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This is probably one of the most unpleasant stories I have read here.
The punishment outweighs the “crime”. What she fails to take into consideration is she performed the acts voluntarily and he is raped and only performs under threat of mutilation.
The marriage will never survive and he will never trust her again.
Haha, that was funny. Interesting concept. Good story! He's definitely not gonna enjoy what's next..
WTF??? She tricked him, did not even remotely fully disclose what he was choosing. Even at that, he didn't really want to do it, she pulled him into it. There is no love here to try to preserve.
I,m sorry I did get to the end but it still doesn’t feel or make any sense, but there you go, I,m not into arse play
I am glad people gave this writer shit in comments. I have stumbled upon this very late, I hope you got help.
This story is just so wrong on so many levels!
I think there are too many sensitive men that read your stories on here. I've seen way more horrendous stories but where the women are the victims and the comment section is full of praise for the author but when the shoe is on the other foot..... hahaha. Oh dear! Sensitive souls! You know you don't have to read a story that you don't like. Just saying...
FTDS has written an excellent aftermath.
//rosa-blanca.ru/desixxxphoto/s/yo-yo-chronicles-ch-01-ending
A couple of key differences with her plan:
1) She willingly having straight, if kinky, sex with her husband.
2) He is being FORCED to have gay sex with a stranger.
There is no equivalence!
The wire, which could easily permanently hurt him, yet she loves him? Yet she has no problem with having him gay raped....and it seems like the other gal was experienced in that department.
What happens if he passes out from pain, or is unable to complete the challenge like she wants?
Blood is going to be spilled one way or the other here.
You are always the same idiot!!! Your protagonists are all criminals and are all get prosecuted! Where is the logic in your crap?? Is it only your cheap lechery!!!
If he's any kind of man,she'll be hamburger meat soon after this bullshit ends! Another fuckin' twat!
She may THINK she knows him, but he is TELLING her "NO!" and she is essentially having him gay raped.
As disgusted as she might have been by what they did, at least she was WILLINGLY having STRAIGHT sex with her husband.
and a stupid loser husband. I would not hesitate in killing her slowly and very painfully. then the dike gets it and the faggot gets to die. fucking horrible pathetic crap. hope this writer dies a painful death.
If you readers need to have a decent ending check out Cpete or FTDS. Both authors put a good ending to this mess.