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Click hereThe flight was uneventful, but sitting next to David and knowing what we would be doing had me on edge. We were staying a mid-scale hotel close to downtown. Once we arrived in our room and set our luggage down I walked over to David and held him. I started to feel him grow.
I dropped to my knees and began to undo his pants. Then I pushed his pants down and began to rub my face against his crotch feeling his cock start to swell. I eased his underwear down, and his big cock sprang free. I immediately took the head into my mouth. I couldn't wait to feel his hardness in my mouth. I bathed the head of his cock with my tongue, and he continued to grow to his full length. I had never tried to take a cock as big as his fully down my throat but today was the day I was going to try.
I cupped his balls and started running my tongue up and down his long shaft. After he was reasonably wet, I returned to the head and started taking him. He started moaning and took my head in his hands. At first, at I could only take about half of his cock. As I got used to him and adjusted my breathing, I was able to take more. David was moaning almost continuously and started moving his hips. I froze and let him take over. This really excited David, and he was really getting into fucking my mouth. Surprisingly, I loved it too.
Once again his cock was making me lose my inhibitions. I was lost in the moment and had no idea how much of his cock I had in my mouth. I just knew that my nipples were like rocks, and my pussy was wet and soaking my panties. Then I felt his balls against my chin. I couldn't believe it, he was all the way in, I was deep throating him. My saliva was coating his cock and was running down my face. I grabbed my tits and let him set the pace. I could tell he was getting close because his balls had drawn up. His breathing picked up, and he started with short fast strokes. I ran my tongue under the head of his cock.
He groaned loudly, and his cum started squirting into my mouth. I swallowed as much as I could, and the rest spilled from my lips. He must have shot 6 to 8 ropes of cum. By now after taking that big load in my throat, I started to gag. I even had a small orgasm as I attempted to swallow his big load. I released his softening cock and looked down at myself. My shirt covering my tits was covered in cum and saliva, and I could feel that my panties were soaked with my pussy juice. We had only just begun and had two more days of sex to look forward to.
We had sex several times from there and sometime after midnight the next day the alarm company called about an alarm from my house. I explained that Ed should be there to deal with the problem besides I was in Denver on business. I thought the call was odd because nothing like that had ever happened before.
David had spent minutes sucking my nipples, and I had just started giving him a blowjob when my phone rang again. This time, it was from Ed. I answered the call without realizing it was a facetime call. Ed's face was white as a sheet, and he tried to talk, but the alarm was blaring in the background then I watched him collapse on the floor. David had now sat up and asked who was calling. I didn't know if Ed had noticed my aroused nipples or David's hand on my shoulder. I immediately got up and dressed and rushed to the airport. I called my children and asked they check on their dad and that I was on my way home.
Ed had a collapsed blood vessel and apparently had stopped breathing until he was resuscitated. It was touch and go in the hospital for several days, and then he had another heart attack. Ed had another visit to the surgery and then found himself on the road to recovery followed by three more weeks in the hospital before being allowed home.
I was on leave without pay during this time and played nurse to Ed. I still found time to see and have great sex with David with the excuse I was going to check in at work. Every day, Ed was out of sorts like something was bothering him.
Finally, after about the third week at home, I confronted Ed and asked for an explanation why he was acting so strange.
His reply gutted me. He knew about my affair with David and wanted to know all the gory details. I made up a story about being blackmailed by David to get a promotion and explained my affair was only the weekend I went to Denver. I wasn't sure if he believed me or not.
I didn't want to discuss the sex with David, but Ed gave me a choice of telling everything or leaving. I only said a fraction of the truth. Ed is not stupid, and it only took a few minutes to piece the puzzle together and realize that the affair most likely started after the Christmas party although I didn't admit to that. I had done my best to not elaborate in order to lessen the damage, but then I said something wrong and Ed told me to leave. I was crushed but packed a bag and spent the night with my oldest daughter and her family.
The next morning, I told my daughter I was going to work and would spend that night with a friend. Actually, I was going to see David. He was my only friend as even my children didn't want anything to do with me. Word had gotten around quickly.
I was almost to David's apartment when Ed called and told me to come home. He seemed happy to see me, and I apologized for saying the wrong thing the day before. I really meant that I didn't want the affair to be discovered due to the hurt it would cause my family. Ed thought I didn't want the relationship with David exposed so I could continue having sex with him which I suppose did have some truth to it but I would never admit to that. Sex was so good with David I would almost cut off my left hand to be able to continue.
That afternoon Ed and I held each other as we slept in our marriage bed. That was to be the last time I would be in my husband's arms.
That evening Ed disclosed that he was suing both my company and David. I got angry and told him he couldn't do that then he showed a report that suggested David was a sexual predator. I found David to be a good man so none of that could be true and I was angry that Ed was trying to ruin David's life.
I stormed out and slept in the guest bedroom that night. The next morning, I had arranged to meet David at Starbucks. When I returned home, Ed knew where I had been and even that I gave David a passionate kiss when departing. We exchanged words then I found myself on the street again but this time, I went to stay with David.
Ed filed lawsuits against David and my pharmaceutical company. That led to David being fired and then later I was dismissed as well. Then I got served for divorce.
