All Comments on 'A Loving Wife's Life Is Changed'
by qualitywheat
- 6 Comments
Completely different ending from the usual offerings that Non-con has for the readers. I have to say, I like it. There are SO many ways that a female could react in these blackmail scenarios, so much creativity possible, when it just goes on and on even after the blackmailer has lied about stopping. But it always seems to be just one or two, usually submission. Full points for the blindside ending, and showing that the woman not only doesn't have to be a stupid, wimpy cunt, but that liking the sex doesn't mean she's willing to let things go on and on that way.
Liked the way she took control of her life, but it is total bull that she can say she loves her husband, but can never be satisfied with him again and has to go elsewhere. Just get a divorce, can't love and cheat at the same time...maybe can love and share, but to say you love someone, but then lie and cheat behind their back is not possible.
Nice twist in a predictable situation and genre. I'd like to hear about her further escapades and how she gets on with husband as she explores her new power.
I had my doubts when I started reading, you're writing does need some coaching and refinement. I'm not being mean here, but I wonder, are you writing in English as a second language?
At any rate, you threw some good twists into the "Non-Con" category, good imagination and story telling.
I liked it.