Stayed at this site for the BtB LW.
In general I prefer two of Anton Chekhov's views on story telling:
1 - Show don't tell
2 - All (most for me) details should be there for the story narrative - does it matter that its a 50 year old BMW motorbike, or just that it's a motorbike? Why is it important that the bike is 50 years old or that the make is BMW - if there isn't a particular reason then leave it out.
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