Note: You can change font size, font face, and turn on dark mode by clicking the "A" icon tab in the Story Info Box.
You can temporarily switch back to a Classic Literotica® experience during our ongoing public Beta testing. Please consider leaving feedback on issues you experience or suggest improvements.
Click here*****
ANOTHER HOSPITAL CALL
"This is Conners Memorial Hospital, is this Tim Hardaway?"
Tim was getting some déjà vu vibrations. "Yes."
"Is your wife Abagail Hardaway?"
"Yes."
"I hate to inform you, but she has been involved in a serious automobile accident and is in surgery right now. Currently, her situation is critical, but we will know more after the surgery about her prognosis. She won't be able to be seen anytime by anyone for a while, but we figured you might want to come to the hospital anyway."
"Of course. We'll be right there." After explaining the call to Jessie, Tim called Jasmine. They picked her up and all left for the hospital.
They maintained the waiting room vigil for several days. After a few days, they established a routine for taking turns sleeping at home and waiting at the hospital. Abby was in ICU which limited her to on visitor for ten minutes every two hours. The schools sent Jessie's assignments and she and Jasmine worked on them together. An occasional crying fit would strike one of the waiters and one of the others would console the crier. It was almost a week before the doctor would tell more than 'We have to wait and see how her body responds.'
The doctor now said, "She's out of danger but she has a lot of recovery to do. Soon, you will need to make the decision to place her in rehabilitation facility, or you can take her home and do a lot of her therapy with her under the direction of therapists. We can't predict how much of her functioning she will recover. A lot will depend on her attitude and tolerance for pain. She is being put in a regular room now so two of you can go see her at a time."
The three rotated through her room. Her only response was her eyes and sobbing. She looked at them in recognition but could only blink or cry. Everyone was crying after the visit. They met with the physical therapist first. "Look, 'rehabilitation facilities' are actually nursing homes that put rehabilitation patients in with their other patients. You'll get a lot more done in a better atmosphere if you take her home. The money people would rather you put her in the nursing home so they can bill the government and insurance companies more." Tim asked a few people and found out he was telling the truth.
Tim called Jasmine and Jessie into a meeting at the kitchen table. After discussing the options, there were no objections to bringing Abby home even if it meant everyone had to pick up some extra chores. Jessie asked, "How come we're not asking Mommy what she wants to do?"
"Your mother would tell us to put her in the nursing home in order to make it easier on us. I don't want our imagined discomfort to have anything to do with our decision on how to help her get better."
*****
AT HOME
Abby was led to her new room. She had been able to speak for a few weeks now. "I can't believe what you've done to fix up the guest bedroom for me. It looks just like a hospital room. Does it come with a button I can press and wait for an hour until a nurse comes?" Everyone giggled.
Abby got comfortable in her bed and got a half dozen 'Can I get you anything?' questions. Finally, she and Tim were alone.
"Tim, I appreciate what you all have done to get me back in the house. I hope this doesn't mean that Jasmine moved back in while I was gone. You and she said she was ready to move out."
"Abby, I did ask Jasmine to come back. We needed her help with the house with you out of commission. You need her help now too."
"Tim, you never wanted her to leave in the first place, did you? Who knows how many times you two have had sex while I was in the hospital? Now you have stuck me in a bed downstairs while you and Jasmine have the master bedroom all to yourselves. It's a perfect excuse for you two especially since I can't have sex with you now."
"Abby, I hope that you're just saying this to make us reconsider taking you to a nursing home so that you won't be a burden on us. Think, Abby, wouldn't I have recommended you go to the nursing home if I wanted to have a secret affair with Jasmine?"
"It would be a more difficult for you two if this room was still Jasmine's room and I was in my own bedroom. By sticking me down here, she has to sleep upstairs. I assume you just moved her into the master bedroom?"
"No, she's bunking in with Jessie for your information. I got her an air mattress. With those two, it's like a slumber party every night."
"Like Jasmine's not smart enough to join you after Jessie is asleep."
"I give up Abby. You've caught us. I've been working as her pimp, and she is running tricks in the garage. If you won't tell on us to the police, we'll give you a 10% cut."
"Fuck you and your sarcasm."
"You're welcome."
*****
REHABILITATION
For months the three took care of Abby, getting to do her exercises, providing her food and drink, and cleaning up her liquid and solid wastes (which Jessie refused to do) besides taking care of all her household chores. Tim and Jasmine received Abby's rants in return for their help the first few weeks. Jessie received praise and requests for any gossip about a romance between Jasmine and Tim. Abby accused Jessie of receiving a bribe not to tell.
