- Incest/Taboo
- Winter
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All Comments on 'Winter'
by Medicine Hat
- 24 Comments
It is good to read a story that is well written by someone who has obviously passed eighth grade English. I expect to find hard core fucking and sucking on this site, but to find it well written is an exceptional pleasure!
Great story. A hot story that was actually well written, had believable characters and circumstances as well as humour. good work well done. Please write more about these characters.
I've been reading entries on this site for a while now, and of all the one's I've read, this had to be the most plausible. I'm particularly fond of the grammar used; it's very well written.
This is the kind of story that makes me wish I had a sister.
Thank you for making this something I don't regret reading
I agree with that last poster: dear author, this is truly one of the best little stories I've read. and I am merely talking about the writing quality of it. <p>
the first person perspective, in a smart alec sort of way but also with just enough serious contemplation mixed in there in his self-depricating idiocy ----- it's very well put together. I could easily imagine someone like this, because it is really believable. <p>
that says something about you, the writer, in whatever genre or topic you write in....
Having the brother use a condom when he fucked his sister made the activity purely recreational sex, which is perfet for a brother and sister when they fuck. He was not trying to knock her up, he was just enjoying the act of pleasuring his peter by using it on his sister's pussy. Nothing wrong with that. It's what brothers and sisters should do. It's a nice sibling activity which they both enjoy. It is pleasant to imagine their doing this for years, especially after they mrry others.
How refreshing to get to know a character before he pulls his dick out. The guy at work was priceless. Hopefully, he will have more adventures, with or without his sister.
You've hooked me. Delightful piece of writing. Unfortunately, when I went to find other offerings of yours, the proverbial cupboard was pretty bare. I'm looking, with anticipation, for further offerings from you. Very nicely done.
As everyone else has said this story was written extremely well, though I did notice a few typos, it was extremely enjoyable. (Typos are my pet peeve, and these are the ones a spell checker won't catch because they're technically not misspelled.) I hope you keep up the good work and turn this into a series as I think it'd do really well.
Entirely plausible, erotic enough (just) and nicely moderated language. A winner all round for me - and just about how I would want it to happen for me .... he said .... wishing ....
You obviously have writing talent, and did a good job of developing your character early on--unfortunately, a character still suffering from teenage angst in his early twenties is not interesting in an erotica setting. Kind of ruined the whole thing for me.
Fine piece of writing, and believable characters, like everyone else said. Disappointing that he left her in bed for a smoke, though. Hardly romantic, alas, but realistic.
would like to see you do a sequel. Thanks for your submissions.
Good blend of erotica and believable. Had me hard as Hell. Condom was a good touch.
Next time can we leave out the condom and maybe he loses his load inside her
Why is it that in almost all of these stories, the girl bites her lower lip?? can't ypu people think of something original to write?
as woody allen once said, "if you smoke after sex, you're doing it too fast."
A few of you commented well after the author posted this story. This was written in '07' and he hasn't written anything since. He lost interest real quick, so dream on.