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- A Little Plate of Grapes
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by Rollinbones
- 28 Comments
Another brilliant contribution, so thanks. That said, you offer so many strengths in your writing that the few clinkers really stand out. “It’s” isn’t possessive, but a contraction of “it is.” “Your,” OTOH, is possessive. The difference between “knowing your shit” and “knowing you’re shit” is profound.
The best stories here in my humble opinion, have humor along with the sex. This was a wonderful read with plenty of smiles and a few chuckles. Well done mate.
Really loved this story, could do with a sequel or three. Would actually like to see this from the wookie's perspective, perhaps start with his childhood, up to Theresa cheating, and then on to the main story.
"floor-drobe" Anyone that's been to college (American for Uni) understands and has a rather disturbing visual picture of. I'm glad I wasn't eating when I read that, I'd have food impacted in my sinuses. Your sense of humor is top-notch. Loved everything about the story. 5 big hairy stars!!
I clicked the title looking for..., well, you know. Instead I found literature. Amazing, Real writing, Characters with depth whom I could actually care about. Looking forward to reading your other stuff.
Love your work but particularly your sense of humor in crafting your main characters' development. Mega kudos, five stars.
WS
You done Oz proud. That was a fun read. I found myself a bit lpst and grasping a time or two, but very quickly you had me sorted out and nothing was lost by the moment, so the only thing I'm left wondering about is probably due to my own lack of knowldge about the cultural differences to know if your handling of them was correct or not. I'll have to take your word for it, but would really like to have a better understanding of it myself.
Wonderful story, had me smiling through it all, and even laughing at times. The Aussie talk in this story wasn't as bad as the last, so I could follow it without having to Google as much, lol. Five stars.
Uh, I don’t know what Cali_Love is talking about. His stories are every bit as engaging as Rollinbones’s. They are two of the best currently writing in Romance. What a gift they each provide! (And don’t think I missed comments by other great authors like bleeep, it’s just that they weren’t self-deprecating.)
What wonderful characters you’ve created! You’ve put just the right amount of tension into the plot to keep it fun, too. I did note the odd typo that snuck in and such, but I understand your attitude, and it’s all good with me. This Yankee loves a good tale from Oz, and you haven’t disappointed me!
Thank you for writing, and thank you for sharing your work.
I agree, wonderful characters, reminiscent of Nora Fares Head Above Water story. The story flowed well and was easy reading and you could almost identify with the character's new found love, you know, the one where you can't get enough of each other and you can't seem to get close enough to each other also, excellent story from down under. 5 stars
Vertigo Milf was truly wonderful, with tremendous dialogue and a cast of wonderful characters, and this follows hot on its heels. The two main characters are just lovely, and the story full of humour. Prequels or sequels to fill it out in line with the range of Vertigo Milf would be a real treat. Does the capacity for inventing such great characters automatically lead to great writing, or does great writing make give the characters their life and depth? Whichever, - the result is lovely to read.
Another wonderful story! You have a real knack with characters and dialogue, it comes across as real and believable, like I was listening in on their conversations. Five big stars!
Another five star story set in one of my favorite countries to visit. I can't wait to see what your fertile imagination will next bring here. Thanks for all your stories.
4 stars + 1 for mentioning duckduckgo - truly private browsing. And 5 pages for 'just the bones', you are hilarious.