After over nine months her upper body range of motion and strength were greatly improved, Abby still had a problem with her lower body not responding to the exercises. The nerves in her lower back were too badly damaged. Abby's lament was not so much the loss of the ability to feel vaginal penetration and having orgasms herself as it was for Tim to be able to feel her enough to cause him to ejaculate. He told her that he could get by on masturbation and blowjobs. She would have to enjoy kissing and getting her breasts mauled. Abby was not satisfied with that answer but did not turn down any opportunity to have the abbreviated sex with her husband. She even got to where she swallowed him without complaint.
Jasmine and Abby spent a lot of time together. They talked about Tim and Jessie a lot, but also about each other. Slowly, the jealousy of Abby turned into shame as she realized how difficult it was for Jasmine too. The stupidity of her jealous actions were evident every day. And every day Jasmine helped take care of the woman whose continued existence she believed was keeping Jasmine from any chance to get her husband back.
Abby finally decided that she wanted to stay married to Tim and help raise their child no matter what. What she needed was a way to let him have sex without getting a divorce. Tim could not be expected to abstain from sex much longer if he had been abstaining. With such an attractive alternative living in the same house it was only a matter of time.
Tim and Jasmine were summoned into the room where Abby stayed.
Jasmine spoke first. "I hope we're not here to have you accuse us of having sex behind your back again. I'm getting tired of it."
Abby replied, "No, in fact, it's the opposite. I want the two of you to have sex with my blessing."
There was a long pause and shocked faces before Tim said, "Good one, Abby. I'm glad to see your sense of humor has come back.".
"I'm afraid I'm not kidding. Tim, I'm probably never going to get back the feeling in my lower body. You don't deserve to be cut off from having vaginal sex because I had an accident. You have a beautiful woman who I bet is willing to give you sex, and you already know is a great sex partner. It would do me good to know you don't have to give up vaginal sex just because I can't. I just hope you don't fall in love with her again. I will still continue my blowjobs as long as you want.
"I want to stay your wife and co-parent to Jessie as long as she lives here. There's no reason you should suffer physically because I can't perform physically."
"Abby, I appreciate the thought. It is magnanimous for you to offer that. But, I can't. I just can't. I can't have sex with another woman as long as I'm married to you."
"Tim, you may change your mind when I tell you this. On the day of the accident, I was on my way to see my old boyfriend, Roland, to be intimate with him. It was to be revenge sex based on my belief that you and Jasmine were already having sex. I was willing to cheat on you. Only the accident stopped me. If you make love to Jasmine under the circumstances I mentioned, I would not consider it cheating for you and Jasmine to have sex. You can consider Jasmine to be my sexual surrogate."
Jasmine sniffled, "Abby, that's the best expression of love I have ever heard from a woman."
"Does that mean you will do it?"
Tim and Jasmine each said "No." Abby's face sunk.
"Abby, I was going to tell you that your surgeon has heard of some recent success in nerve cell regeneration by using your own stem cells. I would like you to consider trying it."
"Are you making that up?"
"No. You can look it up on the internet."
The next day, Abby read everything she could on nerve cell regeneration. It was promising but had a high failure rate. It was also very expensive.
"We can't afford for me to try the stem cell therapy."
"Too late. We've already put down a 50%, no refund deposit. You're having it next month."
"Don't give me that bullshit! A no refund deposit on surgery? Nonsense. It's my body and I say no! I'm not going to have the family impoverished so I can have sex."
Jasmine intervened. "Abby, I've got a boyfriend now. He is one of the men I was an escort for years ago. His wife died recently, and he's been trying to find me ever since. In the process of our getting back together, I told him of my obligation here with you and your situation. He has generously offered to pay for the treatment. No loan -- a gift."
"Damn, you must be fantastic in bed. Now you two, tell me the truth. Is this on the up and up?"
Jasmine responded, "I swear my Girl Scout oath on it."
"I might consider trying it on one condition: If it the surgery doesn't work, you and Tim will agree to become lovers."
Tim looked at Jasmine and they nodded agreement.
After they left the room, Tim asked Jasmine, "A former John will pay for it? Where did you come up with that one?"
"I was trying to think of something she would accept. I never was a Girl Scout. I was surprised as you were that she fell for it. Tim, will you really honor her wishes for us to have sex if it doesn't work?"
"I don't know. Either way, one vow I've made to her will have to be broken."
*****
AFTER THE TREATMENT
It was the time during Covid where no one was allowed in the room with the patient and the doctor. Tim and Jasmine had to wait outside with masks on for Abby to tell them the results. Finally, she came down the ramp with tears in her eyes.
