by donaldelliott11
The story was great. Not overly wordy. It really brought out the psychology of the characters. Great job. Great entertainment
WOW! Each chapter gets hotter. Thank you for writing. Love the anal creampie licking.
A little sad that Jake who has the only leverage is going to give up Donna. Seems like he was into his girlfriend. He also really had the only bargaining chip. Mom’s badness was illegal. So all the power was his. He should have told mom he was keeping both. His personality up to this point leans that way.
Also the nastiness toward Donna “make her wear mom’s wet pantries”, “cum on Donna’s bed”. Does not align with how he’s treated Donna this far. Jake’s almost a different/new character in this story.