All Comments on 'Lisa's Journey'

Well written, very enjoyable, excellent length, A considerate dom, nothing permanent. But some level of humiliation would be very good, and something like a collar or anklet or ... But this seems like a one-off story, so maybe your next can be multi-chapters and a bit more nc.

This is a beautiful story of submission. Likewise, i would not object to a bit more humiliation and other bdsm aspects in your next story, but you clearly have an excellen talent.