All Comments on 'A Good Son Ch. 05'

This is more like it,I have just read a really daft so called erotic story,this is fine,what on earth is the point of going to the trouble of writing a story knowing full well it it is rubbish.As far as I am concerned erotica does not mean you get an instant hardon,or if a woman play with yourself

dumbest bullshit i ever read.

Most continuations really loose their appeal after the third or so installment but you seem to keep this story lively and I will wait to read your next chapter impatiently. It is most arousing and such a turn on to read even the humorous part was decent but you could have drawn me in more to associate with the pain he felt as the zipper got caught. I hope our boy will get to give Paula a well deserved and pleasurable experience and maybe even join mother and the new guy in a sexy steamy slightly bisexual rump that allows him to gain some dominance on the new guy. After all our boy needs a nice sporty car where he can get a blowjob from a new character.

I haven't read any of your previous chapters, but I must say that although there were a few (very few) typo and grammatical errors, this was a purely enjoyable read. I only had a small problem with the slight bondage and the zipper. First one is not my cup of tea, the other can be summed up in one word. Ouch. And the people that dislike it are entitled to their opinions, however short of thought it may be. Onward to Ch. 06...

This is an erotic story not a discussion on the morality of incest. I was disappointed in the last chapter. The climax of the story was when Sue was doing Mom and Tony joined in. He should have fucked Mom in front of Sue right then. Oh well, it's not my story.

a lot of dumbness the zipper and teasing make a great story into a so so story.

Great story, well written, splashes of humor really set a nice tone. He speaks and has the wit of someone with a depth of experience. Let's have some more from you. Thanks for the fun read.

let's turn it around, he's letting the females control things, he needs to be more aggresive! the ladies want a hen party, to bad, walk in and stick it in the first pussy available. mom wants to be exclusive to roland, to bad! all the teasing she's done, he should just take her whenever he wants. they set the ground rules with the bondage scenario. paula thinks its funny to humiliate him, do her ass a few times and let the office know she's an ass whore. sue's doing others, both guys and gals, he should feel free to do any female that's available, starting with paula and mom. any time sue isn't available he should be doing some other chick. the side of him that came out with debra needs to come out with the 3 of them. they would learn to love it just like debra did. i'd like to see more chapters added to this series, especially if they take the tone i've just outlined.

amazing story, i'll be wanking over this for weeks.thankyou whitesocks.

I enjoyed the hell out of that! The wonderful dry humor was refreshing!

don't write that genre. and, if you submit a story in that category don't spend as much time telling us he dated his girlfriend for 18 months as you do moralizing against incest.

I loved this series it was teasing and I loved the humour I really wanted to read more. To see how the situation with Roland worked out. I hope at some point there might be a follow up story or at least a conclusion.

Thank you,

Sarah

Well, I went ahead and finished this because I made up my mind long before I found literotica that I wouldn't write comments about books or stories that I didn't read to the end. But I have to say now that I wished I had less scruples. You ruined it by making him such a stick in the mud. You brought mother up to near nymphomania pretty fast and that was kind of fun. But you had him step in and get her all hot and bothered and curious. And then get all holier than thou. Though he always did follow through, you always made him out to be a grump about it. I have no desire to read anymore of your work. You took them to Debra's house where he revenge fucked her. It was sex, but definitely not erotic. She said she didn't want her asshole fucked and you should have had him respect that. And it is so confusing. Every woman he encounters seems to be willing to help each of the others in engineering a situation where he eventually fucks his mother. Or her fuck him. Usually, it has been my experience, that women are not so happy to see their man fuck another woman. For one woman to indulge that fantasy is believable but... Emma, Sue, Paula, Debra (oh, yes, she was ready to help), all of them? I think you stretch the credibility of your characters too far. The son is a pain in the ass with an above average cock plus imagination and sex drive. And greedy. He wants a rich step-father and fancy cars, Ferrari in particulat, but he wants to show suspicion and jealousy towards Roland.

I love your writing. I enjoy the "English" English. I love the dialog, character development and eventual transformation of sweet mother to wild woman. Interesting twist where you make the lad the apprehensive one, not the mother.

Enjoyed it thoroughly. I look forward to more of your work.

Funny sexy story. Really liked it, keep writing!