All Comments on 'A Strange Alliance'

Nice work!

love this, great pace and good detail - can't wait for the next chapter!!!!! Thanks!!!!

More, please.

I hope that you write more for this story line, this was fantastic and enthralling!

Could be a stand-alone, but the questions at the end almost beg for a sequel. Much has been explained already, but there is room to expand the tale as well.

Thanks for sharing. 5* Slainté

Great descriptions and fascinating inner monologues. I implore you, please continue. Your work shows not just passion but also a brilliance I do not see on this site often. I appreciate the time you took to write every word. Again, Please continue.

This can be a novel.. I want to read more into the story, this was fantastic!

... this is certainly a delightful tale in the making!!! I do hope I see more!! Thank you :)

This could be an amazing novel. I hope you continue to write.

I was enthralled from the beginning! I hope you write a sequel!

I'm so ready for this to be a series. Please!?

I was looking for a quick read for *ahem* personal time before bed. Instead I got caught in the story, and now I need to know what happens!!!

Need more Mor ASAP!!

This would do great as an actual story.

Well finish it.