"It didn't work. Jasmine, please apologize to your friend for me. I'm sorry."
"We're the ones sorry for you. We were very hopeful for success."
"I've still got a lot to look forward to. I was offered a part-time volunteer job at the hospital today that can be done with me in a wheelchair. I start next week. At least, I can feel useful again. Jasmine, I won't need you during the day anymore. I can take care of my colostomy bag on my own now."
"I'm so happy for you Abby. Let's go celebrate."
"I refuse to celebrate until you and Jasmine have had sex."
"Abby!"
"I was dead serious when I made you two promise to have sex. Tim, I swear by all that is sacred that I will divorce you if you don't do as I ask. You do not deserve a life sentence of no sex just because I have." There was no mistaking the seriousness in her face. Tim simply nodded in agreement. He could not say the words out loud.
That night Jessie spent the night with her mother. They tried not to listen for the sounds of love coming from the master bedroom. There was enough noise that they were satisfied the act was being performed. Jessie comforted her crying mother. Jessie let Jasmine know that they were being too loud. The bedroom sounds quieted down from then on.
The next few months, Tim and Jasmine shared the master bedroom. Jasmine got a better job at Tim's company as a receptionist in another department. With the few expenses she had sharing a home and car rides with Tim, Jasmine was able to use most all of her salary to pay towards the real loan it took to get Abby the experimental treatment.
Abby continued to surprise everyone by her acceptance of the new arrangement in a house with a husband, his lover, and their daughter all living under the same roof. On her next birthday, Abby told everyone that this year she was giving a present to all, and no one was to give her anything.
The day came. "You all sacrificed so much to get me well. I tried to repay Tim and Jasmine by giving them a chance to regain happiness in the bed. I hope you have enjoyed that as much as I enjoyed giving it to you. Well, today I'm introducing a new choice in our arrangement.
Abby stood up from her wheelchair and took a few wabbly steps. "I lied. The stem cell treatment worked. I kept it secret so I could reward Tim and Jasmine. I have been doing a volunteer job and going to physical rehabilitation off the books. It has made up for almost all the atrophy that had occurred. I am now 80% normal functioning in my lower body."
Jasmine asked, "Does that mean that you can perform as normal down there . . . you know?"
"I can pee and poop on my own and, more importantly, I've masturbated myself to orgasm again. I'm ready for the real thing."
Tim inquired in a state of shock, "That means that you and I can make love again?"
"Yes. But the more important question is 'Do you want to stay married to me or do you want to divorce so you and Jasmine can be together again as husband and wife and not just lovers?'"
"You think that having sex with Jasmine would make me want to marry her again? I have enjoyed having sex with her, but I always planned for us to stay married whether you could have sex again or not. Abby, you're my wife and Jessie is our daughter. I am happy beyond belief that we can fully resume our old life before Jasmine and your accident."
Jasmine interrupted, "Abby, I make no claims on Tim's time now that you've recovered. I admire your compassion to give Tim a substitute for your ability to have sex with him. I can honestly say I never detected a hint that he was interested in remarrying me. I will be leaving for my boyfriend's house as soon as possible. You and Tim have a lot to catch up on. I am happy for you both. There is one favor I would like."
"I bet it has to do with Jessie."
"Yes, she and I have a special connection."
"Of course." Abby and Jasmine hugged.
EPILOGUE
Tim helped Jasmine move her things back to her apartment. Once done, they grabbed a drink and sat on the couch together.
"When Abby said she was ready to have sex again, why didn't you tell her that we never had sex? Wouldn't that have made her feel better?"
"No. She staked her self-image on relieving me of my marriage vows, it would hav made her feel bad that I had not had vaginal sex with you."
"It was difficult to be with you and not have sex. I hope that proves how much I care about you, Abby and Jessie."
Tim turned to her with tears in his eyes, "I'll miss you."
"Don't do that to me. I promised myself not to cry. I had you once and threw you away. Then I had you again and now I'm losing you again. I think it's going to be harder this time."
"Jasmine, I was glad we had the time together. I was reminded of how much I once loved you. Going back to Abby is something I want to do and have to do. That doesn't mean that I don't still love you. I just can't BE with you."
"You could if you weren't so fucking loyal." She smiled.
"At least I got to answer a question that came up when the hospital first called."
"What's that?"
"I am my ex-wife's keeper and will always be there for you."
"Get out of here before I rape you."
Tim stood up and looked at her through his teary eyes. "Good-bye." He walked out of her apartment and went back to being a husband and father.
