter 12 lol
What dumbass his wife cheater always cheater you reap what you sow, rick is cruel n asshole but him have common sense, this really hurt fact his wife always denied. Great work... Damn ass big dick ruins everythig hahhahh
I disagree with TrainerOfBimbos; the author spent the previous chapters planting the seeds that showed that the anger was always there, and that any slippage in the wrong direction was going to end the marriage. Putting the cameras back in was a smart move by a guy who had showed himself to be well-prepared. The rest was just straight-forward reaction to what the wife did. I could see the situation with Shelly going either way; he showed restraint with her. 5**
I loved this part, and was surprised that Shelly didn't use a cast iron frying pan on Dani when they were beating each other up to make it look like Rick did it to them. I thought it was funny as hell, and all of it caught on camera. Of course she got hooked on big cocks, and being treated like a complete slut. She was tired of being a good upstanding wife who really didn't have to work for a living being a volunteer. She quickly learned the difference from working part time to working 12 hour days. I thought the end was a little rushed, but for the most part everything that needed to be said was already said. Plus it was more of a quick wrap up of the story after the divorce happened. Thanks for fixing a really lame story with a much better version of it, even if it took you quite a few chapters to do it. I personally liked the wife getting the "high octane" food while him and the twins got the low cal stuff. Add in all of the "chips" that he earned being used on other women really had to get the wife's goat. Thanks for sharing it with us, I really enjoyed your part of the story, and give it a 10 for both the writing and the imagination to make it all work out like it did. Great work.
That ending... wow. Honestly, it reads like satire. I mean, I don't mind it going in the BTB direction at all, but it was so abrupt considering the 2-3 chapters that preceded it and unlike the previous chapters, it was just chocked wall to wall with LW tropes and cliches. Honestly, I'm just going to try and forget about the ending because it was so unsatisfactory.
Hahaha god damnit I knew how this was going to end but I convinced myself I would be in for a surprise
I liked this story until the "she is mistreated used as a piece of meat and loves it, is instantly changed and can't get enough of being treated that way" As soon as I see this I know it's just some dudes kink wish.
This story took 7 chapters to put this silly sinario out! As soon as they never went to counseling I should have known it was the simple "kink" story.
For those who do not know, the author "FinisTheDamStory" has been past away for some time now. I l9ve reading his stories. You may not like the characters and their actions, but the story flow and character insight are bar none. Their are a lot of good writers on this sight, but very few deliver such fascinating stories that other writers fail to realize from their own works. I encourage you the review his works, and then go back to the original stories and enjoy the magic that this wonderful soul brought to this platform.
Lame. Although you've got talent, your MCs typically are passive-aggressive hypocrites. It's a shame most of your hijacked stories follow the same path.
It is clear that you can write. What is baffling is why do you choose to write such garbage and why must you make all your characters deplorable with no redeeming qualities what so ever.
"Why did you have to ruin me? I did not deserve it" said the whore that humiliated, belittled and sexually abused him, not to mention cheated on her husband. If a man were to squeeze some precum and wipe it on the upper lip of a woman or a man that would be sexual harassment, but when she does it and sufferes the consequences "she didn't do anything to deserve being ruined".
This all points to one simple conclusion, the author has subscribbed to the philosophy of the famous cum sucker Wimpy Cuckistan, the original cuck, and is doing his very best to proove that he is the biggest cuck in history. That or the biggest feminazi in history.
Either way, it is clear the author is devoid of common sense and even the faintest notions of morality, equality and justice.
All of this is reflected in almost every aspect of the story. Even the parts where the mc seemingly grows a backbone read more like "ha, i'll prove her i'm strong! I know the perfect revenge on both of them! I'll get on my knees, unbuckle his pants, suck the bulls cock and after he cums in my mouth i'll look them straight in the eye and spit the cum in a napkin! I won't swallow! That will absolutelly ruin them! I am the wisest strongest man imaginable!".
This is my second read through. Still a 1 star for me, especially this last chapter. Yes the wife did something despicable and yes the husband deserved some bit of revenge yada yada. I just never enjoy a story where the MC ends up being just as big a piece of shit, or in this case a way bigger piece of shit than anyone else. Also this last chapter I feel like the writer just ran out of ideas or was bored with this story. Such a shit ending for what was presented in previous chapters. The ending made absolutely no sense for what everyone went through, to just toss it all away on some way out there turn of events. After reading this a second time I went back to all the previous chapters I had given better marks to and changed them to 1 star.
Scorched earth is not my typical response, but the cheating slut didn't get her due
Well done.
