by Tina_Kerr_36
All I can say is: WOW!!!!
You detailed things SO well. As a reader you felt like you were almost a part of the action.
Incredibly well done!
I am a piss novice who is eagerly awaiting my first pee experience. until then bravo on an extremely erotic story!
With the focus so clearly on piss, anal sex, and pissing while hard, I’m surprised you never got around to Greg giving the girls piss enemas while fucking their ass. Maybe in the sequel?
A nice level of kink, at least for me. I'd suggest including A to M in the next chapter. Again the ending doesn't work, but there's plenty of room for this story to continue, a lot of room. I hope it continues
Perfect blend of kink, bawdy humor and very explicit, original erotica. The dialog is extraordinary, a factor that always plays a major role for me and which, in my opinion, separates the pros from the amateurs. Maybe it's crazy to talk about 'plot' in a sex story but this was simple, original and with characters I actually cared about. Keep up the good work.
Great Story Tina..... all the stories I have read of yours are excellent. Keep On writing :-)
What a terrifically entertaining (and hot!) tale. I really enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
she loves it when we do anal and I fill her sexy ass with pee. She loves having her pussy filled with piss too. I guess we're kind of weird because we love drinking each other's pee as well. Two wineglasses and she fills mine and I fill hers. She's not too salty, and her taste gets me so horny. And yes, we do give each other showers.
To think it all started when she accidentally peed in my mouth while I was eating her out five years ago. Damn, do I love her or what? :)
Let's just say that I enjoyed this story - ALOT.
This was the first golden shower story I ever read and I loved every word of it! Thanks for introducing me to my newest fetish. Your writing is fantastic!
Mmmmm how delish! Loved yr story I really did! I would love to experience what they did n more lots of fun thx for sharing. Xx
Fantastic story, but for a few typos and grammatical errors almost perfectly written.
Very hot, I’ve tried both fetishes, but alone 😥 so hot loading up with liquid then watching n feeling the arch of my pee up to my mouth n face.