by TrampsAnThieves
My first vampire story which I enjoyed though found it a bit repetitive in places.
Not usually a fan of vampires - but, this treatment was well done. I really appreciate some of the Major's, uh, properties. :)
Can hardly wait to see where this one goes.
It seems like there was more screwing than storytelling. It was ok, I just kept waiting for the story to proceed. LM
Interesting storyline and unfolding. Parts were like a summary with less detail in the beginning but has since evolved.