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Click hereThrough clenched hands and scrunched toes I held on, and maybe I might have even made it if that was all I had to endure. But then, for the briefest moment a bright flash filled the room.
I came before I realised what it meant, or maybe it was simultaneous. Biting my tongue, I stifled any moan as rope after rope of my cum was pumped straight into my underwear. Sarah could feel I was cumming, and was determined to mild every last drop out of me as it began to seep through.
I hoped nothing about us had given it away, that everyone was too focused on Sarah to notice me. Because if they'd known I'd just cum as a naked picture of Sarah was taken the last shred of respect they have for me would be gone.
"Alright times up." Callum put his hands on the siblings shoulders. "You've done to make it this far ginger tits, but do you really think you can handle me?"
For years I had just assumed that my first time hearing Sarah cum, would be our first time. I envisaged us passionate embracing, getting lost in the sensations of our bodies, and finally reaching a beautiful climax together.
My mind felt like it was finally clearing a little now that the tension in my balls had been drained all over my underwear, and the reality of my situation was beginning to hit me.
Callum had been as rough and forceful as Steven was, while showing just as much skill and desire as Lacy and Daniel. He came in with a ferocity, pushing hard against her and thus against me. I could hear him sucking and slurping on her as his hands worked her body and we were thrown against the couch.
My head was pressed into the back cushion as my body bent over, becoming a table for Sarah to lie back on.
"That's right baby, spread those legs open." Callum said. I could hear a faint rustling of clothing, were some of the other guys getting their cocks out? "Let's give these guys a good show."
I could feel as he entered her, not only did her body quiver in response but Callum seemed to be putting his weight into it. Somehow his technique must have worked, because it felt like he was getting his fingers in far deeper than they should be able to go.
"OooOohhh FuuUuuck Cal." Sarah grunted, harsher and more guttural than she had been. Like the others had only lightly teased her, and only now was she being truly satisfied.
"That's right ginger tits!" Callum thrusting in and out slowly now, still seemingly putting the full force of his body into it. "You love how it feels don't you."
"It, it's soo gooooood inside me baby!" She cried back.
'It'? Was Callum only using one finger? Was he trying to humiliate me by making her cum with just the one? Or was he getting her ready to take both?
It was difficult to stay stable as Callum slowly increased his pace, the wet slapping sound of flesh on flesh building to a crescendo. I kept my arms and feet planted as Sarah's body slid up and down our sweat drenched backs.
Even after just cumming the hardest I'd even in my life, I still felt my dick slowly rousing listening to their intermingled moans. The occasional flash didn't help, a reminder that there was a crowd of people watching and recording as my old high school bully penetrated my girlfriend with his fingers.
Sarah placed her hand over my scrunched fist, interlocking her fingers with mine. "I, I NEED to cum Liam." She admitted. "Is... Is thhaaAt ok-kay?"
She was directly asking me to lose the bet, to give in and let Callum get his mouth on her. I should tell her no, ask her to hold out just a bit longer. How long had we been like this anyways? Surely we were seconds away from the two minutes being up?
But then, she had made me cum hadn't she. Would it be cruel of me to deny her the same relief? I'd be giving away her first orgasm to another man, the man who had tormented us back in what felt like another lifetime. But, but it was just with his finger. There'd still be plenty of firsts for us to have on our own. A stupid little bet shouldn't get In the way of her happiness.
"Yes." I said, before my mind had a chance to change. I'd always said I would do anything for her, this was just putting that into practice.
Her scream was immediate and just as beautiful as I'd imagined it would be. Against my back I could feel as her legs locked together and her body began convulsing.
"FffUuuUuuuuccckkkk oHhhh YyEeessss!" Her voice was shaking as much as her body, her fingers digging into my had with a grip stronger that I knew she could muster.
In the middle of the throws of pleasure she slipped off my back, falling to the couch beside me. I looked down at her and took in the full beauty of her form for the first time. Her nipples were amazingly puffy, with small bumps framing her nipples perfectly. The smooth skin and beautiful curves of her waist drawing me into the space between her thighs, daring me to go deeper.
But as much as her body enticed me, it was her eyes I stared into. We got lost in each other's gazes, as we communicated everything without the need for words. My cum drenching my clothes and another man had made her cum, but this moment still felt perfect.
"I think I'll be collecting my prize in another room." Callum said as he lifted Sarah off the couch. For a moment as he walked past with her it almost looked like his cock was out, but my mind was still feeling a bit woozy.