- COMMENTS
What anon 1 month before me said. The comment section is a hoot. So much hate…so few brains. LOL
Nice story. I loved the twist and turns like riding the tail of the dragon. IYKYK. ☆☆☆☆☆
The comments section of Loving Wives is REALISM on steroids. An entire legion of screwed up, angry, hateful, and spiteful people cursing life, the writers of free stories and made-up characters. Is there anything more pathetic? Beuler?
The last act of the story really turned this from a 5 to a 4 to me. It was unnecessary and you should have just dealt with Jasmine's intrusion on Abby and Tim's relationship in a less fantastical and more mature way. It would have been a better story.
There was no benefit to anyone from pretending the husband and the first wife were having sex. It taught the daughter a terrible lesson about the value of marriage vows. Now, she probably will become a whore.
MC is a dumb asshole to take his ex to his home and family!! What a fucked up story. CUCKY47
The MC is an idiot. If he hadn't taken his ex home, none of this would have happened at all.
That was certainly different, good change of story from those that I have read
An entertaining story of jealousy and its implications. The. emotional twists and turns kept it rolling along well and I liked the ending. One small missing piece for me was the dialogue surrounding her admission she was about to have revenge sex with Roland. Given how much the time the author spent unpicking other issues, this was far and away more significant and warranted far more detail. 4* because of this
Veeeeerrrrry strange, but excitinhly original.
Thogh that a woman of J.'s experience would not take the time to make a13y old aware of more of her dark experiences ...
Skip, the only thing missing from this juvenile mess was the unicorns and the fairies. The MC was a doofus who shit on his marriage and wiped his arse with his wife's feelings, dismissing her point of view with arrogance and contempt to the point where she was actually going to have an affair. Although it was wrong of her to entertain this course of action, I could relate to it. Being treated like you don't matter in your own home can have this effect and we're supposed to believe that there was a happy ending to this clusterfuck? Give me a break! 2stars.
That certainly polarised opinions!
I still surprises me how hateful some comments are. They forget this is a story and stories explore human behaviour and emotions, on that premise Well done!
Having been a psychotherapist for many years there is not much that surprises me regarding human sexual behaviour.
I have to be honest, I loved it! It seemed to be going a little off the rails but because of the continued honor of the husband and the rehabilitation of the ex, it turned into a romance for me.
Your math is a bit off. She said she's fucked 500 people. That is way way too low. Let's ignore the escorting timeframe for now, and just focus on the prostitution. She's been selling her body for 15 years. Let's say she's only spent a third of that time, 5 years prostituting with a quota of 10 people per day. She said she didn't meet her quote very often, so let's say she only fucked 3 people per day on average. 3 times per day multiplied by 365 days per year times 5 years is 5475 people. This does not include how ever many people she fucked in the previous 10 years. I think you get the point.
This was written well, but the character is awful. I wished it was him who ended up in an accident to put everyone out of his misery.
"He tried begging her to repent, but she was hooked on the lifestyle of multiple partners and the financial perks that came her way. He finally gave in and divorced her. Tim had heard that Jasmine had eventually gotten fired from the company and turned to escorting and prostitution to support herself. He felt sorry for her and even felt some guilt for not being able to be enough husband that would have prevented her from seeking other men."
Are you kidding? Seriously? That's pathetic. So's the story.
I liked that they didn't have sex. Jesse needs to know that, soon... and eventually, Abby, too. Abby's feelings, the lead-up to the accident, fleshed out & the lead could have amped everything up & added a 3rd pg of intrigue and delight. A 5, cuda been a 6.5.
When the asshole threatened to leave with his hooker ex wife the current wife should have helped him pack then raped his stupid ass in divorce court. There are plenty of ways to help an ex short of moving them into your home.
A very good story but somehow I don't believe Abby was such insecure with her husband to go and cheat on him. She made a huge sacrifice but I think it was more about the shame she felt trying to cheat.
Did you notice she is a controlling beatch? She decides everything: who to bring home, cheating, who her wife will sleep with. Just a horrible person.
The author provided us with a change up LW story. If you think about the premise of taking in some stranger with the problems his ex had, no way. We would all like to help people if we could but you just can't take the chance, will they steal, kill you in the night, bring others like themselves into the house, plus the disease and even covid. But, this was someone he was married to before and he now had a wife and daughter to think of also and they should have come first, but, our other wrote it this way which sort of made it acceptable. This was a new approach and an OK story if not entirely plausible. But then again I can recall a situation along those lines a friend of mine went thru so anything is possible.
I couldn't even get passed the first page.
Outside of abuse I couldn't imagine a worse husband. Like how much of a manipulative tyrant do you have to be to force your wife to accept your prostitute ex living with you or threaten to leave?