I love that Dani's heel turn was foreshadowed in the early chapters. Dani could be over-the-top, unreasonable and demanding, she shows us this in the infamous contract. What a crazy response to a husband cheating once with a hooker. Then, Dani was on tape wanting and seriously enjoying what Meat had to offer, and she and Shelly lied, so that she could get some strange (some big) again. This was while Rick was helping Shelly and trying to get along with Dani. She got mad that the boy-toys were run out of town, instead of being humble and contrite and realizing that that was probably for the best. Then she lied over and over, saying she never wanted to hurt him, she did not want big meat, etc., when she absolutely wanted both. She lied to herself and to Rick, or, only to Rick, but she lied, and then pursued what she wanted eventually. She "only" had Meat three more times after the reconciliation was well under way. What a turn. The fake assault was almost over-the-top, but so was the first contract. Dani had promised to ruin him at that point. Making the battery charge work might ruin Rick without necessarily revealing Dani's sluttery, if she could shame him about it.
It seems a shame that her heel turn came so late in the game, but I think that reveals that she was lying to herself AND to Rick about her sexual desires. The content of the DVDs were not burned into her brain in the same way that they were burned into Rick's. She lived the pleasure, but that memory faded as the cost became apparent. Rick's nightmare was harder to forget, it WAS the cost, it was the burn he felt.
Rick was no angel either. His sins are apparent, and his revenge was also tough on the intended target. It is important that he held onto his sense of self enough that he was calm when it came time to end things. He stood and made things go the way he needed them to go.
I enjoyed reading this long attempt at a resolution that became a dissolution. Five for you.
Oof. This story started out strong then got worse and worse. Angela was right, Rick was a total fucking asshole too and no one called him on it. And Dani's heel turn at the end is ridiculous. It's like you were building towards reconciliation and suddenly decided you had to have a reason to burn her. Just disappointing.
yikes!!!!!!!! wayy too much of the same old crap telling a very common story.
Please Lit writers who read this - longer is definately not necessarily better!
Who cares about Dani?……Shelly was the top fuck and got along with all size dicks! Women orgasm solely from clitoral stimulation working with mental arousal. Most accomplished ‘stick men’ wield Normal …around 6 inch tools that are usually around 2 inches in diameter…..and just under 6 inches in circumference. That size tool can be put wherever the owner wants it. Did you ever hear of a woman giving birth having an orgasm. The lesson?……learn how to use the paint brush to paint a masterpiece. Brooms won’t work very well. Size queens mostly populate sites like LITEROTICA. R. H.
The husband had an irrational amount of tolerance for his wife's abhorrent behavior. Her third time with "Meat" should have killed things. Completely. What did her gain by delaying things? Would have been similar outcomes regarding custody and assets. She woukd try to scorch earth him. He had the videos. He might have lost his senior partnership. But there was no way to know that if he wanted that there would be the attempted abuse claim. He already had time to shift his assets around including the educational trust. What Dani did was so repulsive. And so far over the top. Delaying things didn't help anything. And probably made things more acrimonious. On a separate note, the "cosmic" sex with the 12 inch endowed Meat is a stupid trope. Large scale studies of sexually active women show that while size does matter, too much is also not a good thing. 45% of women in the study (subjectivel) assert they have had at least one well endowed experience with a 10 inch or large penis and of those more than 40% were not satisfied or did not enjoy it with pain being the leading reason why. Note most of those 45% of women in the study size of 1400 women, almost certainly did not have sex with such larger endowed partners. Why? Statistics. The odds of a man having a 10 inch penis are like 1 in 100,000 to 1 in a million. Forget the 12 inch LW trope. So there is a clear bias that the larger a penis, the even larger yet again that the women inflate the penis size. So a 10 inch monster becomes a 12 inch freak of nature. A 9 inch penis becomes 10.5 inches. And so forth. Therr are.not enough men alive and sexually active with 10 inch or longer cocks to service 40+% of women even once. Hence the strong subjective bias. Other findings from the same study show the Goldilocks region for maximal satisfaction is 6 to 8 inches which is certainly higher than the 5 1-5.5 inches of an average penis. Furthermore, over 50% of women claim that they wil nit be maximally satisfied with a 9 inch cock, rapidly increasing to 90% at 12 inches (which again besides a dildo, how would they know for sure?). Finally less than 3% been a 11 inch or 12 inch cock to be fully satisfied. So apparently slut Dani fell into that 3% category. Bit surprising given that so MANY LW stories on this site feature mega cocks and the cheating wives who once they get a taste, become addicted. Heck it sounds like once Meat came back, Dani was banging him regularly (how did she defeat the GPS tracking?) like several times a week for the last 4-5 weeks. She was the LW prototypical big cock junkie who destroyed her marriage and her family life. Ironically those cocks don't exist with enough frequency to support these common occurrences in these stories. And even if they do only a tiny fraction of women want sex with such well endowed men to be fully satisfied, and the vast majority fear it and of those who claim to have experienced it, almost 50% did not enjoy it. So yeah the LW trope about big cock addiction is alive and well...but utterly ludicrous. At least he ends up with Jenny. Crazy story of patience and forbearance that ended in shit. Dani is a delusional btich with big cock syndrome. Somehow one time.ruins her forever snd she can't help herself. Whatever.