Things just seemed to be spiraling out of control. Ed sold the house and then took the best pieces of furniture, I was left with hardly anything. I should have used the money from the sale to pay off my share of our children's college and marriage loans, but didn't, and allowed David to run through most of the money. I was a fool.
David couldn't find a job and had to give up his luxury apartment and the car, then, I finally had enough and left David. I discovered he was continuing his philandering ways, and I had gotten fed up with him. He was great in bed but lacked social skills and didn't know anything about being a gentleman. I guess I came to my senses too late. I found work, but it didn't pay nearly what my previous job did. I had to pay for my apartment and on the loans. Life became really hard.
Desperate for money I tried to claim part of Ed's insurance business but discovered it belonged to his dad so I just gave up. Then the divorce was finalized, and I found Ed waiting for our son just outside the courtroom. I tried to apologize, but Ed had been hurt too bad to listen.
My life after that was getting through one day to the next. I didn't date or even go out with what few friends I had. I was only able to pay the interest on my loan so I knew that debt would follow me to my deathbed.
A few years passed and I was invited to spend Christmas with my children, and Ed was there. We spent most of the day talking, and I was feeling good when he explained to me that we could be friends but never anything more. I really needed a friend and was pleased to hear Ed say that.
A few weeks later my loan was mysteriously paid in full. I knew it was Ed, and I called to thank him, but he acted like he didn't know anything about it but my children don't keep secrets very well. Yes, Ed paid it off. He must have known how much I was struggling. I was thankful that his wounds had healed so that we could still be friends, at least for our children's sake.
- COMMENTS
This author needs a proofreader as well as an editor. BTW, who is “Deb”? Three stars ⭐️.
What is it with MC's in LW that give fortunes to their cheating spouse. A cheater that would have taken half his family business if given the chance. I mean, who would actually do that in real life. Definitely no woman, that's for sure
1. Why it HAS TO BE "one and done"- if they cheat they lie to try and minimize the fallout.
Not only is trust is impossible, but even mere credibility. This story is a good example of a possible real situation- we find out from her mea culpa that her erstwhile plausible statements were 90+% lies, and less than 10% truth. Unless you are truly ugly, old and broke, you can do better, relationship wise.
2. Rear entry sex for women is PAINFUL with men with a large dick, so this part of the story is not believable.
Most women's vagina's are only about ~3 to 4 inches deep. (If you have decent sized hands you can feel her cervix if you insert your middle finger deeply).
3. For her infidelity coupled with a huge pack of lies, the slut did not suffer nearly enough.
Oh fuck no. The lying, cheating and betrayal haven't gone away so neither would her debt. Those items would also never leave his mind so every time he looks at, speaks to or thinks about her they will bubble up to the surface. No need to offer to be a friend to someone who is the source of so much resentment.
I gave this story 3 stars only because Ed wimped out and paid off his ex-wife's debt. Plus, in my opinion that guy David should have felt some real pain. Sure Ed was not capable of handing out any pain to David but he had two sons right? Maybe I am just a bitter old man but at least when I shave in the morning I can still look myself in the eye.
Good story, too bad about the slut-wife when our man needed a good wife.
We also got enough of the slut's POV that she was a more complete character, although, that character was lacking a bit, as is frequently the case in these stories.
Good one
A sad tale of woe, but is such is life when both little heads do the thinking. Five Stars
Lol, he could not sue anyone for the affair. He was not extorted and would have no standing with the company to sue.
Just another cheating cunt story with a weak cucky man who is a sucker in the end. Why does no one let the cucky MC be a real man and destroy all the cheaters in a most definitive way!
It is a well written story, and has a satisfying BTB tone. That being said, why would in intelligent person NOT use caution in protecting their once and only large payout?
I guess someone is making money off this story on youtube:
/ channel 'deceived husbands', as an audio story, just with names changed. I could be wrong but ...
I just can’t understand why these betrayed husbands always take care of the cheating bitch after the divorce.
I see you have closed comments and rating on some of your stories. This is pretty closed minded and you get to cherry pick your ratings. Pretty narcissistic in my opinion. The one about the Texas rancher who allowed his wife back in his life after she lied about being date raped and then confessed to a 2-year affair was laughable. I can see why you didn’t want any comments on that one. You obviously have feminist views and long to demean men. Apparently, we are incapable of moving on and we are left to wander the earth pining for our cheating wives. Pwahahaha! 1-star even though you will probably delete my comment.
Minus a star as always for the name screw up, calling Helen 'Deb'. Where the hell did that come from?
Ok, the MC was compassionate towards his Ex, that doesn't make him a wimp.
What is it with LIT author's and 10-inch dicks??
Another wasted time another author writing for the pussy whipped crowd, cuckholds everyone. Not a pair of stones among the whole audience. If there were minus points I could give I would. Like minus 5.
Nope! Should have made piece of shit Davey boy disappear and then sold cheating skank slut Helen to a Mexica cartel that owns whore houses in Tijuana. Only person to suffer was victim hubby. Just terrible.
Very nice tale till you wimped out!!! Got remember if you are not willing to pay don't play until you move on! Check out Gary Smith good stuff.
