All Comments on 'Vix's Licks Pt. 09'

The focus on Vix that you created in this series so fine. She is one of my favorite characters out of the captivatingly beautiful “Savour Me” series; their moments together and parting so poignant. I recall a line toward the end of their chapter: “I knew the hidden sexual tigress that lurked behind those pretty blue eyes.” I liked the way you wrapped things up here, especially with Mads, albeit a bit hurried. Not complaining because you could spin something around Mads, who is an intriguing/sexually charged character in her own right. Maybe simply me wanting more because you write so well. Yes, I would have liked more between Olivia, Ellie and Vixs — not sex, rather Olivia seeing/knowing that she was so right about Vix, but on further thought not necessary. The last four lines of this piece says it all.

Migbird: Thanks for your comments. You are right about it being a little rushed maybe. Not that I was rushing to write it, but I was aware that I had a lot to fit in but didn't want Part 9 to be massive, or for the series to go on forever.

Mind you, I am pondering on a sequel. 🙂

Lissy

So, so good! A fitting finale for the series. And the way you finessed the situation with Mads was lovely.

Just one other thing -- the whole backstory of music and the band(s) made this series so much richer.

toesucker1: Thank you! The music aspects took quite a lot of research. I'm nearly 40, so i needed to keep it realistic for a character who is 21... I'm waiting for 21 year olds to flame me for being way out of touch. 😆

Lissy

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A perfect ending Lissy! It was sexy and erotic, especially when you have so many characters involved. I don't think I'll ever come across another Lit story where Elastica was referenced so many times! The mentioning of the Garage, the North Circular and Hornchurch [ a bit unfairly treated by the author who has clearly never been to Romford!!], made me smile 😃

CupidCupid: Thanks.

Hornchurch: Apologies.

PS. You are right about Romford. 😉

Hello Lissey,

wonderful writing, perfect characters and a sooooo captivating storyline.

I immensely enjoyed reading it and am looking forward to be reading your other stories in the future.

All my best !!

Karlus

Karlus: Thanks for your comments. A sequel is in preparation...

Great sequence! Very well written, great characters (and quite a diverse lot of them). Kept me reading, and then reading some more... Can't wait for the sequel.

Well done!

CrazyDonutDetective: Thank you. The sequel is already there for your delectation, and just being published on Amazon. 🙂