I have to say... you could've posted this as chapter two or three, and NOTHING of the story would've been lost. I'm serious.
I read this long repetitive story because I like the way you usually portray the wronged men as men rather than indecisive wimps. I was greatly disappointed in this man's whishy washy mindset. His wife threw him away and he kept giving her chance after chance when he knew in his heart she was lost to him.
i want to make clear that my 1 star is because the author turned from backbone to the classic "cuckfagshit". The rest of the story is about a guy that thinks he has a backbone but has none, he's a wimpy cuck and deserved every painful and hurtful think that was thrust upon him. He was yellow through and through, piss drinking yellow that is. And you, well, your comment says alot about you.
I want to be clear that my 1 star is only for this chapter. The rest of the story is fantastic! I just don't understand why the author had to tack on this chapter which does not really work with the rest of the story and is just kind of a BTB ending.
To be fair, the author has been telegraphing for the last couple chapters that something does not jibe. The explanations given by Danielle and Shelly as to the third time Danielle cuckolded Rick make little sense (We already had the appointment and just went ahead with it, but did not humiliate you or make you watch once we figured out we were wrong about you wanting to be a willing cuckold-- so no biggie---WTF!!!). The fact that Rick eventually gave up asking about the real reasons for the third encounter could be seen as a sign of his healthy recovery from his trauma (and perhaps PTSD) - he no longer needs all the answers and is willing to reconcile without them. His recovery is far from complete--he still tracks Danielle obsessively--but progressing.
i can see one other purpose to the ending. At the end, Rick has no choice but to face up to his own SPH and feelings of inadequacy. At least in Daniella's case, the comfort offered to Rick that size does not matter is once again ripped away. That he is able to accept himself and move on is perhaps the greatest evidence that he has finally healed and come to terms with what was done to him. Danielle talks like she has a mental breakdown at the end, and we recognize with Rick that her size obsession is her problem, not Rick's. Comfort to all of us (the vast majority) without 12 inch cocks.
Yet it is almost like someone convinced the author that he had not made Danielle and Meat suffer enough for their sins, so he came up with this. The brutal attack on Meat is beyond even Rick in the rest of the story and the device the author uses to let Rick remain "innocent" of it is not very convincing.
Up to now, the third encounter is the only hint we have that Danielle is a size queen. It undermines the story's conceit that all this pain is the result of s tragic mistake that must be forgiven, if it can never fully be forgotten.
Some of the commentators have complained about the length and repetitiveness of the story as a whole. I think this misses an important point about this genre. This is, until the last chapter, a well told and carefully planned story that has a lot of psychological insight, despite some somewhat contrived sex scenes used to deliver major revelations. It is after all also fetish erotica. One aspect of the unwilling cuckold/cheating wife genre is the readers desire to experience Rick's trauma/humiliation/anger again and again. That can make the story repetitive and at times make it seem like the the same points are revisited over and over, and that the main character is trapped and unable to move forward. At times, if the reader is actually looking for an eventual reconciliation ( after the cheaters have done their penance), the cuckold's anger may even make one cringe. I could do without all the "slut" and "whore" language; it is not necessary in order to feel Rick's pain and humiliation and makes me cringe a bit. Yet, I suspect that the constant revisiting of trauma anger and and the same issues over and over again is probably something who have had a spouse cheat on then actually experience. Rick is beyond humiliated and angry; I think he is probably suffering from PTSD. But I think that the critics who have focused on the repetitiveness are missing the fact this is not the author's failure, but a fairly standard feature of this type of genre fiction.
Personally, I do not read these stories primarily for the BTB element. The pain and trauma and penance is a fetish element, but I like best those where the characters try to find a way back to each other and overcome the betrayal. That is ultimately why I loved this story, but was disappointed by the last chapter.
Nevertheless, let me empadize once more--Great story, just one bad chapter.
Wonderful story until the last chapter, when it just goes off the rails completely. It could be shorter, but was good u til yjis point