Dude is a garbage husband. I didn't read the rest but it should end with Abby being happy without him.
As a lot of people have said already...a very interesting story. I know it's hard to come up with new theme/ non cliche in the Loving Wives category, but you did it! I liked it. Well done!
So all you guys harping about Abby being selfish and uncaring would be completely on board say if your wife brings her ex husband home to live with you and your kid without any word or discussion?
In the beginning i though hot steel. A real threat on a side like this. But after the accident you ruined it , only getting la la. So think about it and maybe write another story like this one or don't let the accident happen. To see what she is doing after.
Or let him go to a hotel and let his wife discuse the samatarien thing with his daughter. In every way shy the sex between the ex's.
Abby's strenuous objections to moving a whore in with their 13-year-old daughter were completely reasonable. This whole thing was preposterous.
I guess since the readership believe that any woman who fucks more than one man, ever, is a whore, you had to make her an actual whore.
.
That’s where the story fails: you went too extreme from the beginning. She could have been poor, gotten into an accident, and lost everything without setting up the most unbelievable scenario you could.
Damn Skip, you lost that one completely. Maybe your worst, most ridiculous story ever.
Far below the typical Skippy47 standards. The new wife was almost a cartoon character, seriously. And the ex, showing up 15 years at the Hospital after the divorce and Hubby brings her right over, without a call to wifey?
Upon what planet do you live?
The daughter provided some comedic relief tho. The only thing missing is to combine it with a April or May or June sucks story and then we have a winner.
All in all Skippy writes some pretty good stories, so he gets a pass on this one.
Hey Skippy, forget anyone that tells you this shit is a good story. They're either lying or their just dumbasses.
Idiotic on SO many levels, no loving husband unilaterally decides to bring anyone into the home he shares with his wife and young daughter without discussing it with his wife. His ex has proven to be untrustworthy yet he takes her word that she is not in danger or a threat to his family. What if the pimp did want to track her down? He just put his whole family at risk. Also, no true Christian man makes decisions for the family without consulting his wife. Just a bad story all around, all the characters actions were completely inconsistent.
hey skippy how about a second chapter please to where jasmine current boyfriend beats her up and tim and abbey takes her back in with them
Well done, even if Abby is an insanely jealous, self-centered, insecure emo teenager trapped in a woman's body. Plus, after being married for how long she still doesn't even begin to trust her husband?
Demo,
Christian loving wife? Again, is English your second language? Wife was a selfish cunt devoid of Christian charity.
Very well done, sensitively handling a unique and difficult story. Loved the characters and how it ended up. Well thought out and written 5*.
RTCFS - Senseless crap starring an idiot with a single digit IQ. Couldn't get past page one without skipping to very end. Another read the comments first story. Is this an example of mommy issues??? ⭐
OK. So I think Abby should have known if her husband was some all forgiving help thy neighbor christian guy so going to help out the ex wife should not have been a surprise. She in fact should go be with him. However, I do draw the line at having her live with them. So many agencies out there to assist these people in need especially when they are in the hospital and homeless. If he wants to help he can call around and set something up.
However, after all of that when the wife tells him she was on her way to cheating then he should have done two things; start the divorce and then find someone OTHER than the ex to have sex with. There is no way I would touch that whore no matter what my wife says. I would find someone else, tell her she may or may not know her and she may or may not know when I will be cheating. BUT for certain I am going out cheat just as she intended.
One star. Tim is fucking mentally ill and Abby should have divorced him the moment he threatened to rent a single hotel room. Charity is one thing, this was disgusting and not charity in any way.
Anonymousabout 21 hours ago
Mom, Dad, what the heck is going on down here? Who is that old person in your clothes, Mom? Is she homeless? I hope so. It would be so cool to meet a real homeless person." did not notice that till i read the comment and wow thats some fucked up shit to say even from a 13 year old maybe if she was like really pissed off with her mom and she wasnt raised all that well but yeah that was a messed up scene
this guy reminds me of forest gump. u lost me when u fucked up the second wife. but surprised it didnt end up permanent and then the 3some starts. not sure how his religious fanatic behavior didnt come out in the courtship. that it shocked her that he would bring his ex-wife turned prostitute that has a violent pimp to his home with his 13-year-old daughter.
isnt this how 13 years start into the life of prostitution. theres a such thing as too much empathy to the point that it kills u. the new wife needs to run and get a restraining order on someone that mental
Wow, Skip!
Creative and well written from beginning to end. I just sorta feel sorry for the guys who date Jessie, they won't know how to keep up with her. Maybe a light-hearted story about her sometime?
