All Comments on 'The Sweetest Husband in the World'
by donaldelliott11
- 31 Comments
I can never understand why people have to rail on and on about how sick and twisted they find the cuckolding stories. If that's the case, why are they reading them? Just move on to something you like and quit spewing negative shit.
LOVED THIS "PIECE!" I HAVE THIS SAME FANTASY AND WOULD LUV IT TO BECUM A REALITY. IF ONLY...
Wrote a satire in which two groups of people warred over whether soft-boiled eggs should be eaten from the wide end (narrow end pointed down) or the narrow end (pointed up).
The annonyidiots here are similarly fighting about a small thing. Loving Wives is in the end about whatever the moderators say it is. But we're all getting hard (I hope) reading about wives screwing men other than their husbands. The Holy War here is being waged by fans of stories in which the slut wife's husband promoted the infidelity and finds it sexually exciting, against the fans of stories in which the slut wife initiated the infidelity herself, and the husband finds it sexually exciting.
By the way, both are "fetishes", in that sexual excitement comes from aspects external to the physical act of two people copulating.
Also by the way, almost all of the sex acts in my story were heterosexual. To suggest that this story belongs in the Gay category is insane.
To rant here about the morality or the wisdom of fictional characters is insane. It's not real, people. We get it that some readers wouldn't want the real people in their own real lives behaving this way.
I generally delete anonymous comments that discuss something other than the quality of the writing.
Don
But on one hand, Sandy should have taken their child out of the home and waited until the three cheaters were in the house. Then he should have barred all the doors and windows so they couldn't escape. And next went ahead and lit the place on fire. If any made it out, have a gas can on hand to toss on them, before tossing the cheater back into the fire.
On the other hand, I know from experience, having a third in the bedroom is absolutely fantastic! Creampie eating is fun but sucking it straight from the source is even better. I love to suck our boyfriends cock and him cumming in my mouth. Knowing I'm the one to make him cum makes my mouth water and I'm not the least gay. In fact, I hate to even touch a man, other than shaking his hand. Or sucking his cock,.
When the cuckold-phobic annonies get finished "1-blasting" a story, it can take many months for a more-realistic average score to develop. But there is nothing they can do to undo a reader "favoriting" the story. I appreciate it!
Pale Writer:
I almost deleted your lengthy and argumentative post. My first reaction was that you were taking a private exchange public, and that it was in any case only barely related to my story. I quickly realized that I would be making a mistake, so have (obviously) left it here.
I firmly believe that the LW Police are a unique pest on Literotica. I see few comments in any other category about whether or not a story belongs in the category. Who the fuck cares?
The categories are nonsensical because they are non-exclusive. How about an interracial sex act involving a group of people, some dominant, who are gay? Should it be posted in all four Sections, or none?
As to the alleged malevolent intent of someone like myself posting in LW something you think could have been posted in another category, what makes you think LW has an audience so desired by writers that they sneak in here? Only one of my 4 stories was posted in LW, and I have reached about 100,000 readers for each of the two posted in Group Sex.
You stand by your comments "on the quality of the prose." Fine. I'll take your opinion and file it away. Where I file it might depend on whether or not you've ever posted anything here. You haven't, so obviously I have no basis on which to respect your opinion. I am not saying that the 99% of Literotica participants who have never posted ought to remain silent. They're entitled to express opinions, but they're not entitled to have the real writers pay much attention.
You say again that any sex you don't like is a fetish. As you may know from my other comments, I think these are ALL fetishes. Enjoying the sex act with your dearest is Plain Sex. Enjoying the sex act your dearest has with another person is obviously a fetish named voyeurism. [See Wikipedia: "The American Psychiatric Association has classified certain voyeuristic fantasies, urges and behavior patterns as a paraphilia in the Diagnostic and Statistical Manual (DSM-IV).... It is described as a disorder of sexual preference in the ICD-10.] Heck, my wife thinks that me jacking off while reading any hot story here, rather than jumping her bones, is itself a fetish, and I think she's probably correct.
Anyway, Pale Writer, can't you and I get our boners from different stimuli without publicly reviling each other?