Quite good, excellent for the husband to stand firm, figure things out, and get out of the marriage with some retribution.
Nice eroticism too, knowing why, through the slut's eyes, that she did what she did, and have her describe her enjoyment..., well, this is Literotica.
The quality of mercy that the hubby found, to eventually pay off the wife's debt, hard to render judgment on that, that is how the hubs is written, this is something we need to understand about him, in the end.
I agree with the last. He was too nice already and then he pays off the loan and she call's and says thank you. Wasn't that sweet of her. I don't mind being nice when ex is retentive. But come on, she still didn't feel like she did husband wrong even at the end.
Didn't care for it much, esp. that he paid off her loan? After caring less about her husband (cheating while he was recovering??) being a supreme slut, all the lies and deception? This is one of those stories where her sins should have landed her in some far away brothel.
ONE star, minus!
CAUTION: Older readers may get sufficiently worked-up and angry to CAUSE a Cardiac episode!
I couldn't get past page two!
Now, where did I put my Beta-Blocker pills?.
R.S.
Well told story; but the usual LW legal tropes about suing employers under so-called “morals” and “non-“fraternization” clauses are complete fiction; those causes of action do NOT exist in any Anglo-American jurisdiction. They are enforceable by the employer against employees, and correlatively EMPLOYEES (re: not their spouses) would have sexual harassment claims against their employers work unwanted workplace sexual attention, but an employer has no legal obligation to non-employee spouses for sexual trysts related to the work place. Hello? If an employer was liable to non-employee third parties, why in the world would they even have such policies if they subjected the employer to such liability? Geez, this “sued my wife’s company for a billion dollars under their morals clause” drives me batshit. I know it makes the LW commentariat orgasm, but it doesn’t exist in the real world. Stop it. Please.
I don't think Ed was a fool because he paid off her loans, but rather didn't want the loans to chase their kids later on in case something happened to her. As a heart attack survivor, you really start putting things into perceptive about your life, and that there might not be a tomorrow. He might have also done it to help her out and also because he felt sorry for her, after all they did have 30 good years together. Also not factored in was her going on HRT, which increased her libido, and him having ED due to the medications he was on, left him a little limp when he needed to be hard to take care of business. And up until the Christmas party it sounded like they worked around it (that's what devoted couples do).
I know people who collect a bunch of stuff, and their spouse wouldn't know what to do with most of it. After the kids took what they wanted, the rest went up for auction selling for 10 cents on the dollar. That happens all the time in real life. In my own case, I started getting rid of a bunch of junk, and partly started projects just went to scrap, as I knew I'd never finish them. It happens.
This wasn't my first read either, as I've enjoyed this story many times. Ed wasn't a wimp, in that he divorced her after things health-wise settled out for him after verifying that she was cheating on him and making him an unknowing cuckold. Thank You for sharing it with us.
Ed is still a fool, paying off the whores loan, still taking responsibility for her actions, no wonder she cheated, what a chump he is
And the asshole is still walking around upright. Sorry, but not my definition of a happy ending. 3 stars, the Bear is not sympathetic.
The BEAR
There was just something, or maybe it was the way you wrote it, but it didn’t hang together for me
1 star - second read and I have had a change of heart. The SLUT got exactly what she deserved, but it needed to last for at least 5 years after the divorce, before he allowed her to become part of the family again. Yes, I know exactly what it feels like to be in an ICU for a week and my heart actually stopped during the angiogram, but luckily they were able to get it going again. It certainly changed my attitude towards life and how short it can be.
To anonymous below from 4 months ago, until you've had a heart attack and spent a few days/weeks in the hospital, you'll never know how weak you really are. It takes a lot out of you, not to mention getting used to all the different medications AND their side effects. It took me over 6 months to get semi normal again, and that was 3 years ago. So until you've been there, I wouldn't say anything. Yes, my wife and I are still dealing with it too. Some of the medications can cause ED. I take a daily Viagra, just to make sure I can keep my end up. ;-)
4 stars - NOPE that loan should never have been paid off, PLUS no time with the kids or grandkids for years.
The SLUT needed to suffer for years and years for the payback to even be close.
Husband was a sissy wimp cuck all the way through to the end. I guess the author just hates men with character or self-respect. Here is a better ending... David and his big cock were walking out of a bar where he'd just picked up another empty-headed married bimbo slut. Three men grabbed them and threw them into the back of a van. They saw Helen already tied up and gagged. The women were forced to watch David scream in agony as he lost his dick and balls. They were shoved in his mouth. Tied hand and foot with heavy chains he was tossed over the side of a bridge into a deep lake. Both women were taken across the boarder where they were sold to a Mexican cartel that owned a dozen brothels. Neither were ever seen again and nobody cared.
What a disgusting ending. Seriously he decided to be friends with tghe freaking bitch ho almost sent him to his grave and paid off her loan? The kids supposedly took his side but invited her to event? 1 star, and that barely deserved.
Good job Freewheel. Your story reminds me a little of Radk's It Takes a Strong Man. Not quite sure why. Maybe it's that both of the MCs refuse to be a cuckold and later forgive on their own terms. In Ed you have created a strong character and the story itself is well done.
