All Comments on 'The Family Mansion Rewrite Pt. 10'

For the most part I am enjoying your stories but Your characters all come across as stupid as fuck. 10 chapters into this one and they are all gullible morons who can’t put together a coherent thought about what is going on. I really don’t know how to rate your stories anymore

The slow "cooking" continúes. I prefer this slow cooking to the fast one of those stories in which the females fuc* anybody. I so much hope that this author doesn't turn his stories into one of those M+F+ sharing/polyamory stories. I prefer much better this kind of story in which a very lucky guy attracts the women around him and especially the closest ones to him.

This tease has gone on long enough. The whole Virgin Nathan thing has become completely unbelievable. Liz's inner Sex Demon/guilt cycle is equally absurd. 10 chapters of this teasing has crossed the line into sadism and has left this reader feeling manipulated by a 10 chapter tease......