All Comments on 'Treasure'

Love it, you were holding out!! I want more.......I want more (lol). I am looking forward to reading more of your works.

I have a new favorite story. Thanks sweetie.

Nice one, and if there were grammatical errors, they didn't interrupt the flow at all.

I would love it if you could finish this story of Andrew and Tiffany. How is he going to keep his treasure and what's going to happen next??? Please some more for us greedy folks

Thank you very much for the support on this story. First endeavors are always nerve wracking - especially with the lack of an editor. I'm a perfectionist vir-girl, so it drives me up one wall and back down another to see mistakes and and try to correct them before I post. As usual, I found them, but thankfully they weren't too jarring to me, so hopefully they weren't too jarrring for the viewers of my story.

To answer Kelligh: Sorry love, I have no immediate plans to continue Andrew & Tiffany's story. Thanks for reading & I hope to put out some more works soon. :D

Aww.man I wish you would continue the story, but you are the artists so we have respect your decision (though she wonders if she could bribe). I have been waiting for you to update your other and low an behold I run across this little "Treasure" (excuse me I couldn't resist). You are a great writer.

Intoxicating story. Even though it's a great story- its perfect ending the way it did.i do love Alphas like Andrew. This story illustrates men like that perfectly. Thank You for sharing!!

This was such a good story . Loved it .

Delicious submission.

Hey everyone, I'd just like to say a big thank you for the feedback. This isn't the normal genre for me, so writing in it is a bit daunting. This story is one of my favorites. Love stories are great, but there's something deliciously wicked of having a good looking man forcing you to come all over his finger, mouth and cock.

Just sayin'... Cheers to all the feedback & make it a great one!

Oooooooooh Hoooooolllly shit....*passes out

just the thought of it makes me a little afraid, for I have never tried this and do not think that I ever will...Who knows right!!! Good read :>)

MORE PLEASE!!!! If not Andrew and Tiffany, more in this genre will do!!!

You really should consider writing more for Tiffany and Andrew. But if not you should deff write some more stories to sare, because I luved this one to bits lol

That was absolutely wonderful. Truly enjoyable. Bravo.

The typos/grammatical errors did not bother me at all, so just continue writing.

This was hot

That was amazingly hot. I would trade places with Tiffany right now! :)

It's a pity that a sequel isn't in your plans for this story. I'd like to see one whereas they rekindle their experience and possibly conceive a child from it.

I truly wish there was more. Grabbed my attention and kept it.

Yrs let's romanatcise kidnapping and rape

Is he going to come back?