All Comments on 'Decisions in Paradise'
by eroslit
- 9 Comments
This should get more interesting... please tell me there are sequels in the works.
The most compelling aspect of any story here on Literotica--at least for me--is the believability factor, which this story possesses in great abundance. As a fellow contributor, I want to thank you for taking the time necessary to compose such a highly detailed work. I salute your efforts!
Great character definition, good prologue, very nice finish. How long was the vacation? You really know what you're doing. I have a few chapters of my own to finish then I'll collect and read the rest of your submissions. If you get a chance read a few of my later chapters of "Any Chance" and give me feedback on my female/female interactions.
Fantastic pace. Not too fast. One of the better mother/daughter stories.
well written, great tease, just extremely erotic start to finish. well done