All Comments on 'A Christmas Wish'

Wow...That was really Hot...I really enjoyed reading it.

I like the fact that though your stories always have hot like fire sex, the men always treat the women with a some kind of reverence.

I LOVE ALL YOUR STORIES. THEY ARE VERY HOT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I really loved this story- Its the kind I like to read here and they're getting harder and harder to find. Thanks!

You need an editor. Homonyms are your downfall - using 'to' for 'too' is the most obvious. You need to educate yourself on human physiology - 'thrust himself all the way in and hit her g-spot' - no way. A good story with the execution leaving a lot to be desired.

I think you should continue with a story about Lauren and Jerimiah's new relationship....this story was fucking hot!!