Wonderful story. Nice job on the story. I read for enjoyment, if it keeps me entertained I'm happy. I don't nitpick a story like so many other readers. 5stars
Not very believable, but fun to read. Thanks for the effort.
Good story
Keep on writing, And I'll keep on reading what you write.
WHAT DID I JUST READ???!
Shit, Skippy47, SHIT!
That is what I've read.
/
If ever you or anybody does write a sequel for this, I hope Tim dies and Abby gets to have a husband WHO TRULY knows how to be a husband.
1 star.
/
I HATE CUCK STORIES!!!!
So YOU only read every CUCK story posted on Lit. so you can bitch about it and give it one star!
I'm sure you would write your own sequel to this story...but, you don't have ANY stories to offer!
And to answer your question in your bio, I would say that you don't like the sex parts anymore is because you can't get it up.
Sorry 'bout your luck. Have a great day anyway.
What a great story of Christian Love and understanding. Too bad it's all simply a figment of the authors imagination
I enjoyed it, thanks. LP
This story requires a LOT of suspension of disbelief: 1) A husband thinks it's a good idea to invite his messed up whore ex-wife to stay with him and his family. 2) He makes this decision WITHOUT consulting with his wife. 3) With his wife obviously pissed off, and STILL without talking to his wife, refuses his ex-wife's off er to go elsewhere. 4) He, AGAIN without asking his wife, effectively TELLS her to give some of her clothes to the ex-wife, BEFORE knowing that she already has old clothes that she's getting rid of.
\
"He felt sorry for her and even felt some guilt for not being able to be enough husband that would have prevented her from seeking other men." - Wives cheat for their own reasons, not necessarily due to any failings of her husband. It even says that she enjoyed the perks and money that came with her position.
\
"the way I've seen you treat Tim" - What's wrong with the way she's treating Tim?
\
Abby should have let them go, and file separation papers the next day.
\
"That's where the man's peepee comes out." - "Peepee?" I know she's only 13, but even a 13-year-old, especially a "precocious" one, knows that it's "pee" or "piss." "Peepee" is a childish word for a penis.
\
"your husband used to bang all the time." - She talks like that, but says "peepee?"
\
"I sure hope we can help you get your life straight." - Pretty fast turn-around.
\
"I will be leaving for my boyfriend's house as soon as possible." - Her boyfriend was okay with her sleeping wit Tim?
\
Too much like a soap opera.
Love your stuff but this was a miss for me. The jump from Christian, loving wife to go fuck and ex-boyfriend with little more than a couple sentence lead was someone checking of a plot point, not creating content. 4*
I enjoyed this story and it kept me wondering in which direction it was going to go. The character of Abby frustrated me somewhat as she kept flowing backwards and forwards in the relationship with Jasmine.
He should have let Abby know that he was never intimate with Jasmine while Abby was recovering. It would have let her know how much he cared for her, even while she was being quite… difficult.
Thank you for spending the time and effort to write this story!
She had an affair with her Boss
Became the company whore
and the MC feels guilty
Jessica's reaction reminded me of mine and some friends when I was in training at Keesler AFB many, many years ago. I opened a letter from my mother, read the opening paragraph then without thinking announced to those with me: "Hey, my mom got married"! Their response was something like "Well it's about time".
Mom had bee divorce for about two years and never mentioned seeing, let alone dating someone so getting remarried after having eight kids with six of them still at home (I was the oldest at 18) was a true surprise.
Parents can always do amazing things that their kids don't see coming.
This story had all the standards of a Loving Wife story: a cheating wife who gets caught and divorced, a repentant wife who want the husband back and a husband who moves on to a better life with a better wife and child. Mixing all these together with a disastrous event that forces the together was unique and revealed in a most believable telling. Even the daughter sounded too real to be fictional in her awareness of societies limits and curiosities about her father's past and the things she has been told versus the realities of life. If there were any problems with this story I didn't notice them. In fact, if possible I would give a higher rating then a mere 5 stars. Skippy has been one of the authors I like to follow and have a listing of his stories and this one is one of his all time best. Kept me involved from the beginning and will be a great addition to his creations. I can see this one having a Red H in it's listing in no time at all. For those who don't like it and point out it's failures; quit bitchin' and submit something better.
Did you dig this up out of the bottom of an outhouse?
This shit was so bad I could smell it across the net.
I'd say dumber than shit, but that would be too generous.
Mac,
Is English your first language? Because you didn't read the story I read. Between hubby and Abby, Abby was the one considering cheating and making it a repeat cuck story. You might want to consider the possibility you are a dumbass.