I took a moment to pull myself together before sitting back up on the couch, realising my cock had become fully hard again. Daniel had disappeared somewhere, and Lacy was in the middle of taking Steven's cock down her throat.
I blushed seeing that, embarrassed like I had walked in on them. Even though they clearly didn't care if I saw them, it still felt a bit awkward just sitting around as it happened.
Muffled through the walls I could faintly hear Sarah's moans again as Callum must have begun eating her out. I felt like I should be there, watching as she came for a second time but my body was too exhausted to move. Thankfully Lacy noticed me and stopped sucking Steven to talk for a moment.
"Most guys wouldn't let a guy like Callum carry their girlfriend off." She said, casually sucking on the thick cock in front of her like it was a lollipop.
"I, uhhhh. I guess I'm not most guys..." I didn't know what to say, and the casual way she was giving head between our conversation was throwing me off.
"Mmmhh, Shluurp." She ran her tongue over his cock and stared at the bulge in my pants. "You're a fun guy Liam. Want me to take care of that for you? I know your girl won't mind."
I was already pretty horny again, and she was probably right that Sarah wouldn't mind... but no. Not only did I want my first time to be with Sarah, but I couldn't let them see the cum that was covering me right now.
"I, I can't." I said, trying to stop myself from staring at them.
"Come on babe, let's just go back to your place. Parties over here." Steven pulled her to her feet and left without even acknowledging me. Lacy followed soon after, giving me a wave and a smile as she left.
I was alone now, left this the faith moans and crystal that were getting a little louder... I should go check on her, make sure she's okay. But my body felt so heavy, and the couch so soft and comfortable...
The faint moans acting as my lullaby, sleep finally took me.
You might be writing for a niche audience, but people commenting that Liam needs to kick Callum's ass have gotten lost and ended up in the wrong erotica genre somehow. The idea of being asked to give your girlfriend permission to cum for the first time with someone else? Delightful.
Getting hung up on honor or verisimilitude misses the point of the exercise and the emotional impact of the story.
When writing about this type of scenario I think the style you chose is the right way to go. The characters and situations are so over the top that there's no way you can think this is really happening to someone or a true story. Once you know it's that kind of story it's easy to sit back, laugh and enjoy at the absurdity of it all without getting emotionally invested.
None of the responses feel like they are connected at all to people who have enough intelligence or soul to be living people. The bad guys are just purely shit people, and the MC is so naive that it's impossible to believe he could exist. Fails on all levels. Sorry.
The way Liam narrates the story is supposed to imply his stupidity or absolute naïveté. However, all it really does is demonstrate the absurd amount of trust he has in her, and the totally evil way both Sarah and Callum are constantly lying to him.
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I find it impossible to read this story. Whenever you present another chapter, I foolishly skim to the end to savor the vengeance Liam will wreak on the liars when he discovers the depth of their disrespect. I guess I should drop you—I doubt your protagonist is ever going to get his self-respect back.
This is pretty much a train wreck of a story. I liked the opening and the original plot. But now I am just reading and looking forward to the end, to see how it ends.
I like Callum as the bad guy. No, I don't like guts like Callum, but he is a good "bad guy" for the story. Sarah is a descent problem in this story, but I haven't seen any internal conflict with her. Ok, no problem: she's a bad guy too, but her character is underdeveloped. I don't think she really feels anything for Liam. She is not a conflicted character; she's a bay guy too. Eviller than Callum.
The supporting cast is good as bad guys go... no problem there. Perhaps Lucy is a wild card. Hmmm..
But Liam. His character is a problem. So far you have left him defenseless and clueless. Not totally clueless, but really just stupid and gutless. A good guy with no weapons -- not even real anger-- to fightback.
My hope is that you make this interesting soon with something Liam has or you just end it. Liam doesn't have to win; he just has to stand. But otherwise, this story is a trainwreck.
This girlfriend is a cheat and a slut. And Callum needs to have his ass handed to him (although he is not worth going to jail for). Liam is a weak person and needs to grow a pair and leave Sarah to her fantasies and sexual appetites. I mean she withholds intimacy from Liam and allows EVERYONE else to get with her? WTF? Leave that bitch and find a woman with morals and true love for him. Sarah will end up working at a gentleman’s club, trying to fill her lonely life with hookup after hookup. I have no sympathy for her character, and Liam is barely sympathetic as he weak and compliant. If Callum is such a bully in his early life, how can he buy into their bullshit?!
What a poor story, no way a Real person allow his bully to do all that.
There is no loving wife hère, she doesnt Care AT all about Li and how can a MC change this much in just a few plays ?