All Comments on 'An Exhausting Day Online'

Hi, here from the On the Job challenge. Starting in media res seemed like a good choice though I was a little confused at first. The rewind did a very nice job explaining and making the reader feel for Jocelyn and her situation by the time "normal time" resumed. This isn't a category I normally read but you made it a fun and engaging time nevertheless.

An interesting take on cam girls, etc. Good story.

Nicely done!

that was delightful, thank you

would have been hotter if she had a boyfriend who was watching the streams :)