I agree and disagree with Palewriter
1. Where I do not agree with Plewriter:
If the cuck authors want to show bisexual or homosexual husbands with the cuckolding lifestyle I think they do the RIGHT THING! The cuckold lifestyle is the suitable for bisexual husbands and homosexual husbands. I think the Loving Wives are now the hub for every type extramarital affair stories for wives from the BTB (my favorite) through RAAC and Clueless Husband stories to the cuckold wife sharing stories. If the owner of the Literotica does not want to divide the LW hub into 2 hubs (as the Common Sense would want) the bisex husbands and the homosexual husbands with extramarital practice wives stories have place in the LW....I AVOID TO READ THESE TYPE STORIES.
Once more the cuckold lifestyle with creampieeating bisexual and homosexual husbands is not psychiatric disorder moreover the suitable
Where I agree with Palewriter:
2. The submissive heterosexual husband behavioral is fetish and psychiatric disorder.
The heterosexual wife watching is extreme porn addiction, it is same addiction like alcohol, drug, gambling and other addictions. Addiction is psychiatric disorder too, but a less psychiatric disorder than the submissive hetero fetish.
My own thoughts:
3.The readers and authors mix up the main types of the cuckolds.
3.1. The bisex and homosex husbands live in the suitable marriage they enjoy the creampies, cocksucking of the bulls and the porn performance of the bulls and their wives.
3.2. The submissive hetero cuckold life style is psychiatric disorder.
3.3. The hetero wife watcher husbands are extreme porn addicts.
3.4. The mutual wife sharing pairs and the swingers are simple sex addicts.
3.5. Those husbands who stuck in a bad marriage with cheater wives or other type shrew wives (for sake of his kids, for lazyness, for material reasons, for illness etc...) they are the WIMPS. Yes they could be cuck when their wives cheated and they do RAAC or they do not conflict with their cheating wives and they live together.
3.6. Cuckold husband is that husband who is faithful (without extramarital affairs) and his wife has extramarital affairs only. So ex husbands lost their cuckold name with the divorce and widower is not cuck at all.
Once more: Cuckold husband is who lives together cheatier wife and he is faithfull!
3.7. If the husband of the extramarital practicer wife has extramarital affairs with other women that husband IS NOT CUCKOLD. This type marriage is OPEN MARRIAGE.
There is an English language; its words have definitions.
The word "cuckold" has a definition.
Whether everyone here likes it or not, a cuckold is any man whose wife has had sex with another man.
There's also a word for the probably small fraction of cuckolds who tolerate their wife's activities: "wittol". A wittol is a cuckold of a certain type.
For thousands of years husbands agreed that being cuckolded was an undesirable thing, because there was no reliable birth control. Indeed the very origin of the word refers to a bird's egg in the nest from another male bird.
I doubt any significant number of men ever enjoyed being cuckolds until birth control removed raising another man's child from the equation.
"Have you ever noticed that almost every ID that favorites a story never comment on the story?"
No, but who cares? Readers aren't obliged to do either one.
I favorite some stories, and I comment on some, but the 2 things don't happen together very much. Most stories I hate I never finish, but even if I do finish I couldn't be bothered to comment. I sometimes (OK, often) leave a comment critical of poor proofreading, but that's mostly when I otherwise enjoyed the story and wished it had been "more perfect".
Some people favorite a lot, and most not at all. I think it's weird that some writers have one favorite: themselves. What's up with that? I'm far from my own favorite. I wish I could write as well as Deirdre, Orestes, and many of the other greats!
"Now hurry up and delete this comment before too many readers laugh their ass off at you. By the way did not like your story and gave it a 1."
I only delete some anonymous comments. Yours was thoughtful, even though cowardly anonymous, and ended with an opinion of the quality of my story. Why would I delete it?
Thanks for your earlier appreciative words. I took your advice and truly enjoyed this and your other stories. I found the power exchange in this story very exciting. I most identify with Sandy, who discovers his sissy-sub side as well as his slut wife. Very Hot. I look forward to reading new submissions.
Hi and thanks for writing. I really enjoyed the description of the visitors having a little fun with Sandy's wife. My wife has had visitors, but I would definitely be shocked to know more was going on...but I could wish! Jimmy
I am DSandy in sex. Im not a wimp at work but Im just like Sandy when it comes to sex. Spunk is my favoutite dish and it doesnt matter whether its from my wifes cunt or from a cock. Its delicious.
Oh there is one difference between me and Sandy my cock fully hard just touches 4" but these days fully hard is rare.
Thankyou for this story. Came in my hand and licked it up mmmmm.
Beta males such as myself should be taught early on that the Alpha's sperm from a larger, harder penis is their prize. I want my future wife to definitely make love with and breed with a real man worthy of her.
