All Comments on 'The Supplement Pt. 01'
by WritingwhatIlike
- 59 Comments
This is really good! The steady escalation is really good, thanks for posting!
5 Stars, well written, though a little long winded at times, and there is nothing wrong with a little bit of make believe it captures the imagination and makes people smile, after all, isn't that what erotic writing is supposed to be about?
Loved it! Can't wait to see what happens next! Five stars and a favorite point!
WOW! Super steamy! You checked off all the boxes, jumped every hurdle (and removed it), silenced every doubt, increased them lusting for each other until neither could hold off, then sexily consummated their union--again, and again, and again. Well done for an easy 5!
Another great story. I'm really enjoying your content. You really seem to enjoy the buildup and payoff.
Wondering why she hadn't had her husband served? He doesn't care about her. I love a love story.
I don't give out many 5 stars, but this tale earned it. Fine plot, sensitive character development, interesting variation for the incentive.
Well done!
It sounds like Jean needs to slip the supplement pill into Chucks OJ. Then if she gets pregnant she can claim it is his. Or maybe Jean finds out Chuck really isn't working so much but has a sidepiece and they split up.
This was a fun ride. Well-written, relatable characters and an imaginative plot with the potent berries mixture. What was that website again? 5 stars.
I’ll echo some others - great job building the characters a plot lines. I enjoyed how you used the pill to start the fire but later pulled back a bit, letting the natural progression of two lovers developing a relationship beyond the sex. I’m looking forward to the next installment. How does she get pregnant without having sex with her husband as a diversion? I’ve read enough LE stories here to know he’s having an affair - LOL! 5*
Guys, I am from India and would like to implant in your minds the images of thick grannies actresses that will play Jean, much better if she is also Punjabi with hairy pits and pudenda…then as you jerk off, imagine smelling her curry farts! Also more of us will be coming in here to implore the author to implement woke and progressive storylines into the plot: INTERRACIAL INCEST!!! #Biden2022
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Great story. Not a quick stroke story but definitely makes you want to read more. Can't wait for the next chapter. 5 ⭐️
I was expecting him to give Jenny at school some wash. Maybe in next instalment. Wonder what’s happens if the father uses the wash? Lol
What a great read. An absolute pleasure. 5 stars for sure. Can't wait to see where you take this story!
Five well deserved stars for an excellent story. I'm thinking hubby is cheating on her big time, andThera divorce in the future.
An amazing erotic and touching story, hope we hear more soon. Would love to hear more about future pregnancies and how their relationship deepens going forward.
What an unusual concept. An excellent story. 5 well deserved stars. Can't wait (but guess I have to) for more chapters.
Insanely hot story! Please continue with chapter 2. It's been long time since you finished chapter 1.
It's been 3/4 of a year since part 1 came out. You just submitted a new story so you're still writing. When is part 2 going to be published???
Wwwhhhaaaaaatttt!!!! No Part 2 yet...I was so looking forward to this storybeing expanded upon...where all of it ends up...
Mom and Son are very good together...and she moved to top of 'fantasy list' by changing her wardrobe a bit!!
Five**5**Stars..almost a (4) because of small issues...I choose to leave that, and move on...🌠🌠🌠🌠🌠🌋😈🔥💥
Damn! this is my second read of this fantastic lovey dovey story- and still no part fucking two! Duped again! Why move on to writing and posting other stories when this one is NOT finished?! Do you like to torture your readership? Part one can and does stand on its own, but 'part 1' begs for a 'part 2', right? so i guess we're all stuck in limbo until you figure out how to finish this. Limbo SUCKS!!!!!!!!!!!!! Or i can take it up if you're not willing, gladly!
I'm sorry for the torture! I should have left it as a stand alone story, but at the time of publication it felt like a 2-parter. I will do my best to produce more of this story, I promise.
My god!
What an awesome story!
You truly have a very real talent as a writer. The depth of your interpretations and descriptions allow my imagination to put me in the room with them in crystal clarity.
I'm now joining the other commentators in lobbying for a chapter two, and firmly believe it should open with Chuck getting his dead ass kicked out of the house the same day that Jean tells him point blank that she has no further use for him, and demands a divorce and suggests that he should just get a job as a speed bump because that's all he's good for.
Sincerely,
B4PW.
Well done. Others have done this story and it's always a marvel comics exaggeration of the 3" turning into 13" and 3 gallons being spewed everywhere. Added to my favorites.
Loved this story Well written and very erotic I’m going to read the 2nd part today. Please don’t space it out so far, I’m really into it and can’t wait for part 3!!!
Surprised the son doesn't have a massive horse cock for once, even with the magic pills. Good call.
"You can't fuck me." Gee thanks, mom, way to ruin the mood. The whole rule thing was honestly a major annoyance every time it was mentioned. Put a damper on the build up for me. Thankfully it didn't last for long but it sure was annoying to endure.
As an avid reader of mutually consensual incestuous ove stories, especialy between mother and son, I find this story extremely well written, logically constructed with somewhat indepth character development. The son's short comings are to be expected due to his lack of experience. The mother's understanding of the son's lack of experience, the strength of her ego and id, her desire and acceptance of her strengths and weaknesses exemplifies a mature, loving and sexual female human being who accepts her son as her lover and requires discrete training to become her sexual and human equal.
I was waiting for her to introduce a bit of cunnilingus as an alternative to breaking 'the rule'. I loved it though!!
Loved it. I especially loved the truthful and hilarious workings of the teenage boy's mind....Made me laugh. Kudos....a hard thing to do in writing. Can't wait to read part 2.
5/5 Thanks!
Sorry. I had to stop reading when you felt it necessary to interject all that baby crap . . . . 3/5
Just what every eighteen year old boy just out of high school, a baby, dirty diapers to change. Not to mention lack of sleep, spitting up, and then sick babies and teething. NO more parties, bills to pay insurance to purchase and doctor bills. Glad you let us no ahead of time what was coming before we waist time reading the rest.