All Comments on 'A Fateful Lapse Ch. 02'

Although a few misspellings needed to be overlooked, you followed up chapter one in excellent form, and maintained the period feel with authenticity. Her wonder and fear at her newfound sensations, her dismay at their apparent source, her sudden conflict at her relationship with her husband. And especially her treatment at the hands of her manservant, and the turmoil she suffers!

Really well done. No third chapter required, as her misgivings and questions are a perfect ending to a human tale.

Authentic sounding, and erotic. I just hope the idiots who can't tolerate non consent, stay the hell outta the comments!

Thanks LadyParts and Shadow - I'm really glad you liked it. I'm sorry about my spelling, it annoys me too! I'll try to take more care.

Forget about your spelling and the people moaning. I agree with ladyParts - if they don't like it, why are they reading this sort of stuff in the first place!

I for one love both your stories. Keep up the good work Sue