I repeat this is a story. It is reasonably realistic.
The 3 of them are kinky.
Some wives cheat. My wife cheated on me with my best buddy. She did not even do that behind my back but very openly before my eyes when i was sober.
My best buddy, after he divorced, stayed with my wife & me. The 2 of them hit it off from the get go. The 3 of us went places together.
My wife started referring to me and him as "my two boyfriends".
Then at the beach the 2 of us were taking turns in apying the sunscreen on my eife's back & the back of her legs. When she saw his hard on while he was applying sunscreen lotion, she just commented, "is that a compliment to me?"
She really loves to dance & he is an exquisite dancer. Now his hard on was pressing her tummy (he is tall).
One night i asked her, "has he fucked you yet?" "Not yet, but i did suck his dick. Please don't be mad at me. I do love you."
Thereafter we lived in a ménage à trois for about 6 months until he moved to another part of the country.
I'm a sissy closet faggot CD cocksucker and my fantasy is for my wife to fuck other men in front of me and then feed me their cocks in my mouth and in my man-pussy. I loved this story. 5 Stars. Please tell more like this one.
I would love to have you respond to this comment and let me know your thoughts about my situation. Any advice would be helpful for a married sissy man still in the closet about his sexuality.
This story really turns me on. I especially love stories told from a woman's point of view. I truly wish my wife would fool around on me with another man and then make me their submissive cocksucking faggot bitch -- to both of them. That would be heaven. Don't listen to any negative comments - this is one of the best stories on Literotica. I can't wait to read many many more of your stories, over and over.
I am a Sandy too. I love this story and wish Tom and Jack were fucking my wife and me. I really enjoy the humiliation and would love being forced to suck cock as my entire female family watches and joins in in humiliating me.
my semi soft cock has cum in my knickers reading this story and pretending Im Sandy. pleadse write some more
Hmm - well done story, but after reading how Sandy found out and what happened after that I felt sad for Sandy and didn't like the story as much.
Wish I was Sandy! I could stand my wife having lovers, and using me, too!
I think Donald must know me. Im another Sandy and hes got Sandy just right excep hid cock is bigger than mine. Ive also grown to love cock as much as Sandy does and my wife is happy as well.
Dani .
This was the nearest to a credible cuck story that I have come across in a long while. I hope that trouble will not come from Jack putting the story round the neighbourhood. This is an example of how such people as Jack cause repression in society in many different ways. This is why Trolls do their Trolling, so as to experience this power that they have and why it is that, over many centuries most people have come to embrace respectability and plain vanilla sex, and why it is that large numbers of people have sexual fantasies which are not related to their lived experience. People have stopped hoping that their fantasies can ever become real but they are aware that another but diminished self has been closeted. If the masses ever collectively realised that the various types of Jack, including the body of the Churches, the institutions have effectively murdered their TRUE selves, made the masses enslaved to their Nudging we might see change. Of course there are signs that large numbers of people are breaking out of the mould. If you see someone making a brave attempt to be themselves you will be supportive, I hope.
Donald, you have a talent for making your characters seem real and believable, not just shallow one offs from someone's wet dream. One of the best writers on literotica, and I've read a few. This ranks up there with Make Believe Cuckold and I'll go first. I've never bought anything from Kindle - but if you were the author, I most definitely would.
You probably already know this, but ignore the rating - Loving Wives is a tricky category for this genre. Lots of gems get hidden because of that. Read the literotica forums to find out more regarding this controversy.
Wish 9 had a friend like Tom to bring some sexual pleasure to my wife
My wife started feeding me her creampies, hesitant at first, but when I started loving the taste of her pussy she just let me go. We have an under standing that as long as she comes home, she can fuck anyone she pleases.
The character of Sandy I can relate to. When I found out that my wife was cheating on me, I confronted her and she explained that even though she loved only me, my 4 1/2 inch erection did nothing for her. she faked her orgasm's with me... Even she once told me I should've been born a girl... 5'4" tall. Slender build... I was no threat to any Alpha males... It wasn't until a guy like Jack showed up in our lives I found out she was cheating on me. I did get angry. I wanted to confront him and beat the shit out of him. but she told me that she only loved me and nobody else. And she sure didn't want to see me get hurt... So, for a time, I put up with it....until he no longer wanted her so, I bought her a big fat dildo and so, she finally ended up her outside sexual affairs...