As good ol' Barnum used to say: "There's a sucker born every minute!" Paid off her part of the loans?!?!? Wat a loser!! Big cock tramp whore - deserved far worse. At least they all dumped her cheating ass.
SWAMP DONKEY!!! BUT being an older cunt is okay, the younger SWAMP DONKEYS tend to accept the older donkeys, but the younger ones??? OH HELL NO!!!! they do not wasnt compitition for the cock
I’m pretty sure that these cuckold husbands you write about are based on you. Do you ever feel any shame while licking a better man’s cum out of your wife’s pussy?
This was going to be 5 until he paid the ex wife 200,000 $ loan, tell me on what planet that would happen? Just not realistic, Ruined a reasonable story with that soppy crap.
I don't get why authors decide to put the woman's side in the story. She's obviously the villain. I don't want to hear her side. I don't want to hear her point of view. The story wasn't too bad though, even though I didn't read her side
Looks like he's not writing anymore. Story was good but the vibrations were unbelievable. No one talks that way. And the nation just felt like someone rushing through running without taking a breath.
The taking jet back seemed too waxy the fist time... especially with her on her way to asshole. Why would he stop her? See what happens.... then the realization it was a longer affair comes fron nowhere.... so entertaining but not great
Why help the bitch, she totally betrayed him?
To the curb and leave the lying bitch in the gutter.
1/5 he is a cuck
David the asswipe was really stupid to go after married coworker.he should have known husband would find out and fuck up his lifeexactly as he deserved
Another whore wife story..... most of us men dislike it when she has small consequences...,
Helen was even more shallow than most wives in LW stories. A few rumors of David's sexual prowess around the office and a couple dances at the company Christmas party and she was ready to throw away her marriage.
Then continues the affair after her husband almost died? Literally too stupid to survive in the real world.
Granted good people make bad decisions but, the wife that was described at the beginning of the story would never have made the decisions she did. Especially after her husband had almost died. It's hard to suspend disbelief as much as this author asked us to do.
Why do women always go back to their lover when they have been found out. Its like a magnet for them. In fact it just totally hacks off the husband, bigtime. Than then makes them even more angry and then the wife thinks they're being stupid. Really!
you stupid little man , no man who has a cheating wife ever ask if she love's her lover , no husband care's about shit like that ,he only care that she gave his pussy away..you pay off her dept and become her friend ,WHY,WHY. WHY,WHY .you stupid little man.
Why not surprise us? Instead of following the Lit template with another weak husband, why not be bold? Why not create a real, strong male character?
Ed was a damn wimp , spineless fool, she was a size queen bitch who cared more about her lover than Ed and would have continued the affair … screw here to a life of hell!!!!
Disappointed he paid the loan. You don’t have to like her or hurt but to help her? Fuck that. Not after what she did. Lying whore
He didn't want to be friends. Why should he? He just wanted you to stay the fuck out of his relationship with the kids. And if giving her some bullshit about "being freinds" and a few bucks would do that, it was peace bought at a low price.
like the final sentence stated: " I was thankful that his wounds had healed so that we could still be friends, at least for our children's sake."
He's just tolerating her, and that's all she desrves.
I'm glad you gave the wife a good way out. I like coming to the comments and seeing all these women haters get bent out of shape about the ending. That alone deserve a 5 star.
I'm sorry, but you sat up a nuanced BTB story but then you did not allow us to experience the Burning of the Bitch.
This story is fiction.
A good "story", thank you and keep writing.
An author that is writing can call of the shots in the story. It makes no difference what actual laws are, all that matters is that the author is satisfied with his/her work.
So try to read with that in mind and we all will be satisfied as well.
Hormeones be ficking damned. She was still a grown ass woman who knew rigfht from wrong.
I'd have just let the dumb cunt suffer.
I gave up the story when we got to the company paying damages to the husband. That was an immediate 1* because husband had no cause of action. The comment by Legio_Patria_Nostra builds on that insanity and is even more preposterous. The story also never explained why wife did not stop with David as soon as husband found out, but instead just fed herself into the grinder. Makes no sense.
Half a million? Really? From a drug company? What law school did MC's lawyer attend? The going rate for that type of settlement, especially supervisor-employee lawsuits where the predating party has a history of harassment, is much, much higher. Given MC's heart condition and "pain and suffering" as a consideration. Furthermore, that the company's HR so miserably failed when transferring him would add at least another $800K to $1.5M to the suit. I'd figure out-of-court for at least $5.5M plus legal fees. Also, in Texas, adultery is still grounds for divorce and can carry weight on asset distribution, spousal support, etc. Otherwise, a good tale. 5/5.
If you're going to destroy someone who has wronged you, you do not allow them pity.....ever.
Never understand why authors insist on giving us the cheater's perspective. Don't care at all what justifications they may have for everything.
A bit of an anatomy lesson. A woman's vagina is about 6" long. Inserting a ten inch object fully inside would displace the cervix by about 4".
That is not pleasure, that is physical damage, and would be agony.
