All Comments on 'A Place For Us All To Belong Ch. 10'
by oneagainst
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Beautifully written.
The resolution of the two "aw shit" scenarios -- the one where Kayla thinks Jade concluded that She and Danny were cheating on her. The one where the reader is worried that Kayla is going to take Jade's orgasms... masterful tension!
I loved the resolution between Kayla and Jade. I think it shows how much Kayla has grown in that she started this trip with Lily heartbroken and feeling betrayed by her boyfriend and best friend and can now accept what happened. The fact Jade admittedly her own faults in the situation even after realizing all Kayla had done to her was sort of a weight off Kayla's shoulders as she didn't need to feel completely guilty in her actions. That Kayla has found her own peace and love with Stefan is a nice boon for all she's endured. I can't wait for the next chapter.