All Comments on 'The Ghost of East Hill Bridge'
by QuietBedlam21
- 7 Comments
Superb! A really good and interesting story. Good development and no need for hard banging scenes.
I would appreciate a sequel. Maybe he starts a restaurant near the bridge or somewhere else and names it after her. Maybe she then is able to materialize again as some kind of destiny fulfilled. She could become a singer in the restaurant who knows what fantasy is up to. :D
I really hope this is an entry in the Halloween Contest, you've got 5 stars from me!
Excellent story! I gave it five stars. I can tell you planned out how the story would end from the beginning, but it still had a bit of a twist to it. I thought I knew where the story was heading from fairly early, but it ended up having a much sweeter, more melancholy ending than I was expecting.
Very very nice story. No meandering bullshit but a storyline worth following and still applicable to literotica. PLUS it has an ending! Loved it