You seem to have an ongoing problem: consensual or not, this was sexual harassment. She wouldn't be fired. She would sue the company, and if they fired her it would just make the payout bigger. Also, as has been stated the husband can't sue her company, but he can get half of her payout. I like your stories, but this same thing happens in most of them, and it's irritating. BUT, thank you for your work. I appreciate it.
Average when are these stupid women going to start thinking with their heads instead of their fannys I love the BTB (jaybee186)
I'm not sure the husband could sue the company, the wife certainly could, but i don't think the husband could. This is actually a recurring problem with an overwhelming number of stories in this category. The husband suing the wife's employer? It just seems ridiculous, i know in this case it was for coercion and in most other stories it's fraternization, but it's still spurious, since the husband isn't part of the contract or policy. I certainly know my boss would laugh her ass off if a lawsuit like that ever crossed her desk.
Also, why wouldn't she sue the company as well? She was after all, the original victim, no matter that she later turned into a perp. She'd certainly have much more right than the husband ever would.
Ask a PI, and outside of insurance and benefits fraud cases, these are their bread and butter: married couple, often with kids flown the nest, run into problems because one gets bored -- and no, it's not always the woman -- and finds a "grass is greener" cake eater scenario. The cake provider at some point realizes that he or she has been made a chump and bails the heck out. In my experience, few of the cheaters get fired and end up in poverty, but they never get married either. No one wants a backstabber. Marriage is an opt-in scenario: if you can behave like a decent person, you get the benefits of love, family, and affection. If you act like a sociopath, you end up hanging out with sociopaths, and even if you have tons of money, your life is a bit hollow.
I'm not sure which is worse the story or the comments. Most of the comments are shit written by scum. The author may not be a great writer but they deserve a level of respect for freely publishing their work.
The storyline is ok but it's one this author has over used. The writing is the biggest problem it doesn't flow naturally almost as though English isn't the author's first language. The author hasn't published anything in a few years but if they start writing again they sorely need an editor. There were a few typo's but nothing to bad. It's really the lack of the natural flow of the story and how it's narrated.
Just the same old story since the beginning of time. Females are nothing but a life support system for their cunts. She has 5 kids with him, then when his heart fails, she goes and finds a big dick and kills his love. Ofcourse this is a simple story, but it happens every day in america. My wife fucked over me and i caught her sorry ass. Females are emotion driven and very rarely use their brains in cases like this. Sorry assed story.
This author has posted 4-5 stories all with the same plot, this is one of them. Always with some confused middle-age women and of course with "big dick" seducer:
***David undressed and I saw, for the first time, his massive dick. It must have been 10" long and as big as a can of Red Bull in girth***
How you don't get tired of always the same garbage?
All of his villains are "David"s. But funny thing is that he keeps on misplacing names and in the same story he calls hubby ("Ed" in this story) David and even Deb. All of this is so ridiculous but apparently he cannot notice that.
The end of the plot, resolution, is always the same.
Now if the plot is original then one could say he is just enamored in the plot he invented but ... the plot has been around many times so not even that is his.
Why don't you concentrate on making your own plot instead of drooling this nonsense of 10 inch cock with a "girth of Red Bull" can. You should also stop drinking "Red Bull", you will have less bullshit to drivel.
She jumped into cheating with both feet, lied constantly about the affair and raced straight back to him once they split.
No way he should have paid her debt other than if she died, and then to stop it carrying on to his kids, she wasn't really sorry about the affair, that was obvious the way she was concerned for her lover after Hubby started his revenge.
Who cares about the hurt the wife was feeling after the revenge, what about the husbands hurt from the affair and the constant lying after being found out.
The kids would have been able to pay it if he died first from their inheritance.
*4 would have been *5 if he hadn't weakened
I liked the story. As a heart attack survivor with 2 stents and having a stroke 4 days after getting out of the hospital I can understand Ed's feelings. My Loving Wife didn't cheat on me, and hasn't cheated on me as far as I know. Our adult children are out on their own, and college has been paid off. That last part seems to be a point of contemption among the posters, since they forget they both have a 50-50 split on their children's education loans. He was paying off her part or otherwise the money would come from him anyway due to him still having his half mil from his retirement from the business. As for the almost 50 year old woman still having the hots for every swing dick, I wouldn't know about that. Most older women around where I live have settled comfortably into living with their husbands "until death do they part". You don't see or hear about the cougars out looking for young guys. More like old dudes looking for young sluts.
Fine story. It described well the emotions and motivations that lead otherwise good people to act in ways that prove destructive. I would have preferred a happy ending but yours was realistic. Also, I hate your critics. Why should anyone live with resentment their whole lives? Ed got his retribution and was a far better and happier man because he eventually forgave her. Vote for Ed for the United States Senate!!!
I hated this story - 1 for you.
It was way too long and the last part with the wife was not required.
Simple - You cheat, you lie, you pay FOREVER
Having an affair...getting caught...and lying right to your husband...right to his face... can hurt in so many ways...and this bitch of a wife...learned a very hard lesson for it.. and what made this story even better... the author of this story gave us a look at what happened to this wife here.......that made this story stand out from the crowd......
"I made up a story about being blackmailed by David to get a promotion"
That story was never about blackmail. It was about being offered to prostitute herself in exchange for a promotion. Blackmail would be if he had threatened her with something, but that was never part of her made up story.
