All Comments on 'B&D 101 Pt. 01'

I was also very impressed by the way you structured your story; we don't see a Dramatis Personae very often and it catches the eye as something a little out of the ordinary.

It's a shame Mary's first experience wasn't what she was expecting, but that is so often the case; what is full-on kink to one is vanilla with sprinkles to another.

I look forward to reading more of her adventures in the world of B&D; thank you for writing and sharing this story with us and please continue - a very good start.

For the well written and unfortunate realism of it all. ;)

(Except maybe the 9')

You made me laugh FA.....(Except maybe the 9')

9' !!....bloody Nora!

Don't you just love those typos

Interesting start Texas, so be keen to see where you take it from here.

TamAto...tamahto...

It's still a...stretch...shall we say? ;)

Glad to make anyone laugh, MJ. For bonus points... Did ya snort your coffee out your nose?

TexasDM... Keep the saga cumming... coming...whatever....

No bonus points for you, but I did have a twinge of jealousy for a moment..:-))

Suppose I will have to make do with my 8' !

Finally something that reads a lot more realistic than what we mostly read here.

TexasDM, I wanted to say that I like your writing style, the clarity of your storyline. I am looking forward to your future submissions.

Long ago and far away, when my wife and I were experimenting and exploring different facets of our sexuality. We visited our local BDSM groups and quickly realized this was not to our personal tastes.

While discussing limits and rules, we were told about a recent occurrence {then}. An in-experienced, wanna-be dom tried to master an young, in-experienced wanna-be submissive. Causing her severe injuries and trauma. The idiot booted her out, ordering her to return in a couple of weeks when she healed up.

In shock, she tried to pretend that she was okay and returned to her job. Her boss noticed her discomfort and saw the wrist markings left by stupid's use of handcuffs. There is a reason police still use metal handcuffs as the markings left are a quick way to tell that someone had been recently arrested.

The girl's boss turned out to be a militant feminist and she dragged the girl to the nearest Women's Clinic. Where the Doctor's quickly determined that the girl was suffering serious internal injuries. The Boss Lady went ballistic and with her political influence, she got the police involved and toot-sweet, stupid was on his way to jail.

Between vindictive Boss Lady and the outraged members of the local BDSM club, who did not appreciate the attentions of the authorities on their activities, the asshole was whipsawed. He had to pay a huge indemnity to the girl. He lost his professional accreditation. Did some jail time and all in all his life was rendered utterly miserable.

As a widower, last year I revived my interest in the local BDSM community. But have lost all enthusiasm {again!} for participating myself after close observation. SSC is suppose to be Safe, Sane, Consensual. I think it should be modified to Safe, SOBER, Consensual.

It was frightening how many practitioners of the lifestyle, Doms and subs alike, abused alcohol and drugs. It was a real turn off to realize that many of the subs are prostitutes, faking it to pay for their drug addiction. And, how many wives had been forced into submitting by abusive husbands or boyfriends.

Evisceration of public medicine and social safety net means there are only budget hobbled, overworked police available. And most of them will not make any extra effort to help those they see only as drug-addicted prostitutes.

You make an excellent point, and tell a chilling story. I just want to ask why it would matter if the boss lady was a militant feminist. You make it sound like she shouldn't have gotten involved. What made her a "militant feminist?" Was it helping someone in distress?

I would hope that even a male boss who believed women were utterly inferior would have taken the same care and paid the same attention to someone showing obvious signs of abuse and assault. Sounds like the militant feminist may have saved the young woman's life - internal injuries kill - sometimes it takes a few days, but victims of such slowly bleed to death internally. Stupid got what he deserved, make no mistake. Sounds like he might have faced murder charges, had the woman's life not been saved by the "militant feminist."

Good writing, realistic beginning. Clearly, not everyone knows what they're doing when it cums to BDSM.