- Incest/Taboo
- The Daddy Swap
- Page 16
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Click hereAlissa came with a wail of pleasure and a je of cum, soon followed by the sound of Chloe exclaiming gleefully how good it felt to have her Uncle Travis filling her to the brim with his spunk.
Sated for a while, and with a need to get to the airport, they quickly showered and dressed before heading to the resort's front desk to check out.
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"Awesome holiday! Thanks Daddy!" Chloe exclaimed as they boarded the shuttle bus.
"Better than I could ever have expected!" Alissa agreed.
"I think that's true for all of us," Travis replied, hugging Alissa. "And as weird as this sounds, I think your mothers would approve and be happy for all of us."
"I actually think you're right," Max agreed.
End
About the Author:
Nikki writes erotic fiction for her pleasure and shares her deliciously naughty stories through her e-books. Born in a coastal Australian city, she loves the sun, the sand and the lovely cool salt water. Nikki has been known to dabble in Tennis and Soccer to keep fit but is far from likely to ever see either of those things as more than a hobby. She is often mesmerised by the wonder that is women's volleyball.
- COMMENTS
Way too long, BUT I ENJOYED EVERY MORSEL OF IT! Too soon to ask: " What happened when they got home?".
Sure would like to know.
5 stars, of course!
LeB
Finally read the last two pages, so this is an addendum to my last comment -
The last few pages of this story felt more like they were "lifted" from any script for a thousand "Foursome" Porn Video, all the Cliche foursome loathsome antics the Porn Video industry had rerun now for the last 20 years with Two Girls and usually Two OLDER guys.
It's a shame, it's like you ran out of original ideas, abandoned any hopes of it being tiniest bit romantic between the four kinda related people, dads and their daughters, and just copied some tasteless porn film. Even Alissa turned into just another Slut as big as Chloe clearly is. I could see both of them 'Turning Tricks' in the evening streets of Melbourne.
Shame, you really fucked up what could have been a kinda romantic adventure for both the girls and dads.
Loved it! I'd enjoy reading about their lives once they're back in home territory, with some travels in Australia and, of course, Ali preparing herself and eventually rising to the challenge of inviting then welcoming Uncle Max into her rear entrance.
Great Story, "weaved" well, could be more character development of the girls in the first page, barely any physical description, didn't even know Alissa was very small breasted and a Red Head until finally a ref to her "landing strip". Also, watch out for the all too often "Run on paragraphs that should grammatically be several paragraphs. 90% of the writers on this site have the worst Grammar I've ever seen, as an Editor! One other note, Personally I think you painted Chloe far too much as a bona fide Slut in the first half dozen pages, including want to hump a local Blackie she had no history. You'd wonder, with your story line on her, how she hadn't already gotten AIDS, Herpes, Gonorrhea and Syphilis in her slutty adventures. Keep your girl characters Horny, but careful!
Surprised the dads never got each other off. With so much happening around the clock, I was expecting at least a dad handy. Perhaps dads finally doing the taboo they refused their wives while alive; bobbing the knob and then wanking the other onto the tits of the other's girl.
Very much enjoyed reading it!!
It is evident that that you enjoy writing and describing sex. I for one loved reading it. Young adults learning and and experimenting without being forced is so sexy and that they do it with older males that they love and trust makes it even hotter.
Once again THANKS!
Lovely story with nice writing style - It needs just a tad bit of proofreading though - I especially enjoyed the colloquial Aussie vernacular. However, you seemed to have slipped up a just bit when you attributed words like "fancy" and "keen" to the Americans - Just curious: why do so many stories of this genre seem to have the female protagonists as having "long red hair"? - I'm so glad the males wore board shorts instead of those 'faggot' speedos favored by so many writers - I felt that Chloe was maybe just too aggressive, but I guess that was necessary to accelerate the plot line forward - Then, there was the pseudo Dom/Sub thing between Travis an Chloe. Eh? - Sorry, but I thought the combined sex scenes with both dads towards the end were way to protracted. - Oh yeah., you seem to have a tit fetish - Regardless, you've still got an eight star story here. . . . :-)
I know many people are just here for a quick wank, like the brave “anonymous” that posted 25 days before me, but I LOVED this… great story, 5*
I haven’t looked yet, but if there’s no follow, there should be…
Outstanding. I seldom read stories longer than 3 or 4 Chapters because they are usually boring. You kept my attention through all 16 chapters. I hope you write a follow up soon. I just added you to my favorite writers.
As a fellow Aussie, I loved this.
As a bloke, I loved this.
Hell, as a Homo Sapiens I loved this :-)