When first we practice to be a duplicitous bitch
damn stories however you want and leave the other stories and authors to write as they choose.
I enjoyed the story, but the husband would NOT have paid off her loan. She lied and cheated repeatedly, and after being discovered went to her lover. She destroyed her life by her own selfish actions. He might have helped her a little, but $200,000 worth? Not unless he was independently wealthy (i.e. a multimillionaire). She has a choice to make - fix her life as best as she can and accept the cost of her mistakes, or stay exactly where she is and wallow in self pity; or take the cowards way out and commit suicide. As for him, it will take some time, but after 2 - 3 years he should be able to date and may find someone else. Of course a great revenge would be for her to see him with someone new that loves him, and them enjoying a life of privilege while she struggles day to day, and knowing that she gave up that life.
A person reaps what they sow. There was no way this story could have gone except the way it did.
With most situations it is the lying that gets people angry.
She may have had a better chance of saving her marriage if she’d owned up about her sexual needs before the affair started, since her husband was impotent. At least If they‘d divorced it wouldn’t have been so acrimonious.
But lying over and over again made her husband think she was taking him for a fool.
Which is the worst insult.
I don't really understand it. Most of it is very well written, but until the woman tells her story , it is all a confusing ball of lies.
I don't see why she cares about her soon to be ex.She lies to hom, cheats on him, and dreams and masturbates to another man's penis. The marital dream is over. I read nothing from the woman's perspective that showed she cares about him , or loved him. Just that he was unable to perform and she found a man who could perform and perform admirably. Move on and realize there is no more story.
Did think dying was a creative way to discover your partner was cheating on you.
Your story is very well written and has the ring of being true or at least possible.
But what eventually happened to them? He was a decent guy and she came to the self-awareness that she had done something very wrong and was truly sorry. In other words, they both did everything they could to get their lives on track. One would hope that they turned out ok and found some success and happiness.
I do hate to agree with LordSlamdawgg, but yeah, I think he made an intelligent comment. You might ask why I hate to agree with him. Look at his username. However I very much like and respect luedon, and her own comment is spot on. Freewheel did try to present Helen's point of view but I agree it wasn't very realistic. So that part is just one more man trying to write the woman's point of view while not really getting it right. It's hard to do so I'm not about to berate Freewheel for not nailing it. Putting yourself in a female character's head is a male writer's toughest job. He made an attempt at it, enough of an attempt to keep me reading.
I do wish you misogynist pricks would stop trying to castigate lue for writing what she's written. She's honest and she writes very well about what happened. She hasn't posted here for your harsh moral judgment. Like the other writers here she had a story to tell and acquitted herself admirably telling it. You clowns aren't critics. You're just weak candidates for incel membership. Go back to Pornhub where you belong.
All in all, a pretty good rendering of a domestic tragedy.
I could see it happen. Mid 40's wife meets some guy 15 years younger and ruins her husband's and children's life by having an affair.
Then boom, instead of being humble she takes the young lover's side in an attempt to save him from her husband's anger.
Then she wanted have her husbands business? When she did that, she became an enemy to overcome and destroy. Are people ever that crazy? You bet.
This is The typical btb story, it's mostly The same like a Cheap Recipe how to Write a btb story. Take a Great marriage, take The wife turning suddenly Brain dead, he finds out, he quits the relationship .... Yadayadayada pump it up with Cheap Sex And stupid excuses so you have at least 2 pages of garbage. Don't worry there will be some morons who like this ... Like some People like shit Sandwiches
....and you might screw your life, along with the guy with the big cock?
Ummmm. Have you thought of discontinuing the HRT?
...that some people just don't think it through to the consequences.
LISTEN UP! For those of you who don't understand American law? We have what's called an "adversarial court system". A person has the United States Constitutional right to sue anyone, for anything within a "reasonable time".
Look up "Pearson vs. Chung" on Wikipedia if you don't believe me.
Now, just because you can FILE a lawsuit doesn't mean you're going to WIN a lawsuit. All sorts of things can happen. First, it has to be reviewed by a Judge- this is called the "Process of discovery"- an agreement upon the facts. Then time is given for research- and literally, 19 out of 20 times a lawsuit is dropped. That means only 5% of all law suits see a court room.
Now, one of the things required in American law is "Can you show real harm?" In general if the answer is "Yes"- which is in most cases the destruction of a marriage, resulting in real loss of money/economic damage- can be used as a tort. Just because "Alienation of Affection" may not be on the books, if you can show INTENTIONAL infliction of (economic) loss due to divorce from seduction that can result in a lawsuit. Then you add "emotional pain" costs on top of that and yes, you could sue someone for millions of dollars. Doesn't mean you're going to get millions- it just means it's going to be lowered to something "reasonable".
I strongly encourage you to look up "lawsuits on economic harm"
Not just no, but HELLL NOOOO. GET THE FUCK AWAY FRO ME YOU TRAITOROUS, CHEAP, CHEATING TRAMP!!
I would not piss on you if you were on fire, that's as close as we'll ever be again. Let me know if you're gong to attend family functions so I'l know not to be there.
Friends...what a facing joe.
