by TheDragoness
lol you aways seem to leave me with more questions than answers and thats a good thing. like why was she stressed out and like with any recurring trauma can some of her slaves not just switch off their emotions like most ptsd sufferers and psychopaths can do. and they do it without even understanding that they do it. keep up the mystery and yes i realize this is erotica but its ok to hold off on the sex as long as theres story to elaborate on lol
and yes i know im being picky but its a sign that you have your readers engaged in not only the sleezy parts of the story but the actual story as well
hikecraze- The next few chapters go much deeper into her past as well as bring out Drake's true emotions. There's so much to be explained, even from the first few chapters. Everything will come into focus, don't worry. :)
you ok your writeing there was almost every 2 weeks for a while and now almost 2 months and not even an update? is everything ok?
Hello all. I know it's been a longgggg while since I've updated, and I'm really sorry about that. It's been a really busy few months with college and family issues, and I haven't had the time I wanted t continue the story. I have started the next chapter, and it will be posted as soon as I can finish it. Again, suppppperrrrrr sorry for how long it's been.
I have read quite a lot of erotic tales on this site and this is by far the greatest I have seen. It is the perfect mix between magic and reality and holds what is now going to be my greatest fantasy. I already had a fetish for the submissive life, but this has increased it supremely. I congratulate you, dragoness, for writing such a wonderfully erotic tale.
It is taking her a long time . Not surprisingly .
All these domination stories face the same problem .
It is impossible to write a convincing ending .
He has been abused . Physically and emotionally . Badly .
The author can hardly suggest eternal love . ....
' Thank you darling for flogging me , stripping the flesh off my back ,' etc .
Unrealistic stories cannot have realistic endings .