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Click here"Hey, cut that---" A much smaller snowball spattered on the arm of his heavy coat. "Lori!" he said, his voice full of mock indignity.
"Target: Connor!" the girl yelled a little late, slapping Rebecca a soggy high-five.
"Alright," he said turning to Ryan. "Now we play a new game, called: use your Aunt Rebecca as a hockey puck. You get the skates, I'll drag her down to the pond."
Rebecca screeched as he went for her. Clouds of snow kicked up around her boots as she ran. He caught her in a gentle tackle and pulled her down to the snow. He desperately wanted to kiss her just then, but not in front of the kids. He just held her for a moment, until Lori came up to them. "Target: Connor," she said, depositing a two-handed snowball in his face.
"Maybe this is why we can never have kids," he said, spitting powdery snow out of his mouth.
"You'd make a great father." She kissed him on his wet, red cheek.
"Hey, what did Uncle Connor get you?" Lori tugged on Rebecca's coat. "Maybe we could play with that."
"Adults don't get toys for Christmas," Ryan said rolling his eyes at his sister.
"He's right, Lori. We get underwear and socks, and lot's of 'em." Connor looked directly at Ryan. "Enjoy it while you can, kid."
Connor and Rebecca sat in the snow for a while longer, long enough to watch Ryan hand the controls over to the little girl. Connor smiled and Rebecca kissed his cheek again.
"Alright you guys," Jan stepped outside. "Inside, and out of those wet clothes."
"Aw mom," Ryan protested.
Jan shooed her kids inside. "That goes for their Aunt and Uncle too." She looked down at her younger siblings. "I'm sorry, for what I said last night." She sort of laughed. "You know, I always thought you two were kind of like Romeo and Juliet, in a backwoods sort of way." That was as much as they were going to get from Jan.
"So," Rebecca said as they climbed out of the snow.
"So," Connor repeated.
She was grinning wide. "So, I believe you still owe me a present. And it damn well better not be underwear."
"Don't worry it's not underwear. I like it when you pick out your own panties, you have such good taste." He pinched her butt through her slick snow pants.
They met in the empty kitchen, changed out of their wet clothes. There were dirty plates and glasses all over the counter, but at least they had some privacy. He saw his present, a box wrapped in gold paper. He handed her a little black leather pouch.
"You got me a shaving kit?" she asked. "Connor, really a Lady Remington would have worked just as well, I'm not that hairy."
"Not the shaving kit, Beck. I hid your gift in my shaving kit." She dug through the cologne and gel until she pulled out a black velvet box. His heart pounded, he finally got her this year.
She opened the box and saw the diamond bracelet he had saved all year for. "Oh Connor." She breathed slowly as she examined it. She saw the marking on the inside of the box, she realized that it was not costume jewelry. "Oh Connor it's real?! How much---"
He shushed her. "Only the financier knows for sure. Do you like it?"
"I love it, but---"
"I want you to wear it then, since you don't have a wedding ring..." He fastened it around her slim wrist.
"Am I worth it?" she asked as she watched the stones glitter in the window light.
"You were worth it ten years ago and you're worth it still." He kissed her properly.
She took the gold box off of the counter and handed it to him. He tore through the paper and opened the cardboard flaps. He pulled out a baseball glove, a vintage blue infielder's glove. "It's a George Brett glove. I know he was your favorite."
"Yeah," Connor said giving her a little kiss. "Beats socks and underwear any day." He pulled out the wadded newspapers she had packed the box with. "Is that it?" He didn't mean to sound cruel or ungrateful, but she had built up quite a reputation for one-upping him in gifts.
She shook her head no.
Oh great, this was going to be a repeat of the laptop, or the leather recliner, or the plasma television.
She took his hand. "Beck if you got me another T.V. so help me..." She brought his palm to rest on her stomach. "Beck?" His eyes opened wide.
She nodded.
"You're? I mean we're! Beck!" he yelled, hugging her tight. Tears streamed down her face as he lifted her off the floor. "Oh, sorry, I'm sorry, I'll have to be more gentle." He put her down and kissed her, over and over.
"How are we going to tell mom? Are we going to tell?" she asked.
"I don't know. I just don't."
"Our lives will change so much, Connor."
"Change is good. This is good." His hand felt her stomach again. He looked into her chocolate eyes and kissed her. Then he took her into the living room to spend Christmas with their family.
The End
- COMMENTS
Well that was sweet. Really wish there was a part 3 where they've had a couple of kids and are enjoying the trials and tribulations of raising their little family. I'll just have to imagine it I suppose. :)
18 years old theme for the 2 stories. a beautiful concept and so well executed. great ending.
a happy skippy.
i hope there is a Part 3 , a PART 4 , a PART 5 something with having Jan to WATCHING Them Make LOVE ( only when ReBBecca is ovulating like Beck's CERVIX is open up a Little an JAN could even see , and can tell that Becca is ready for another child )
A warm hello to Mused!
I want to offer my kindest thanks and respect to you for this really nice story of Connor and Rebecca.
I really love your writing style!
You thankfully have composed a story that's truly fun to read, while so completely staying away from the typical macho sexist ideals and standards found on so very many of the stories on this site, which I very much hate.
A great example of this is when you refer to Rebecca's genitalia as "her treasure". What an awesome way to describe the part of you lovers body that brings you endless amounts of eyes rolling back in your head ecstasy! I love it!
