All Comments on 'Crowd Surfing'
by karabryn
- 9 Comments
Nicely written. I could almost feel myself in your place enjoying the thrill of being the only one naked in public.
I like that she had fun and that she doesn't really mind being naked in public. An empowered (not embarrassed) naked female.
This I liked, although I think I would have run a mile, its still sexy as hell.
I'd like to find more crowd surfing stories like this. I would really appreciate it if you could get a crowd surfing tag going.
That was really great! It was wonderful to see her thrilled at her exposure and to feel empowered by it. I loved how she felt safe in his arms and how she leaned her naked body into his clothed one. The idea that a naked girl can feel safe in a CMNF situation because of the guy is like one of the principles of BDSM. The idea is that the sub feels safe before the dom and trusts them with their willful vulnerability, and thus that vulnerability becomes empowering.
Though I found your avoidance of describing what the protagonist looked like... odd. Like, for being about exposure being empowering, it kind of fell flat when there was nothing to this girl to empower. Her situation was interesting, but she didn't seem to have much of a personality outside of what was necessary to drive the plot, and with no description she was little more than a black human-shaped silhouette. Like, is she meant to be a protagonist, or is she just a cardboard standee purely meant to push the plot?
Brings back memories of an old girlfriend. She got a rush out of being felt up as they moved her.
Love it when women love to be naked in public. Even those accidental flashes that really are not accidental.