All Comments on 'The Master and the Ring Ch. 10'

And the story is progressing beautifully. BUT... get an editor or proofreader, please. Frequent typos detract from the quality of your work. Spell check/auto correct ain't cutting it.

Worth the wait ! This is a true tribute to your vivid story telling , just wish it was longer .

I wait with baited breath for the next chapter .

Thanks for the read .

TX CRACKER

This has been excellent series. I check for new chapters almost on daily basis.

However I have noticed that now you have moved on to other stories (which are good, by the way).

Would you be completing this series? Or have you foresaken it?

Thanks for the first ten chapters, in any case.

Give us a week or less and a new chapter will be posted.

7 years later ... As I read this story for the first time . I don't know if you receive my comments so long after submitting the story . But I must say that this story was a little different than some of the others . I think that the successful ritual was the reason it made it so good .