All Comments on 'Vox Populi Vox Dei Ch. 01'
by WifeWatchman
- 7 Comments
"The voice of the people is the voice of a dog. God, Joshua! The voice of God" Wow I loved the West Wing. Even though I may disagree with most of Bartlet's positions in that show I can see that he wanted what was best for his country and is as closed to an honorable politician literature may see. That was a good show. So take this compliment for what it is worth, this is just as good a story as that show. This story seems to be back at normal crowbar speed which is its own story on its own time not at break neck speed. As usual gotta love your cliff hanger. One may think you tae the readers as being Will E Coyote with the amount of cliff you give us and its done well so far. OK I'm done fluffing you, and look forward to your next section. Thank you!
The second chapter of the story is submitted, and hopefully will be published soon.
tranzmany - I've never seen an episode of 'West Wing', so I'll take your word for it about that show. The title of my story is from the Conan Doyle story, since it's mostly about trials and legal matters.
Once again, you've written an engaging, intricate, and amazing story. You deliver commentary and informed opinions of our national problems, and give them incredible clarity. Your story is powerful, well thought through, and has incredibly evolved from the beginning, years ago.
Thank you for all your hard work. I only wish I could see your storyboard, outline, whatever you use to plan all this in advance. I am consistently amazed how your details flow and fit so seamlessly.
Baldwin is an arrogant fool ... I have to say that WW has developed a great thriller. Now with this state of social distancing, very limited toilet tissue, and Shelter in Place, following Crowbar's exploits and now a timely cliffhanger, I'm starting to bite my fingernails and crack my knuckles ... I LOVE THESE STORIES
As always, great work.
I'm guessing there will be ninjas of the Clan Crowbar kind somehwere along that tunnel that the sneaky bastards are trying to use.
Not sure what US Attorney Asshole saw coming around the corner. Protests? The entire police force?