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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Beautiful

Thank you for this very heart warming story. Loved the characters and the story.

OvercriticalOvercriticalover 3 years ago
OK

It was a pretty good story with a predictable plot and all the tension of a wet noodle. It was well put together, the technical aspects were all right, but I prefer something with a little unknown in it. The minute you mentioned her age and improbable motherhood and then the possible cancer, I could have painted a story board with the exact sequence of events. The bop on the head was a weak effort to put a little excitement into the story, but I didn't believe the author of this story would do anything serious to deter him/her from getting to the expected ending. Worth a weak 4*

Bh76Bh76over 3 years ago

Gave you 5*. I was virtually screaming that you didn’t mention their ages in a mature story for the first few pages and then when you did they were only 10 years apart with her under 40. It was a nice romance but not a mature tale.

SisterJezabelSisterJezabelover 3 years ago

I really enjoyed this. Sometimes I like being shown the signposts and knowing where the journey is going to lead. This was one such story. Beautifully crafted in a way that didn't upset me when things happened that may have been predicted. I'm glad Rory persisted and Giselle let her guard down and of course thrilled they got their HEA!

Davester37Davester37over 3 years ago
I loved it

Yes, it was predictable, and yes it was a lengthy read, but it was just so SWEET! I’m always a sucker for the regional details and the vivid setting, so those aspects really kept me interested.

Thank you for writing, and thank you for sharing your work.

Ravey19Ravey19over 3 years ago
Really Great Story

Nice long hot story with plenty of detail and tight dialogue. May have been a little too predictable for some but the nice little twist towards the end involving James certainly set the pulse racing a little fearing a repetition.

Deserves its rating.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

29 and 39 aren't mature lovers, just kids. My wife and I are both 85.

We love good fuck stories and this was a 5 star story.

rightbankrightbankover 3 years ago
thanks

for a romantic story

2oothfairy2oothfairyover 3 years ago
Beautiful

This story was beautifully written and,for a hopeless romantic like me, totally perfect, thank you

fireman527fireman527over 3 years ago
Awesome Story!

Very enjoyable story, you are very a talented writer.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
GREAT storey

Well written complete story, nice ending.

SmuttyandfunSmuttyandfunover 3 years agoAuthor
So Glad to See You're Enjoying This

As you can imagine, a lot of time and effort goes into writing a story, especially a longer one like this. The only reward a writer gets is realizing that their audience appreciates their efforts, and hopefully gets some enjoyment out of their story. Thank you very much for taking the time to read my work, and all the other author's works as well. Your constructive comments are always more than welcome.

SmuttyandfunSmuttyandfunabout 3 years agoAuthor
Thanks for Reading and Voting!

Thanks to everyone who read and voted for this story. I was surprised to discover that it was chosen as a Reader's Choice nominee for December. So thank you to everyone who takes the time to read and vote for all the stories on this site.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

S and F, yet another of your stories has struck a chord with me. I had not a prayer of making a life with my Giselle, but had there been the slightest chance, I have no problem envisioning 24 year old me as Rory, moving Heaven and earth to convince her that we could do it. A thoroughly plausible story, because I’d have lived it given any opportunity. Easy 5 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Having spent a lot of time in and out of a number of hospitals in the past fifteen years, I’ve spoken with a few chaplains. The advice given in your story- have faith that she’ll be fine- doesn’t sound like something a realistic & compassionate chaplain would say.

naughtyandy4unaughtyandy4uover 2 years ago

Wonderful story, enjoyed every minute reading it.

BlissMaraBlissMaraalmost 2 years ago

This is gold. I enjoy your characters, your moral compass, the sexy scenes, the pace and rhythm. Your characters are believable, endearing, and strike a chord of hope and positivity. Keep. Going. Thank you for your talent!

VanescaVanescaover 1 year ago

Any story that depicts a pregnant woman [ Giselle] drinking or an asshole [Chuck Harper, 'Let's have a drink up in my room} ought not to be placed on a public forum. Yes, I know, but it's obvious neither character is referring to tea or lemonade. Too many ignorant readers might be misled to think it's ok.

SmuttyandfunSmuttyandfunover 1 year agoAuthor

Although, I'm not exactly sure what the last comment was referring to, I can assure you that no pregnant women are drinking alcohol in this, or any of my other stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Excellent story. Unfortunately, I was drinking and got at least three different stories confused regarding names., activities, &c. Apologies are due and are humbly offered.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Giselle is a bitch. She allowed Chuck to continue harassing her when she didn't stop him the first time. Anything for big customers!! Rory deserved better

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Old bitches like Giselle are selfish

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

A terrific sexy love story with a sweet ending!

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