by TheNovalist
Rolling along nicely but would prefer a little more story development 8i each instalment. 5
Another 5 star chapter. I'm enjoying the story line even more than the sex. And the sex is pretty good.
I just love this story and check daily for updates please keep these chapters coming.
Had this issue at the end of last chapter, if he really wanted to know who was in the tunnels he could have just seen who was sleeping and figured out who was missing, it is not like there are a lot of people there.So the whole mystery of who was in the tunnels at night shouldnt really be a mystery but i get plot point, just doesnt make much sense to me is all.
The last couple of chapters were a lot of story, a little sex. This one is a nice break with a lot of sex and a little story. As always I'm eagerly looking forward to the next chapter. Fantastic series, one of the best I've read here and it never gets old.
I find myself skipping the sex just to read the sorry, my favourite series so far!
I am really liking the conflicting mind control by two warring gods /godesses... The biological aspect of the red flowers seems to be supressed in Dan's mind as he seems to have ignored that tidbit from Dr walker's recordings...
The story seems to be getting lost in the extended sex scenes. I really enjoy the story, and I’m beginning to be bored by the repetitive nature of the sex scenes.