All Comments on 'The Girl Of My Dreams'

"Emerald eyes gaze out from underneath a mane of thick red hair and my gaze shifts momentarily downwards to admire the triangle of cleavage afforded by her blouse and the creamy white thighs displayed beautifully by her miniskirt."

I voted.

Good to see you writing again. It's the best way to get it out of your system.

A very enjoyable interlude Earl, first piece of yours I've read. I shall read more. Your vocabulary and style of writing appeals to me. Mat.

Geez, I don't remember any lectures like THIS! Maybe I shouldn't have stayed awake. ~Imp

A fine read indeed. Some great elements in the writing, the description of his zipper being undone particularly stuck out in my mind. Your return to writing is definitely a good thing.

My only complaint, other than to wonder where the hell gals like that were during my lectures, is that this should be in Fantasy, not EC.

Good work and welcome back to the weird world of writing.

Rumple

Welcome back hon! Really loved this peice.

Now, to get MINE finished and submitted *g*

And I voted.

That was super hot, Earl. Glad to see you're posting again and not being such a little tease, lol. Seriously, it was great and seems very polished. Keep up the good work. -T

My only suggestion would be that, I knew it was a fantasy pretty early on... It might have been better if there was mroe of a nodding-off/jerking awake thing happening. This sort of thing happens to me all the time, where I'm caught in that in-between state of waking and dreaming, unable to resolve the reality. That tension might be something that would propel the sex from one level to another, which you're already tilting towards.

I suspect I'm suggesting ideas that you already thought you incorporated - if so, I would just say that the technique just needs to get pumped up a smidge.

Lovely story.

Well done. You made it interesting, even with the use of an old theme.

Q_C

Just what I needed :)

Loved this story - certainly makes the idea of lectures more appealing anyway.

Out of curiosity, which of your stories is your favourite? You write so many different things; I just wonder what you're most "interested" in…

I loved this story! It made me particularly hot because I have red hair, and an Irish background. I was readily able to imagine myself being the girl in the scenario.