Weird, well, unusual, at least. I’m not sure all of the dishonesty and manipulation, especially by Abby, bodes well for the future of the marriage. By the end of the story, she seems more damaged than Jasmine.
Long and winding road. Very original. Enjoyed it. Took me by surprise more than once.
Not liking it, have to say. Tim is an irresponsible man. You do NOT invite your ex-wife home to convalesce. And you absolutely do NOT invite your prostitute, ex-wife home to convalesce. And you absolutely, positively do NOT invite your has a pimp out to get her, prostitute, ex-wife, home to convalesce. What is this idiot thinking? He has an early years, impressionable teenage daughter to think of. He has a wife whose domicile of security and peace just had a figurative dump taken in. She'll be bleaching the floors and countertops for weeks! You don't do that to a woman's home. Tell her what's up, let her help make decisions, like a woman's shelter. If nothing pans out EVERYONE made decisions together and if it comes to her staying in the house, the wife was in the decision making and knows the score. This situation is what churches used to do but that service has been usurped by government agencies. Plenty of other resources to try first before destroying familial bliss.
just stupid. the ONLY reason Abby was in a car accident aas because she was consumed with paranoia and fear that her husband was seeing his ex-wife and she refused to believe that they were not fucking. She was on her way to see an ex-boyfriend to engage in a extramarital affair no justifiable reason.
.
In the story Abby confesses to this but of course Tim being in the most perfect man in the world doesn't even act with any emotion to this whatsoever.
I don't mind fiction, some of it is good like saddletramps1956, Flash. But really, first the surgery didn't work and then it did? Maybe a colostomy can be reversed but only with surgery and that couldn't be hidden working part time like therapy appointments for an hour a day. Being catheterized is also kind of obvious. But it was an interesting twist and a different kind of ending.
Good story. Depressing enough to be a Lifetime movie. But hey, that's life, ain't it? 5/5!!
Hey Skippy I love your ending to a really great story. Forget the naysayers comments specially the BTB crowd. It is nice to read a story with some compassion for others.
Sorry, but there’s no way you bring your XW whore into your household. Unbelievable! 2/5
He insists on bringing a whore into the house as a role model for his daughter? He's willing to leave his wife in favor of the whore? Abby is hard hearted for not wanting a whore living in her house?
Just the tip of the insane bullshit thrown out in this outlandish tale.
Abby faced all the pain only due to the Simply asshole husband decision to take the whore back in home. Abby deserved so much better than the Simp who put her in a depression and painful journey.
One of the DUMBEST, fucking, idiotic stories I've ever read in the LW category, and that is saying a LOT. ANYONE who thinks this is a good story is a fucking moron.
Right.
It must be an alternate universe where an ex-husband of a wife who betrays him by fucking other men for gain (a whore)...still loves her enough to bring her into his home with his wife and 13 year old daughter.
Because here in this universe...no man would ever ever bring an ex who is now a used up and worn out old prostitute into his home with his wife and teenage daughter. I mean no way EVER. The premise is simply ridiculous.
If he did...he'd be divorced. Kicked out of a house he was paying for. Paying child support. And back with the old whore as her pimp.
No self respecting man would take that chance.
It just would never happen.
Maybe he says "for the sake of the relationship I used to have with her...here's $2000 to get you an economy apartment for a month. We'll get you some decent clothes from Goodwill. And help you get some charity help and welfare set up. Wish you the best.
Even that would be pushing it.
This was an ex wife he had not seen in 15 years. One that left him to become a whore. Who fucked men for money. Never looked back after she left him.
No way he taking the chance of messing up his happy life for someone who obviously has zero respect for anyone else.
And there is zero chance he'd ever stick his dick into her diseased skanky holes ever again.
Ridiculous.
I guess it was an okay story, but didn't have much emotion. Who talks about fucking with the term "vaginal sex", over and over. The first night with the husband bringing the ex home unannounced, would never have happened in reality. The interactions just seemed clinical.
Wow. This story certainly had it's twists and turns in it. The end kind of sounded like they would never see Jasmine. That really didn't make sense to me.
Tim was truly a moral man, a good man, a man of honor staying true to his word & vow - not often found in real life (much less in LW). I was wondering when the wives would eventually call him 'Reverend Tim.'
\
Tim's armor chink was in his selection in wives - both having serious vanity issues. Everything bad that happen to each wife was of her own making.
\
The only miss is how Jesse fared; what affect did these two vane women have in Jesse's moral code and in observing Abby's intense jealousy?