I also take a bit of pleasure in the fact of your basing the story in Kansas, where religion presumably plays a strong part in the majority of households. He's dead now, but I had an uncle who lived there. He was gay, and a school teacher, so I can only begin to imagine all the horrible shit he must've been subjected to, especially while teaching school. We all know how grossly cruel kids can be, and it became very obvious very quickly when talking to him that he wasn't hetrosexual.
It's interesting that you included a jump of ten years in plot of the story. Not many others would do that, and your savory descriptions of innocent light hearted humor was a breath of fresh air that brought a smile to my face, like when Beck smears soap suds on Connor's face in the kitchen.
I'll be looking into more of your works now that I know that you're on the top shelf of story writing.
Thank you again for creating something that makes a difference, is meaningful and matters.
Sincerely,
B4PW.
Definitely 🌟 ⭐ 🌠 💫 🌟 5/5. Although stopping the birth control without discussing it first with Connor seems extremely selfish. But as long as he wants to build a family, it's good. 👍
Worth it, you’ve got to be joking No it fucking wasn’ you left the story unfinished you arsehole.. But saying that what you gave us was amazing. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
I'm so grateful for every love story that is not molded to 'zeitgeist' and butchered by retelling cheap porn flicks when it comes to sex. This is one of them and I cherish it.
I enjoyed both parts of this story even though I felt the first part lacked background detail on the siblings relationship. This part stands on it's own as a snapshot of how a family may react to sibling incest. It's just a nice story to read.
To Anonymous below: No you didn't miss a part, this was the direct sequel. It just jumped a decade ahead from the last story
Did I miss a part where they were caught it did we just jump ahead in the sequel. I'm just making sure, I didn't want to miss out on anything. This was nice
Just re-read it for the third time and it is still on of my all time favorites
Given the story's age, and the fact he hasn't posted anything in a decade, I doubt if the author will ever read this....
Nice characters, believable plot and actions (or as believable as this genre can be).
And finally, some very welcome humor.
Really liked the story! Both part 1 and 2. Part 1 a little more though.
Loved the ending!
Part 1 of this story was fantastic, and part 2 was very nearly as good right up until the pregnancy. Why, oh why god, do so many authors have to spoil the fun like that?
Wel, I get that some people actually like kids, and it was close to the end, so it didn't ruin the story altogether. Still a lovely story, one of the first I read on this site, and definitely 9/10.
I've read this story before and I surely must have blubbered like a baby then, too. What a romantic and beautiful ending! And the ten year gap between parts one and two worked well. Conner seemed more confident (edgy?) in this second half. But I suppose that comes from feeling like family pariahs so much of the time. Thank you for writing such a wonderful story.
Beautiful love story. I was really touched by the strength of the commitment between brother and sister, even in the face of stern opprobrium from their family.
Oh yes you've done it again.You always seem to get the angst of family members just as it really is.When she told me she was pregnant it was summer but I reacted in the same way.Dont know how but it seems your writing our story as here are so many coincidences.Very well done more please we are addicted to you stories and rad them time and time again.
I wish all readers would be more HONEST and stop kissing ass, this chapter was crap. I also wish writers would listen to the complaints and not the fake kiss ass reviews. this needed a lot more in between the first chapter and this one, it needed to be more realistic and less stupid and needs an end. all in all the series was a waste of time and the writer should be ashamed to have their name on it.
I really enjoyed it :). Every fucking story doesnt have to be long or have oodles of conflict and strife as the pissy poster below seems to think. I dont NEED a bunch of crap chapters to fill in the ten year stretch, it works just fine, and if the author feels like a revisit later he/she now has working area!
Yes, this chapter could have been longer, would have been nice, but oh well. Its fine leaving the pregnancy hanging, we can either use our imagination (not like we haven't read a hundred pregnancies!) or it could be another chapter later...really it isn't necessary since it is happening AFTER they have settled into their lives, it would ad nothing to a story that is already written except some strife with either a sappy ending or a pissy ending, hence the END.
As for the comments about how 'nobody would stay after the family ignored' crap, well that depends on the person. They are basically there for their mom. If it was me and my wife, well she would stay and put up with it for her mom, *I* on the other hand would pack my shit and leave. Honestly I wouldnt have shown anyway. Reunions, blech!
Love the story, has a nice length and it doesn't go full on rush into the stuff a very pleasing read
i see this hack still hasn't fixed the major screwup with this story. it needs atleast two more chapters, a proper chapter two to fill in the major gap between this and the first chapter and then a proper end. this is why we need HONEST COMMENTS if the idiot readers back in 05 had been honest this may have been fixed PROPERLY instead we get left hanging with a story that has MAJOR plot holes and no end.
I feel happy, sad(i dont know why), and intruigued. CHEEZITS!! Sorry. That was way too random..
I wish it was longer but still amazing I like all your stories keep it up :)
I have read and re-read all your stories, and you are truly a fantastic author, you can and should write a book, share your literary talents with the whole world as opposed to only men and women looking to get off. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your story, but in my opinion the best story you ever wrote was the 12 part series, The Family Room. If you ever decide to pursue a literary career, email me at , I know people from OutskirtsPress and I could put you into contact with my publisher, Stephen Pellegrino. He is a real good guy.