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Click hereTonight was different. As he shoved himself deep inside of her, for a brief moment he saw not just his mother but the mother of his children. He saw her with a big belly and big breasts, welcoming his semen just as she did now.
He thought he'd felt a glimmer of what his mom felt when she gave herself to her man.
She was his to breed. Her fertile womb was his to fill with his children.
He couldn't wait for it to happen.
- COMMENTS
Such penmanship, so well written. Straight to my top 10. Deserves an extra star, so here you go: 6/5
Keep up the great work
I mean not a bad story, seeing as I love, love. However would be nice if he could learn to control himself enough for her to be able to get off at least. The sex scenes don't feel complete without her orgasm. Hopefully that changes, no one like a 2 pump chump
Just what every eighteen year old boy just out of high school, a baby, dirty diapers to change. Not to mention lack of sleep, spitting up, and then sick babies and teething. NO more parties, bills to pay insurance to purchase and doctor bills. Glad you let us no ahead of time what was coming before we waist time reading the rest.
Sorry. I had to stop reading when you felt it necessary to interject all that baby crap . . . . 3/5
Loved it. I especially loved the truthful and hilarious workings of the teenage boy's mind....Made me laugh. Kudos....a hard thing to do in writing. Can't wait to read part 2.
5/5 Thanks!
I was waiting for her to introduce a bit of cunnilingus as an alternative to breaking 'the rule'. I loved it though!!
As an avid reader of mutually consensual incestuous ove stories, especialy between mother and son, I find this story extremely well written, logically constructed with somewhat indepth character development. The son's short comings are to be expected due to his lack of experience. The mother's understanding of the son's lack of experience, the strength of her ego and id, her desire and acceptance of her strengths and weaknesses exemplifies a mature, loving and sexual female human being who accepts her son as her lover and requires discrete training to become her sexual and human equal.
Surprised the son doesn't have a massive horse cock for once, even with the magic pills. Good call.
"You can't fuck me." Gee thanks, mom, way to ruin the mood. The whole rule thing was honestly a major annoyance every time it was mentioned. Put a damper on the build up for me. Thankfully it didn't last for long but it sure was annoying to endure.
Loved this story Well written and very erotic I’m going to read the 2nd part today. Please don’t space it out so far, I’m really into it and can’t wait for part 3!!!
Well done. Others have done this story and it's always a marvel comics exaggeration of the 3" turning into 13" and 3 gallons being spewed everywhere. Added to my favorites.
My god!
What an awesome story!
You truly have a very real talent as a writer. The depth of your interpretations and descriptions allow my imagination to put me in the room with them in crystal clarity.
I'm now joining the other commentators in lobbying for a chapter two, and firmly believe it should open with Chuck getting his dead ass kicked out of the house the same day that Jean tells him point blank that she has no further use for him, and demands a divorce and suggests that he should just get a job as a speed bump because that's all he's good for.
Sincerely,
B4PW.
I'm sorry for the torture! I should have left it as a stand alone story, but at the time of publication it felt like a 2-parter. I will do my best to produce more of this story, I promise.
Damn! this is my second read of this fantastic lovey dovey story- and still no part fucking two! Duped again! Why move on to writing and posting other stories when this one is NOT finished?! Do you like to torture your readership? Part one can and does stand on its own, but 'part 1' begs for a 'part 2', right? so i guess we're all stuck in limbo until you figure out how to finish this. Limbo SUCKS!!!!!!!!!!!!! Or i can take it up if you're not willing, gladly!