\
4.8*, Hooyah, Salutes to a very though provoking story. (with many typos)
Why if Tim Christian love for whores is so strong, he does not open a home for them, so they show the trade to his dear daughter.
Huedogg wow, such a compassionate person. As a woman who was a sex worker to stay alive, it is one of the most fucked up thing about the US is this nutty idea that what your job is what you are. She was a sex worker out of necessity and most likely mental illness. I can not think of more than two women I knew in the industry, who did it because they enjoyed it. Most were victims of sexual abuse as girls, others just had no other skills, and no other options. He gave Jasmine what we all need from time to time, a second chance. He actually did what God intended and acted as Jesus would have, in the role of her husband, he helped her get back on her feet. He is a good man.
The initial pretense of the hospital calling Tim for approval to treat Jasmine is flawed. If Jasmine was unconscious how did they know who had her medical power of attorney?
Tim and Jasmine had been divorced for 15 years, once he brought her home Abby pushing to get Jasmine out was the correct response. Abby should have let them go a hotel and filed for divorce.
I didn’t enjoy anything after Abby let Jasmine stay at the house. When Tim’s reaction to Abby’s wreck was taking Jasmine with him and Jessie to the hospital, I started skimming in hopes something would come up about Abby’s date and fallout from it.
Tim is a pathetic bleeding heart, Abby is a female cuckold, and Jasmine is going to end up in unhealthy relationships and need counseling as an adult.
What the fuck was that shit? A) I got sick to my stomach when I read this wimpy thought from the lead character... "[He] ... even felt some guilt for not being able to be enough husband that would have prevented her from seeking other men." B) If you're going to use a stupid term like remarried, at least decide how you're going to spell it, as it's used multiple times, including in dialogue, but not spelled the same way. C) 'vaginal sex' in dialogue, makes it sound like a lawyer wrote this crap. Never mind the sheer idiocy of pretty much all of the characters in this story.
A convoluted attempt to make Tim seem like a real man- it failed. He came across as a cement-headed idiot, with no concerns for his new wife because 'he loved her'. What else could she possible want?
Sheesh.
Thanks Skippy, it was a nice read. The MC was a bit too much of a saint and Abby is a wack job. The teenage girl was believable. A non drug using, pimped out whore is kinda hard to imagine, but I guess it’s possible. Still, except for Abby, nice to see people trying to do what’s best for a fellow human.
Considering how much her husband loves her and how loyal he is Abby sure has a lot of insecurities.
She keeps talking about how in Jasmine he has a beautiful potential sex partner. Did I miss the part where Jasmine stopped being a scrawny, tattooed, worn out ex prostitute???
It started ok.
But didn't end that way .
His supposedly christian wife's paranoia was unrealistic.
The ex's mistakes were a great education for the daughter.
And hubby was never going back to swill.
.This is a joke right? No sane person would live in this scenario. In real life the whore ex-wife would never be allowed into the house. The daughter will need therapy
That was good! 5***** I liked that a lot. As improbable as it sounds, I can imagine that happening. A good story about good people who make mistakes is always worth a read.
This was stupid, non-sensical crap. Another helping of Skippy scum. Why I continue to give this guy a chance to redeem himself is beyond me. No more, from here on I'll simply SKIP over his stories. See what I did there? 1*
Abby, should have divorced his ass as soon as this fucking idiot simp assed moron left. His ex-wife is a whore and he wants that around his wife and kids....YEA RIGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHTTTTTTTTTTTTTT.
WONDERFUL STORY, from a MASTER. Please write another chapter. Jasmine may get straightened out and find someone to love and marry her. With what she's gone through, Aunt Jasmine could help guide her "niece", Jessie. Maybe Abby and Jasmine will each have a baby, to be raised as cousins. 10 stars is close...
Many Lit stories have endings that are less than the story. This closing is thoughtful and warming. Nice job overall.
Did you actually write this while fully conscious or were you under the influence of alcohol or certain substances.
your starting script is original, but most of the scenes border on the ridiculous.
Behaviors and attitudes are completely absurd.
it's really a pity.
Mom, Dad, what the heck is going on down here? Who is that old person in your clothes, Mom? Is she homeless? I hope so. It would be so cool to meet a real homeless person."
"Jessie, this is my ex-wife, Jasmine. She needs a place to stay for a while and we're going to help her. Jasmine, this is our daughter Jessie."
Jessie squealed, "Did you say I'm her daughter?!"
"No, dear I said you are OUR daughter with the 'our' meaning your mother, Abby and me."
"Shucks, that would have been so neat to tell everyone at school that I have a mother I never knew about show up out of the blue."
No, but frankly, you're the one who wrote this scene?