Since there were a good number of them submitted relatively close together I suppose they were a collection you had sitting around. Has they been submitted to various publishing houses before/
Your stories vary from good to terrible. This one is so ridiculous as to be terrible. Why would he care what happened to the unrepentant, cheating whore?
And to comment on cowboy up. A minus 20.
Don't read any of this cuck wannabe wimp ass author. He sucks. His protagnists appear manly. Ut are pussy wimps. The wives are truly evil. But husbands forgive them.
You have been warned. Don't read Freewheels shit.
WHY the fuck would you help this delusional cunt. SHe had no reason and fucked him over and chose the fuck buddy, seriously this is just bad
It was a decent story until the final paragraph. After the brazen way that whore betrayed her husband, there is no way he'd pay off the $200k loan. She gleefully tossed aside 30 years of marriage for a big cock... Ed owed her nothing.
Lost two stars for helping the unrepentant slut. Yes, unrepentant...I don't for a second believe she regrets her affair. It would have been a 1 if he'd taken her back
her husband would NEVER forgive or forget what she'd done... Her self-centered request that they be friends is fucking preposterous. And him paying off her $200,000 share of the loan? You PC asshole authors are disgusting hypocrites. You peddle your lines of touchy feely bullshit but we all know that, if YOU were ever caught up in that situation, she'd never get a fucking dime. You'd have Maxine Waters, Nancy Pelosi, Harry Reid, Elizabeth Pocahontas Warren, Chuck Schumer and the Congressional Janitorial staff going all out on building a case to terminate her Section 8 housing assistance and food stamps.
This is a one or two star story. Now I have to check to see if I have any eyewash that effectively flushes b.s.
It's Plain And Simple! ..If You Cheat You Will Be Dumped!....He Was Great In The Sack But Lacked Everything Else!....Who Believes This Shit ?....To Me That Sucks! ..What's Wrong With Kicking The Predator In The Kahoonies (can't spell ). .
You know that if You Play With Your Dick Too Much It Will Fall Off ( That's What Mom Used To Say) ★★
Student loans that the parents took out would have both husband and wife as co-signers. She was only paying the interest. The $200,000.00 "she" owed was not getting ANY smaller. If she died first, husband would still be on the hook for them. If she died first, then he died shortly thereafter, the student loans would be a debt his estate would be liable for, reducing any amounts to the children, and possibly forcing his portion of the insurance business (or all of it, if his father was dead at husband's demise) into bankruptcy, essentially destroying the business for the children.
So paying off her portion was simply a wise business / estate decison.
If I were hubby, I would have had an actuary give me an assesment of life expectancies for each, than waited until I got closer to either's anticipated death date before paying it off. Let the ex-wife sweat out her debt load for a while! (Given his state of health, smacking her upside the head would not be a wise move for his physical health or legal status. Courts may not like wife beaters, even if she deserved it!)
I kind of liked this story, it just left to many unanswered questions. If Ed didn't have a clue that Helen was cheating since right after the christmas party, When did he get so smart to figure everything even before it happened? Helen said that she didn't know Ed was facetiming her. Yet why would she hold the phone far enough away from her that Ed could see her erect nipples? And how did Ed remember everything in that call if he was dying? To many questions. And many more.
Only for the real perverts called cuckold/wimps!!!
She duped him with the blackmail story and still ended up with ruining the dicks life? Damn, is there any indication that what Helen told was a lie without her story? Meh, her part could have been an epilogue.
True story - 30 year old wife habs no chance recovering from debilitating disease lingering for years in coma-like state. Good looking healthy 31 year old husband hires full time nurse.
Five years down road, husband and nurse fall in love. Have affair.
Both her family and his disowned him
Should he have been monk?
First, you discuss options with spouse.
Second, in today's world numerous options other than infidelity are available to her.
Number of strange actions in story. She is put on HRT, indicating she is well along in menopause state...not sure she needs birth control.
HRT makes her sooooooo continuously horny, while husband has ED, she ever consider having doctor use different HRT combo.
But really, discreet? What a joke. She engages in skype with husband while naked in bed, lover next to her...both she and lover knew husband could see them.
Flip situation around...double hysterectomy...wife becomes frigid...I bet wife would encourage husband to bang every 20 year old he can findings.
They’re both fuckheads. Ed shouldn’t have wasted his time or money on her. Who needs that kind of ‘friend’ in their lives? She couldn’t be a fucking wife (for him; she was fucking David, though) so what kind of friend could she be? Ed’s a fucking gimp
And Helen...that cunt has the GALL to defend her secret cock and move in with him, had the nerve to be ‘angry’ at her husband for daring to ruin her walking dildo’s life, gets all pissy because he, the innocent party, didn’t leave her ‘all the mice things’ when he left her and has the fucking audacity to try and lay claim to part of his business!
These two cunts deserve to be miserable. As for the breathing penis...I’m glad he’s dead at least. 1*
You took an interesting stored and bored readers with over-the-top repetition.
Make a big to do about having profiles and denigrating those that do not.
Take time to visit their profiles!
No Answer
Nothing
None
That sums up their profiles, not even a one sentence blur
Other than weird name they are as anonymous as the anons they defile.
