All Comments on 'Can I Get What I Need From My Ex?'

4* for a good story line. But you have to clean up the POV switching. I am not saying the his/hers/third person is right or wrong, but you need to be consistent with writing the switch between.

Please continue the story though.

I had ex-sex with my second wife for a long time after we divorced. the sex wasn't the problem. We just didn't like each other.

To be continued?.........No, please don't.

Lots of grammatical/spelling errors and switching between POV and 1st person speaking spoils the story.

Please continue with the story, the switching back and forth at the beginning was not bad. But, when they were talking back and forth together it became a little confusing........():\