They do of course allow email contact so we can tell them
how much we appreciate their scorn
I actually liked the story until the very end when he payed her debts? WTF no just no. Easiest 1 star of my life.
Almost a Perfect 5* UNTIL the Epilogue when ED Paid HER Debts.
Whatta' CUCK
Actually you didn't pay attention to the sequence of the settlements she got none of them or alimony. Timing is everything. He was not working, as far as her giving the money to the idiot... wouldn't be the first time a woman, or a man, has been foolish like that , grabbing at straws.
The divorce left her with half of everything. The stuff Ed took was returned by Court Order and split in half. She got alimony, child support and the house until her son graduated. She got half of Ed's retirement AND since Ed was so stupid, she got half the settlement against the Company. The kids education and other bills would have been paid out of the assets once the kids finished school, so the rest was bullshit. She had plenty of money. Not even a fool lets David use her money after his background is disclosed during the divorce. Badly thought out story.
Coercion is said to be implied when a person in authority over another has a sexual relationship.
Even if it is consensual.
Reasons are the relationship is not between equals.
Check out case law!
2nd time through & even worse than before. I'm sure a good editor could have improved this quite easily. I found your writing style stilted & uneven almost as if you were writing by numbers - a pity really, as this tale had good bones but for me you lacked the writing skills to do it justice.
Their divorce may state that they each agree to pay half the debt, but unless they refinanced it with new individual loans, if she can't pay her half the lender will still come after him for full payment. So he's saving himself from having to pay late fees and penalties caused by her not making her share of the payments.
Shit happens and,it really hit the fan in this tale!
After 30+ years of a good marriage,Helen just couldn't keep it in her panties,her juices I mean.I guess she had her own mid-life crisis and wanted to get it while the getting was still good. A BIG dick trumped a heart flush and led to her crapping out!
She lied from the get go,which was clear in her version,and that big dick led to disrespect,betrayal,the callousness of putting severe stress on the damaged heart of her life partner,etc. A real twat who just through it all away just to drool over the big stick of a wolf who she knew had already boned most of the women where she worked.
Don't feel sorry for her in the least.
After a few years and the subsiding of the initial betrayal,hubby quietly showed his ultimate love,and appreciation of 30+ years of a wonderful life by paying off Helen's debt and becoming something of an old friend.
Really sad story,when all is said and done.
Hubby is perhaps not THAT magnanimous. If he does not pay off her portion of the student loan, then chances are excellent that their children will when they get underway in their work life! Which, ultimately, they should, anyway!
Flat and emotionless. But sadly no way Ed comes out on top. She gets half the house and his pension/savings. And suing the company gets you laughed out of court nothing more.
At one point, Helen was referred to as "Deb" -- it is pretty basic in writing to keep the characters straight.
I agree with those who said the story was "so-so" and with those who said to keep trying as there seemed to be potential in your work.
I liked the plot structure of this story. Four out of five. But it seemed very flat and unemotional. It tells the story without showing the story. It is almost like English is not the author's first language.
I liked the wife's suffering at the end. and I liked how the husband paid off her debts - it shows he is the better person.
I actually felt a bit more emotion at the end with the wife's version of events. I would encourage the author to keep trying because i see potential here.
Cheers
Steve
She is a slut, whore , liar! There can be no reconciliation! The part I find hard to get around is when she finally described the affair and his drink can cock and her orgasms Fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuken HEEEEEEEEEEELLLLLL man ! I would quickly give her the bums rush out the door! Love you all! GREG. OH 50 % for the story 50 % for the description of the sex BYE
If ever a divorce was necessary, this is it. Stupidity and avarice are not grounds for reconciliation.
Wow - The Helen haters are really extreme and must have never made a mistake. Helen wanted her loving devoted husband and a young hot lover at the same time. She thought she could keep Ed fooled but life has a habit of revealing the truth. I thought that her punishment suited her crime. She will live a lonely life forever stained by her actions to the people who mattered to her - her family. Her lover David lost his lucrative job and his wealth. Helen tried to steal the family business but she also lost her good job having to settle for a lesser one. There are some who got upset because Ed paid her loan. This loan was for the kids' education which most men would pay as the breadwinner in the family. Ed let her struggle with the debt until she showed some remorse for her actions. Also, Helen was the mother of his kids so if she suffers they suffer. Overall, Helen got what was coming to her but letting her struggle for the rest of her life with crushing debt for the kids' education would have been cruel.
Had very little value. Except for the fact that she explains to us that her account of being "coerced" into the sexual relationship was a lie - which could easily have been revealed in the first part of the story - it's the typical male concept of how and why a woman decides to cheat, which hardly ever seems to work.
The story was hot but it was a real boner killer to read her story
Like she ruined their marriage and then after getting her just deserts the idiot pays off her debts
AFTER SHE TRIED TO BURN HIS ASS IN COURT
And then reading the story you see that she just would have given said money tor.Big dick to fuck off with
The story was good but even if they didn't get back together at the end of the day if the roles were reversed and dude was on his death bed she would have just fucked her boss and had her boss went broke then her poor late husband's business would just get given away
She already put cock over her family so once she is all alone she is all alone